The Myth Begins in America

It has been exporting national sentiments, and the entire article is the author's yy

The subject matter is something I like, but the writing is too poor and there is a lot of nonsense.

I feel that the government is too weak at the moment. Is there no smart people in it? I have already described that the flame man is not afraid of ordinary thermal weapons. Later, I used the mayor as a bait and still used the same old tactics.

The character creation is too deliberate, and it is still as black and white as the story for young children. There are only pure good and pure bad. It is not in line with the colorful gray of the real world, and there is no layer or depth.

Does the protagonist not know that the Internet can spread this? What's better than spreading on the Internet

How should I put it, a long soliloquy, a lot of descriptions of boring little characters, twenty chapters, it's too long! You spend twenty chapters describing a useless person who doesn't even have accessories, and it's the most boring description, a neurotic murmur!

Think about it carefully, after these people learned about the existence of demons, the first thing they wanted was transcendence? Shouldn't we buy indulgences?

How should I put it? It's a novel with little creativity. The setting is mediocre, the writing is mediocre, and there are a lot of typos. These are not big problems. Mainly because of some common bugs, people who can't accept it really can't stand it. Two examples First Modern weapons have been severely weakened, take the ghouls in the book as an example. Without the military, the firepower of the San Francisco Police Department is enough to suppress them Second The humanity of the military and police. The first two battles against Chaofan can also be understood as the fact that they went to the battlefield without knowing it. After the incident got serious, it was okay for the soldiers and police not to think of running away, but they still went to die obediently. It's simply more obedient than a robot If you can't accept these two points, it's better not to read this book

I really can't understand the fight between the left and right. This subject is a mess of good cards.

This kind of behind-the-scenes leak, the good-looking ones are all group portraits, and everyone comes out to cause trouble. They are all rubbish and include private goods.

The extraordinary level is too low. He talks nonsense to mortals like a clown and will run away when attacked.

It is a Chinese tradition to change one's name out of fear or admiration to avoid suspicion. In Western tradition, what should be longing is the same as that of legendary figures. Moreover, almost all names in the West are related to gods, saints, legends, and emperors. To avoid suspicion, all Westerners will change their names. For example, the Pope's original name, Jorge, is a transliteration of George. This name also has a saint, and he is the patron saint of knights in Christianity, Saint George.

Subsequent chapters use AL to describe...

It would be meaningless for heaven and hell to be simply hostile. It can be set up so that angels and demons both "love" humans, but in different ways. Angels care about order and protecting goodness, while demons care about directness and punishing evil. However, angels will compromise in order to protect most of the good, and the punishments of demons are sometimes biased and have their own flaws. The two are a battle of ideas, a battle of paths rather than a simple fight.

I have no interest in the darkness of America at all. Please take a good look at planting a sacred tree in Tokyo.

In the United States, it should be about causing trouble. What the hell is it about punishing evil and promoting good to save the United States?

You told me that a Magnum-caliber revolver will only produce a small blood flower on your body? That thing is missing a piece of meat with one shot.

Everyone, there is a guy named Blitzkrieg SSS in the book review. He is obviously worth 500,000 yuan. Don't argue with him. Just report him when you see him. Reading a novel is just for fun. Don't affect your mood.

Why are there so many shady comments in the comment section, when the writing is clearly okay. Are they all beautiful? Did you feel physical discomfort after seeing this?

The subject matter is very good, but the writing style is hard to say. I can only say that I will practice more.

The United States is so big. Isn't there just one state? In San Francisco today, in Los Angeles tomorrow, and in Washington the day after tomorrow, I randomly ran around killing big capitalists and politicians. What do they do?

I don't know what the author is thinking, but the first few chapters spent a lot of space on a family of poisonous insects and the policy of legalizing flying leaves. Do you think I would feel the same way? I just find it annoying

It is suggested that the author add a paragraph to the settings about plug-ins in the previous chapters, that is, the abilities given to others by the protagonist can be withdrawn at any time. When the protagonist reaches the top, all the abilities given to the beautiful people will be withdrawn. Not to mention that those who are given abilities can be considered good people. After all, for us, the bad people in the beautiful country must be bad people, but the good people in the beautiful country are not good people. Can good people who are honest, kind, and brave and want to build a beautiful country be considered good people to us? I'll just say it bluntly, I am an ultra-nationalist, what's wrong? You just want to kidnap me by adding an attributive to me? It's not twenty years ago.

The idea is good, but the plot is too poor. The protagonist has no sense of existence at all. Even looking at it, the protagonist has no screen.

Drive high and go low, get two powerful bosses at the beginning, and then some crotch-stretching bosses.

It won't be the same eunuch as another book, right?🤐

To put it bluntly, this novel was not well written in the first place, and it got worse and worse as it was written, so I couldn't stand it and had to withdraw it.

This is almost the same as the other one. Even the title is similar. The protagonist of this book is named Bai Mu, and the protagonist of the other book is named Bai Yang😰

Just make a nonsensical appearance at the beginning of the first three chapters. It's a bit funny no matter how it comes. Do you believe that there are demons when you kill people and call you a devil? Then you can control others to commit suicide. Then in the eighth chapter, no protagonist appears again. Write an introduction and a family can be so long.

The writing is good, I like the slightly translated feeling, but there are quite a few typos.