I Build Jade Capital with the Netherworld

The writing is profound and immortal. Overall review: Top grade.

The writing is very appetizing. It would be a pity to cut it.

It's not that it doesn't look good, it's just a bit messy. The protagonist ran around and tried various ways, such as Netherworld, Taiyin, Sword, Fire, Ranzhen, etc. However, Netherworld, as the fundamental one, has not been significantly improved. What effect will the subsequent avenues have on the protagonist? Is it used to improve one's realm for fighting, or is it useful when reenacting the Netherworld later? Is the writing too cryptic and the layout too deep? Or is the author just thinking about it in his mind and we need to figure it out ourselves? When the author wrote the plot of the protagonist pretending to be a flower and willow demon cultivator and spreading infectious diseases everywhere, did he remember the title of this book?

The look and feel is very poor. At the beginning, the protagonist seizes opportunities and causes the old Taoist priest's family to be destroyed. Later, the protagonist feeds the old Taoist priest's soul to a human skin book and scatters his soul. The problem lies here. Except for the three words "Human Skin Book", there is no other side or explicit statement that the old Taoist priest is a bad person. On the contrary, the actions of the protagonist are more like bad. The beginning is more visually unfolded through the eyes of the little Taoist boy (that is, the youngest disciple of the old Taoist priest). In the little Taoist boy, except for the master who is a little crazy, the master, the senior brother and the third brother are all good, and all three of them were killed by the protagonist. Human skin books are not just made by oneself, they can also be obtained by accident. The author writes as if he came by accident, and the beginning is a bit poisonous. The author explained that this poisonous spot was created by an old Taoist priest with human life in more than ten chapters 😅 However, it is stated in the first chapter after the end of the opening plot that it cannot be so poisonous. Later we arrived at the Mountain God... Frog Fun! Author, how did you set up and describe the protagonist... He is simply a scoundrel and makes people have a very bad impression of the protagonist.

I feel like most current authors like overly emotional writing. Doesn't anyone think that being too emotional is a sign of immaturity? There are a lot of inner narrations, all kinds of complaints, and all kinds of inexplicable emotions in the book. Readers with a certain level of experience probably won't like this way of writing.

It's a very subtle feeling. Monsters don't look like monsters, and ghosts don't have that scary feeling. They are closer to people. People in cultivating immortals share half of their heads. The protagonist doesn't know what to do. I really don't know how to praise him. If I really have to describe it, I would say it is tasteless, tasteless to eat, and a pity to throw away. There are many books to read

It was quite creative at first, although it had some intellectual and spiritual effects, but when I arrived in the spiritual world, a barbarian and a golden man suddenly came to me. You could also write a monster. This was the thing before time travel, and it is still the same thing after time travel. Isn't that time traveling in vain? I can't tell whether it's time traveling or not. It just happened to be on the shelves.

The more I write, the harder it becomes to read. I don't know if you feel this way

From the moment he disguised himself to send food in the room, he was jumping around with a hammer and a stick. What on earth are you going to do? It makes me tired to watch.

It's a good idea at the beginning, but it's a mess later on.

There are too many things that have been repaired in a mess, and they are mixed but not refined.

Why not develop the world in the book? ? ?

To briefly summarize: the protagonist took the things belonging to the patron and drove the patron crazy during the counterattack. The crazy patron killed the first disciple and the second disciple. When chasing the third disciple, the patron was killed by the protagonist and saved the third disciple. The third disciple recognized the protagonist as his ancestor and the protagonist succeeded in occupying the magpie nest This plot is a bit of a good man 🙂

The author's creativity is very good, but the plot is inexplicable. It has the feeling of pretending to be smart in the old days, and the plot is advanced by refreshing NPCs. The NPCs sometimes talk nonsense and think that the protagonist is strong, but the "respect" in the description is fake. But I'm really short on books, and I feel good about creativity. I haven't read the latest chapter yet, so I'm looking forward to it. As for whether I am too picky or whether there are flaws, let others take a look. The author might as well read his own content from the beginning and get a feel for the plot.

But there is always a feeling of hitting here and there with a hammer and a stick. The protagonist has not wandered around the Netherworld's reincarnation path, and now he is practicing swordplay again.

There is too much nonsense, and he keeps writing a lot of inexplicable plots. Either the author is a female author or a new author.

After reading Chapter 5, I felt a little pitiful for the old Taoist priest. What he had worked hard for all his life was just taken away, just like Han Chuang who studied hard for twelve years to get into Tsinghua University, only to be replaced by someone else. I hope there will be a plot where the protagonist compensates the old Taoist priest in the future.

One of the characteristics of reincarnation is that the past is in the past, and it is a new life. Now there is no such thing as the mystery of the womb in reincarnation. If this continues, there will be fewer and fewer newborns, and there will be problems such as fathers and sons in the past life, grandparents in this life, children in the previous life, and couples in the present life. Is this really reincarnation?

I haven't read it in a week, and the storyline of the world in the book is not as interesting as the beginning. I feel like the author went astray.

I spent more than 20 yuan to see a eunuch.

Dead eunuch😡😡😡

Which female cauldron in the Huanxi Taoist Scripture Room took the protagonist of unknown origins with her without any precautions? There is another female ghost who is confused about her status and orders the protagonist to take action (saying that she knows she shouldn't do this, but because she feels sorry for someone, she doesn't care about offending the protagonist). She lifts the protagonist up very high in the front, and even a female behind him can rely on him 😥

This kind of falsehood becomes true, absorbing the distracting thoughts and dreams of all living beings, constantly warming and nourishing the living beings in the secret realm, entering reincarnation, throwing dreams into the continuous breaking and warming of the entire underworld. Those thoughts will continue to be washed clean and become the true spirit of everyone in the underworld, moving from illusion to reality, constantly overlapping with reality to seize its handle, from illusion to belief. God does not have a self, but is an image created by the thoughts and thoughts of all living beings. There is an illusion in the underworld that is transformed into a virtual world and hidden in the thoughts of all living beings. As long as the living beings die and their souls are thrown into it, reincarnation and the world will be induced. As long as there is a life magnetic field to nurture the aura, it will turn into a life soul, crush the ghost body and provide the conditions for the ghost world to turn into a ray of aura to become the conditions for the afterlife.

Secondly, I haven't read it for more than ten days. At that time, I read about Chapter 41, where a supporting character Nishang appeared, and those two chapters made me subconsciously think that the author was going to engage in a cliché plot, so I haven't read it for several days. I didn't expect that when I read it today, there was a reversal. The author's level is still praised. It is a really good book. I think it is a fairy tale at the moment. I hope the author will continue to work hard and update more 😆

Opening a new vest or something went wrong?

Wonderful, interesting reading Feasting on Incense, I feel like I am in the underworld and Beginning with Bu Zigu Both of these books are eunuchs. I hope the author will not give up and try to recommend them. They are guaranteed to be top quality!

Not bad. The writing style and charm are perfect. It's a rare good book recently.

I almost missed a good book because of this name

Author, this is my deepest confession to you. I have read three of your books. Although I have not read them on the official website, in order to tell you this, I subscribed. You are the only starting author I have spent money on. So, give me a chance. I started late in the college entrance examination this year. Even the past month I have been promoting your novel So So So If there are really many people reading your novel one day, please be sure to revive it.

A book of fairy grass can basically create a small school.