A Second Chance in My Prime

A bit literary and pretentious! Very artificial. Once you are reborn, stop talking about missing your son and not wanting your ex-wife!

Many urban novels lack that kind of logic and rationality, and are extremely immature. The author is good at writing about cities. Many years ago, you would have insisted on writing about cities and now you are a master. I hope the author can become a god with this book.

The previous writing is quite good, but the recent plot of opening a swimming pool feels a bit hard-written. At that time, there was no national consumption brought about by income upgrades. The rationality was a bit reluctant, and whether it could make money was very doubtful. In short, it was not the best choice, and it was slightly niche and unpopular.

I feel like there are a lot of poisonous points in general, and there are always conflicts that make no sense.

No wonder my grades are mediocre, I see there are a few bad points now. 1 I used to like that girl, what a stinky fish and shrimp? It makes people fail to do well in the college entrance examination, spreading rumors everywhere, but in the end nothing is done about it, and they are left to their own devices. You can just ignore it, but the result is that it comes out of other people's mouths from time to time and makes you feel disgusted. That's all if it doesn't feel good, it has become a little poisonous. 2 Maturity is not about being a good old person. You don't even hear anyone who stabs you, and when you look back, you think you are not as knowledgeable as a young person? Including being fucked by someone else, finding a relationship to get it done, and then what? Even if you say something nice, it's better than saying nothing, right? Very cowardly 3 Reborn Wen Lao Lei points out that he doesn't tell his family about making money. Parents will only be happy when their children make money. No matter how bizarre the experience is, as long as it is not illegal or criminal, it will be fine. Can't we improve the situation at home? 4 As an unrelated old lady, even if she considers her younger sister, she won't always belittle her, right? Didn't she consider the feelings of your parents? 5 The person with the surname Zuo is a bit pretentious and confused. I am divorced and have a baby. Are you okay? Overall, it's pretty good. IQ is online most of the time, logical, and realistic, but it can't stand up to the early game, which is mediocre and boring. There are always poisonous points, big and small, popping up.

The plot of buying a factory building is not good. The protagonist actually has a lot of opportunities to make a fortune. With such a high risk, this kind of gambler may take the risk.

You should first develop an APP such as mini games. Just like cutting fruit, radish tower defense. Accumulating funds and experience, the initial social software cannot be profitable at all, and the early traffic service is frighteningly high. It is difficult to get things done without the relationship with domestic operators.

I have a strong sense of daddy, and I keep preaching.

Ever since the original owner of the factory came to make trouble, I didn't want to see it anymore.

Author, you have been reborn and have experienced everything. You are not a Holy Mother. Especially the way you write chapters 91 to 92 makes you feel very wronged and makes you feel uncomfortable. It is too Holy Mother. Do you understand?