My Superpower Always Wants to Rebel

The imagination is too small. At first glance, I thought it was just relying on imagination to fight. There are also constantly throwing out new settings, which is very uncomfortable.

Dear readers, Li Xuansha is dead and won't live long. If she doesn't get clean, she won't have sex. Please feel free to read! What I want to write is a story about "a house full of drunken flowers and three thousand guests, and a sword that freezes fourteen states". The protagonist is dressed in bright clothes and an angry horse, wielding a sword to the end of the world. The core of the book is pleasure and grudges. Here, thank you to the new author! Thank you for your support

It's been too long to create a bee colony, your theory is so solid. Do you really want people to practice superpowers with you?

Things like superpowers are unreasonable. Once they are activated, it's time to use their domineering and powerful spirit to insult the world! Strong base! After reading Chapter 30, the protagonist's development of super powers is completely off track. The activated super power is obviously a gun, but the current performance is just like a primitive man who uses a gun to hit people. The most important thing to develop in this ability is the manipulation of media, the number of captures, and the accuracy of operation. The operating medium can be liquid, gas, solid, plasma, machinery, mobile phone (Xiao Ai classmate) The number of captures confirms the scope of the superpower's influence, such as activating the earth to control the enemy, activating mercury for simple attacks and defenses The operation accuracy confirms the accuracy of the superpower's influence, such as operating the atmosphere to deflect light to create a mirage, or attacking the enemy's breath, and using atmospheric pressure to crush people to death.

Activated objects can indeed fight on their own and do not need to be controlled by the protagonist. Using the analogy of ancient warfare, if you don't learn bee swarm, you just let the archers, cavalry, and infantry on the battlefield perform on their own. As a result, some advance and some retreat. When the cavalry rushes to the flanks, the infantry does not restrain the enemy's attention from the front, etc.; If you don't learn bee swarm, the protagonist can also give orders one by one by hand, which is extremely inefficient. ; After learning the swarm, it is equivalent to having an AI command center in the brain, integrating the battlefield information received by each activation, drawing the overall situation map, and automatically breaking down the protagonist's strategy and campaign goals into tactical actions, and assigning them to suitable combat units for completion. The protagonist only needs to assign tasks. Take flying swords as an example: If you don't learn bee swarm, there will be a lack of coordination between different flying swords, and the activated things will fight on their own, just like street gangs fighting in groups, fighting individually, which is lively but unable to concentrate the lethality; And bee swarms can group all the activated things Organize, form an organizational system, and fight methodically. For example, in Chapter 60, the protagonist directly uses the three-three system to organize an attack. The opponent will focus on one thing and ignore the other. The protagonist, as the command center, can seize any loopholes and not miss them. This is the difference in organization. The combat effectiveness is one level higher than without a swarm. In the future, when the protagonist becomes stronger, he will need more complex cooperation in all aspects of sea, land and air, and at all levels of strategy and tactics. If you don't click on "Organization", you won't be able to play difficult operations.

The title reads "My super power is always wanting to rebel"

Wait for the protagonist to kill Li Xuansha and give me a kick. It's too little. The protagonist is still in a state of suffocation. I feel uncomfortable watching it.

Although it is a very ancient revenge story, it is written very delicately and makes readers feel the same way. After reading it, they want to kill Li Xuansha. It's countless times better than the scene where the God of War was cheated and betrayed by his wife and brother.

The original text is in Chapter 28: The only thing that he found interesting was that he took the time to explore the boundaries of [Activation] abilities. Currently, it can only activate inanimate objects. When he tried to activate the anime figure, it turned out that the villain did not have the powerful magical powers in the anime except that he could run, fly, and speak dirty words. Li Pingchuan was disappointed and beat the foul-mouthed kid with a spoon before stopping the activation. This shows that activation does not bring too many additional properties. He also excitedly tried the super creations collected by Xuanniao, but found that there was no movement, let alone electricity or flames. He questioned his own superpowers: You boasted about your high status when you first came up, but why couldn't you activate them? "Master... You are only the first level, and your personality can only be used at the corresponding level. The bottle is too small to hold so much water." Li Pingchuan was dumbfounded. It turned out that he had limited the performance of his personality. He can only activate solids with stable forms now. If it is a super creation, it must be accepted before it can be activated. For example, after Iskheda releases her restrictions, he can activate her [human arsenal]. However, according to Sister Hua, each superpower can be deeply developed and the boundaries of abilities can be extended. What is not possible now may be possible in the future. As he increases his level, the level of personality he can exert increases, and he may be able to forcibly activate other people's belongings. Defection in battle! Come with courtesy! This scene is so beautiful.

Can't he reanimate his mother? 🙂

If the author has an outline, I believe the readers will be more confident. I have seen this kind of superpower classification a lot, but many authors don't mention a few at all, such as the protagonist's emergent system. Is there anything else besides?

Can you activate 🔥Fire, thunder cloud storm, steel sword, and a pirate aunt? She rolls on thunder clouds with her feet, and the ferocious fire above her head sets a prairie fire. It's so cool.

You don't know how to activate the ability. Let me teach you how to activate the enemy's internal organs and order them to attack the enemy. You can activate the enemy's tongue and eyes to attack the enemy. You deserve to have all kinds of slant door ways to activate the ability.

It's too boring, too boring, too boring. Revenge is so messy, you might as well write a family portrait.

What is written here? Why does the protagonist set up the identity of a time traveler? What is the meaning? I originally thought it was a fun article, but I didn't feel happy after reading these dozens of chapters. There are also various settings that are densely packed and complicated, but the presentation is very messy. I was confused when reading it. There are a lot of female supporting characters coming out so quickly, but it feels like they are just for the protagonist. The female supporting role is specially written to set up the crisis, and the emotions of the protagonist are also inexplicable. A time traveler who has traveled through the dead can have such great feelings for the family members of the time traveled, without any sense of substitution. He might as well be the original protagonist, and the family has changed and gone crazy.

1. Energy system Converts super energy into the energy form of the material world, producing the effects of sound (mechanical waves), light (electromagnetic waves), heat (including endothermy), electricity, and force. These effects also have the characteristics of super energy (can be understood as enchantment), thus having a surreal effect. 2. Creation system Use super particles to form a stable structure, and then transform it into the material form of the material world to produce super creations. These creations can have very magical properties, but their survival requires external input energy, usually super energy, but it can also be light energy or electrical energy. The higher the complexity of super-powerful creations, the more special and rich their properties are. An extreme example is the artificial small world, which in ancient times was called "Dongtian", which is an ultra-highly complex creation that can be independent from the material world. The development direction includes increasing the complexity of creations vertically and expanding the types of creations horizontally. 3. Emergence system Emergence: the emergence of new characteristics on an object, which can be understood as adding an entry to the object and adding a characteristic out of thin air. For example, if rainwater appears [Burn], it will still soak, flow, and gather like ordinary rainwater, but it will ignite the entire city it comes into contact with. Most emergence objects require practice to master, so superpowers only activate emergence of things they are proficient in, such as concrete, water, stainless steel, etc. The development direction includes horizontal expansion of the types of emergence objects and vertical expansion of the details of emergence characteristics. 4. Change system It can change the properties of things themselves. The essence is that super energy has an affinity for certain substances, so that it can be closely combined with them, thereby interfering with the properties of the material. The target of change superpowers is very single, and the development direction is only vertical expansion of changeable properties. For example, the "Paper God" plays with paper from beginning to end. Changeable properties include: kinetic energy (speed), internal energy (temperature), entropy, electrical potential energy (potential), melting point, refractive index, etc., As well as super energy characteristics 5. Psychic system The essence is the affinity and change of super energy to the spiritual body. The mental body is the most fragile of the three bodies. It is like the human brain, sophisticated and in control, but very fragile. The psychic system that acts on the mental body is theoretically very strong. However, the spiritual body of a person with superpowers is wrapped in layers deep inside the physical body and the super-powered spirit body, both of which are very resistant to external super-energy and particles. This results in that as long as the opponent's physical body and super-powerful spirit body have a certain strength, the psychic superpower will be greatly attenuated and the effect will be greatly reduced. Therefore, psychic superpowers are very effective for people who are much weaker than him, but as long as the enemy is not that weak, the effect is very poor. It is worth noting that although the psychic system is very weak in front of other systems, ordinary people do not have the protection of super-powered spirits, and the psychic system is very effective for them. Therefore, psychic superpowers are strictly controlled by major forces. Once they are found to be causing trouble, they will be punched hard! (You are the one who messed with my anchor, right?) Attention! The above 5 series usually cannot use life as the direct target of super power, because this requires super energy to have a special affinity for life. 6. Life system The affinity objects of super energy are the physical body and super spirit bodies, which manifests as the super ability to manipulate the vitality and super energy of oneself and the enemy. Rather than affecting the enemy, the most efficient way to use life-type superpowers is to act on oneself, because this way there is no need to overcome the opponent's resistance, and the energy utilization efficiency is the highest. For example: the "Suzaku" superpower inherited from the bloodline of the Li family in Longxi. The above is an introduction to the 6 series of superpowers. It is worth mentioning that many ordinary superpowers do not fight and kill, but participate in the social division of labor under the constraints of major forces and earn high rewards. Many black technologies in this society are created through superpowers. For example, using superpowers to make special materials can easily solve aviation problems; using energy superpowers to assist in achieving controllable nuclear fusion (which cannot be promoted on a large scale). These have created a large number of high-paying jobs for people with superpowers. Other divisions of labor, for example, the weakest psychic type and the life type with the least combat effectiveness, they do not need to fight and kill. They can live a comfortable, decent and peaceful life by being psychotherapists (dream therapy, hypnotherapy, suggestion therapy) and doctors.

It feels like there is no flesh and blood in the skeleton. The thirty or so pages contain the content of a hundred others, and it's like reading an outline.

At the beginning, there are mobile phones and relatives and friends who are alive and can borrow money... I thought it was a peaceful and prosperous age, and then look at the perspective of people in troubled times after awakening their superpowers and casually drawing pictures. Don't you think it's awkward when these are connected together?

Author, please remember, even if you are an eunuch, you have to wait until you kill Li Xuansha before you kill this disgusting CMG. Then, the pace can be accelerated. When chapters 70 and 80 are released, kill Li Xuansha to ensure that the first order is full. Otherwise, if revenge is out of reach, everyone will leave.

I feel that the author's imagination is not big enough. The protagonist's activated ability is very similar to the unity of heaven and man in traditional culture. "All things coexist with me, and heaven and earth are unique to me." The protagonist can do this "Activation ability owner" - "Lord of living beings" - "Ego theory" Directly from superpower owner to philosophical concept

Roughly evaluate the feeling of the first 10 chapters. One is that the writing is not deep enough, the plot is too routine, and some plots are a bit idealistic. It feels like a secret realm dungeon stream to me. You can guess some of the subsequent plots at a glance. I originally felt that activating superpowers should be able to write a lot of abstract and fun things. Spread out your thoughts. Be bold and abstract. I don't know how fun it is. Of course, abstraction must be limited. Otherwise it will easily break. Be bold when writing prose, otherwise AI can write almost as well.

I am a newbie and want to write stories that everyone will like. If readers find the story interesting, I will be very happy! ! I wish every reader great prosperity and great wealth~

What are you writing to send to me? The first place in the Super Power Awakening Admissions program will be killed on request, and in public.

The writing is quite good As for the early stage, it is qualified The setting is not old-fashioned The power system is also steadily entering The writing is also good There is also Goldfinger, a talkative person, to relieve stress Just asking about the early stage, I can give 8.7 Or even nine points Author, come on 👍👍

There is a game with a similar beginning to this one, but it's about awakening and controlling metal. Has anyone seen it? What's the name?

I just want to know when my sister will die

This classification of superpowers is very interesting, like the hunter's telekinesis ability. Are there any books with similar settings?