My Castle and I Will Never Lose!

Introduction: I have so many stitches, but I feel like I can recognize them all, which is even more incredible

All I can say is that I can understand the introduction, and I can appreciate it as much as possible🤓☝, whatever, me too, then it's okay

It feels like the author used AI to create the content. You can often see missing words and strange sentences that don't connect to the text above.

Chapter 4 of "Temporary Return", stealing this. It's really disgusting to watch. Really poisonous. This article is all about the humanistic outlook of the Middle Ages, and the death penalty for theft (although the law is strict, it is generally recognized). This poor man attempted to steal, but he still had to be punished with a small punishment and a large warning (because this way he could give both kindness and power, and he could also be grateful). After all, this poor man was not punished for not doing anything wrong, but for attempting to commit a crime. In the end, the protagonist was innocent. What was given was that the protagonist was trying to win people's hearts? Although this can make some people feel the benevolence of the lord, it can also give most people the illusion that crimes can be forgiven. Because the lord is kind (people who are kind are bullied by others).

I followed this book when it first came out. At that time, I really thought the setting was super good, including the infrastructure of another world and the tavern in another world. At that time, I felt that as long as the author had an outline and wrote it well, it wouldn't be a big problem. After all, his territory could slowly develop, his troops could be upgraded, and he could even do wonders later on. The heroes summoned by the alien tavern could also be written to grow, and he could even play double-travel in the future. What I didn't expect was that the author could ruin it for himself. What failed was the simplest original plot. I understand that the author wanted to write about the prince's intrigues, but the more he wrote, the more he wrote. These things can be interspersed, but the author didn't expect that the author would force it on. It was to supplement the author's interpersonal relationships in the royal capital, and to write about the impotent prince's amazing wisdom (conspiracy). , The territory I was given to develop at the beginning, the infrastructure was upgraded and then it was gone. If it weren't for Hermione and Fiona, I would have run away long ago. I can only say that the author went against the original intention. The introduction of Cloud City and Sun Disk attracted readers who wanted to see territory construction, then Griffin and Dragon Kingdom attracted readers who wanted to see the upgrade of arms, and finally Heroes of Another World. , I really can't say enough in one word that there is so much to write about. The author himself insisted on writing about the conspiracy of the mentally retarded prince. It's not that he couldn't write it. It's because the author got excited about it and felt that he had written it very well. He spent a large part of it writing about the conspiracy, gods and other things. It's just messy. The author's writing skills are very good. If he hadn't written off topic this time, he wouldn't be like this now. . .

The author really can't grasp the big scenes. The plot falls apart as soon as it reaches the big scenes. The narrative can only be described as a tragedy. It's obviously a chaos of multiple forces, and the final effect is like a kindergarten fight. The author should practice more in this aspect 🙂🙂🙂

I thought the book was deleted by mistake. There are hundreds of books on the bookshelf. I don't remember the name at all.

The author's writing is too rough. Often the sentences before and after are missing subjects, and the scene descriptions are too jumpy. Sometimes the descriptions are completely confusing and give me a headache.

It's available, but there's a little explanation and the introduction is a bit confusing.

Why is the logic of many of the author's paragraphs so confusing? There is often no logical link between the previous paragraph and the next paragraph, and the author suddenly jumps to something else. I always feel like there are a lot of words missing between the two paragraphs.