Come Again in Your Prime

A bit literary and pretentious! Very artificial. Once you are reborn, stop talking about missing your son and not wanting your ex-wife!

Many urban novels lack that kind of logic and rationality, and are extremely immature. The author is good at writing about cities. Many years ago, you would have insisted on writing about cities and now you are a master. I hope the author can become a god with this book.

The previous writing is quite good, but the recent plot of opening a swimming pool feels a bit hard-written. At that time, there was no national consumption brought about by income upgrades. The rationality was a bit reluctant, and whether it could make money was very doubtful. In short, it was not the best choice, and it was slightly niche and unpopular.

I feel like there are a lot of poisonous points in general, and there are always conflicts that make no sense.

No wonder my grades are mediocre, I see there are a few bad points now. 1 I used to like that girl, what a stinky fish and shrimp? It makes people fail to do well in the college entrance examination, spreading rumors everywhere, but in the end nothing is done about it, and they are left to their own devices. You can just ignore it, but the result is that it comes out of other people's mouths from time to time and makes you feel disgusted. That's all if it doesn't feel good, it has become a little poisonous. 2 Maturity is not about being a good old person. You don't even hear anyone who stabs you, and when you look back, you think you are not as knowledgeable as a young person? Including being fucked by someone else, finding a relationship to get it done, and then what? Even if you say something nice, it's better than saying nothing, right? Very cowardly 3 Reborn Wen Lao Lei points out that he doesn't tell his family about making money. Parents will only be happy when their children make money. No matter how bizarre the experience is, as long as it is not illegal or criminal, it will be fine. Can't we improve the situation at home? 4 As an unrelated old lady, even if she considers her younger sister, she won't always belittle her, right? Didn't she consider the feelings of your parents? 5 The person with the surname Zuo is a bit pretentious and confused. I am divorced and have a baby. Are you okay? Overall, it's pretty good. IQ is online most of the time, logical, and realistic, but it can't stand up to the early game, which is mediocre and boring. There are always poisonous points, big and small, popping up.

The plot of buying a factory building is not good. The protagonist actually has a lot of opportunities to make a fortune. With such a high risk, this kind of gambler may take the risk.

I have a strong sense of daddy, and I keep preaching.

You should first develop an APP such as mini games. Just like cutting fruit, radish tower defense. Accumulating funds and experience, the initial social software cannot be profitable at all, and the early traffic service is frighteningly high. It is difficult to get things done without the relationship with domestic operators.

Ever since the original owner of the factory came to make trouble, I didn't want to see it anymore.

The author's urban talent writing style has indeed gone downhill back then. It can be clearly felt that the character creation has drawn more references, such as the loyal roommate in the layman story and the bank teller who discovered the deposit. However, I still hope to see your original smooth writing style.

Author, you have been reborn and have experienced everything. You are not a Holy Mother. Especially the way you write chapters 91 to 92 makes you feel very wronged and makes you feel uncomfortable. It is too Holy Mother. Do you understand?

Come here to see me being tortured, get fucked by yourself! Forget it, I won't follow.

I think the author's best book is - Thirty Years of Reshaping Life, although it's a bit lame. Others are poorly written, especially the female characters who are not "attractive". I don't know if this is the difference between full-time and part-time. When you wrote the first book, you had plenty of time. Did you write the other books while working after graduation?

How should I put it? Compared with the previous books, it is quite inferior. For example, after being reborn, I mentioned the so-called Miss Li several times, but I couldn't tell whether you wanted to hook up with her or what you wanted to do. Then you spent nearly ten chapters describing how sad your parents were about losing the 280,000 yuan, but on the day you claimed the prize, you thought very hard before deciding to give the money to them. Is there something wrong with your brain? No need to think about it? Even if you give 28,000 yuan, you still have more than 100,000 yuan. There are many opportunities to make money. Do you really like to see your parents feel uncomfortable?

It's better to write urban articles, it's a pity to see Xiaokan's life

There are too many troubles. I haven't started a serious business yet and there are always those pressing things.

I particularly like the urban novel about the Royal Employed Cat. In my mind, Wang Zijun ranks first, Liu Yin Hua You Ming is second, Royal Employed Cat is third, and Zhou Mouniao is fourth.

The swimming pool really shocked me.

The swimming pool is undergoing surgery. It took me a long time to write.

Write a history. It's really hard to review historical articles nowadays. I really like the historical articles you wrote. I will definitely read the original version this time.

Chen Zi'er's business, management, emotions, and struggles are all written very delicately, and every character is very vivid. It's a pity that it's a eunuch. Come on!

Why didn't the author write anymore? What is the reason?

The book is completed with just over 600,000 words. Isn't it too little?

Have you changed your vest?

No more writing books? Does anyone know the author's other accounts?