
Oh No, the Witch Ladies Are Catching Up!
不好,魔女小姐们追上来了!
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 511k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Original Fantasy
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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It's actually quite embarrassing. Every time I watch this kind of plot where I sacrifice myself to help others, it's hard to hold my nerve. The main reason is that it is not rational. After all, whether it is centralization or decentralization, power must be given to the right people. The death of the protagonist is actually meaningless, especially since the book is still in the extraordinary world.
You reminded me of a book. Your introduction is very similar, but the protagonist of that book looks like an impotent man. I wish you well. The protagonist must not be a eunuch.
The name is like a light love novel, but the content is a long section of ChuII + Volaf-style sensationalism. Do you want to write a novel based on selling feelings?
Now I don't have any desire to watch or follow up. The content is boring and the pace is too slow.
It is recommended that the author read more about politics. In this extraordinary world, when collective power may not exceed individual power, power is always top-down, and the political system is always determined by the strongest person.
There are too many irrelevant descriptions... The setting is okay
After reading the first five chapters, the conclusion I came to in those five chapters is: I become a strong man, and then I can't bear to see slaves in this world, and then I raise a revolutionary who kills me to create a new era, and then I start practicing again? ? ? What brain circuit? It's simply baffling, you've eaten too much Sanlu milk powder! Is it equivalent to a rookie going through hard work and time to cultivate, open a sect and become the leader of a sect, then see that the sect is corrupt, accept a disciple, then let the disciple destroy the sect, kill himself, let the disciple re-establish a new sect, and then start practicing again? ? ? What brain circuit? This is not what eating too much Sanlu milk powder means.
The sense of instant vision is so strong that I can't stand it any longer. I've seen the same type of starting point and cats 🙂. Forget it, hold on and see if there are any different ones later 😁
Nice beginning
The first three golden chapters are really exciting. But later on, alas, it was really, really boring. I wanted to sleep. It's no exaggeration. 🙂🙂🙂 I wrote about the protagonist and wrote about other people, spending so many words on the supporting character, and this supporting character basically has nothing to do with the protagonist. 🙂🙂🙂 It's really boring and I can't stand it anymore. I basically wrote everything in the introduction at the beginning. There is nothing I want to see later. Boring, so boring.
Not interesting
Comparing it to water, the main character's plot is less, and the supporting characters' plot is irrelevant and boring.
It's too watery. It has 83,000 words, and maybe only about 40,000 of them are dry stuff. There are too many irrelevant things and irrelevant character descriptions.
After seeing the latest chapter, I have no desire to follow it. I feel that the plot is relatively slow. I am ready to read it. When Shura Field appears, I will read it.
The writing is so good that you can skip every other chapter without any problem. Where did the big parallel imports come from?
😅 It's too hard to write in one sentence. At the beginning, the protagonist is an emperor and has a world view where power is paramount. There are many ways to solve the problem. He has to sacrifice his own life for the so-called equality. I have to choose a method that seems very confusing. I'm speechless😅. Later, the cat girl, as an evil god, says that the protagonist steals his little sister's things, but the things are very animalistic. The character design is so broken that I don't know where it went.
It is recommended that you start reading from Chapter 92
The pace at the beginning is so slow that I can't stand it. Those who are used to fast pace can skip it. Chapter 92 happens to be when the male protagonist is exposed.
Chapter 1 I've seen this template countless times
There is something wrong with ten or even nine points. Where have I read this book?
I'll tell you a name: Apple Coffee, and I'll wait for someone to pick up the game later.
😭Why is it gone?
I came to see the Shura field after the identity was recognized, not to see the old man pretending to be young and playing house.
The title of this book is Harem, and there is only one female protagonist. Is it about stock trading? Tell me if you have seen it
Newbies, new books, please read them
It is especially important to read the new books. Brothers and sisters, please ask. The young author will work hard.
The pace is so slow, the highlight I want to see never comes
Like the title, it caused me to keep skipping reading. It always describes irrelevant characters. It can be described, but there is no need to write so much. It will be boring to watch too much.
Why does this introduction feel like I've seen it from Round Table Animation?
After reading Chapter 59, it's really boring.
The plot of the witch was just brushed off like this? ? The character list is a single heroine. . Um. .
Newcomer, you will keep doing this, right?
Fortunately, I took a look at the historical works, including the history of eunuchs. I will consider reading it after it is finished.
I also want to make some extra money, does anyone know how to make money?
Look at what these robots say, they can't even wash the floor.
I actually think it's quite pretty.
I like to read something vulgar and mindless, although there are a lot of typos. It's a pity about the eunuch. When the time comes, go and read the 🦔 and 🐱 original works mentioned in Yipin Book Review.