A Second Chance in My Prime

That's a bit pretentious and affected! It's so artificial. Now that you've been reborn, don't bring up things like wanting your son but not your ex-wife!

Many urban fiction novels lack logic and coherence, appearing incredibly immature. This author is truly born to write urban fiction; if you had persisted in this genre for many years, you would be a top author by now. I hope this book will cement the author's legendary status.

The earlier parts were well-written, but the recent plot about opening a swimming pool felt a bit forced. In that era, there wasn't the kind of widespread consumption that comes with rising incomes, so the logic was a bit weak, and whether it would be profitable was questionable. In short, it wasn't the best choice; it was somewhat niche and unpopular.

It seems like there are a lot of flaws in the game, and it always seems to create some nonsensical conflicts.

No wonder his grades are so-so; now I see a few major issues. 1. He used to like that girl, what a piece of trash! She ruined his college entrance exam, spread rumors everywhere, and nothing was done about it, just let it go. You could say ignoring it, but she keeps popping up in other people's mouths to disgust him.

The plot of buying a factory is bad. The protagonist actually has many opportunities to make money, but by engaging in this high-risk scheme, this gambler might take the plunge.

You should start by developing small games or similar apps, like Fruit Ninja or Tower Defense. Accumulate capital and experience. Social media apps are unlikely to be profitable initially, and the initial data charges are incredibly high. Without connections with domestic telecom operators, it's very difficult to get things done.

He's too much of a father figure, always lecturing.

I didn't want to watch anymore from the moment the original owner of the factory came to cause trouble.

Author, you've been reborn and experienced everything, so stop being such a saint. Especially the way you wrote chapters 91 to 92, it makes me feel wronged and uncomfortable. You're being too much of a saint, you know?