The Secret Realm of the Cave? I Just Want to Finish the Copy!

I've seen the same thing in Tomato. When you apply this setting, the normal points written later will keep chasing if it crashes. The setting of Tomato is pretty good.

Why is it that after more than ten years of world exploration, there is almost no start? As well as learning from others, learning is learning from others, but you have learned from it too much, right? Did you really know that the first copy was underwater? The writing style is much worse, and the parents are cunning... Well, I wish you will get better as you write more.

The protagonist is too stupid, but there is still no reason for stress. With so many skills, he is already inhuman. He shows his natural supernatural power. If his family is asked to buy a weapon, he will definitely be willing to buy it. It is very easy to pursue martial arts. Unless this world doesn't recruit troops.

1. I can't tell the priority. Most readers only read your book because of the copy. What do you list on the shelf? Has anyone commented yet? 2. There is a serious bug in the protagonist's starting capital. Instead of dropping it from killing monsters, it actually deducts dungeon decorative items. Not to mention other dungeons, the protagonist's dungeon can produce countless materials. 3. There is no experience penalty for brushing the book. The consequence is that if you arrange the protagonist to explore other things, some readers will say it is not stable, and if you do not arrange other things, they will say they are tired of it.

You can change it relatively. It will be better. If you want to change the time travel, it will be a high-quality product. Change it from more than ten years to a few days. Otherwise, this can only be regarded as a good product. It is far worse than what I learned from it. Although I don't like the fate behind it, but the writing is really good. If you want to practice writing, you can do this, but if you want to surpass it, you can learn from the world view at most, and it is best to write by yourself.

A novice copy has 100 chapters, and the author is incredible.

Why have a family? Can't you start as an orphan? I really don't want to see this kind of drama about parents being in trouble.

At first I found that the dungeon was actually okay, but later when I started to encounter the Shuifu dungeon, the author began to ignore the priorities. The purpose of brushing the dungeon was to improve attributes, to explore a wider world, and to get more dungeons. It was not to brush the dungeon just to refresh the dungeon. So the initial exploration copy must be detailed. No problem, brother. I will put it on the shelf later. I keep reading the same copy. There is no need to write in detail everywhere. I will write a few more sentences when I encounter important and special ones. We watch this because we want to see all kinds of strange dungeon features. We want to see the wonderful changes brought about by the world after encountering the dungeon, even the black box immortal technology. We want to see the magnificent pioneering war between the dynasty and the large dungeon. We want to see the protagonist go out and meet people with similar interests to start a wonderful adventure and exploration journey together. Even for the later rise, more talents are needed. Brother, we don't always want to see how many times Balabala has refreshed the dungeon and how many things he has obtained. There is no need to keep writing the same book several times. On the one hand, it feels boring, and on the other hand, you wrote too detailed about obtaining the objects. If the plot needs it later, you have to find a reason or travel far away to refresh the book again. Now it is a little more vague, and you can write it later as needed.

I want to see the protagonist download the dungeon, fight monsters, upgrade and explode equipment, not to scheming and scheming. From the time he joined the army, he has been grinding and grinding all the way. Will it be good to write results like this

There is nothing to say about the free chapters, but the pace is too slow. I didn't expect the water to get bigger after paying. I won't complain too much. After all, I still like to read the genre. If you still want to read the free chapters, go to FQ and watch them (I am the only player in the ancient world). Come back and give a like after reading it.

I have been reading this book for two months and have only entered two dungeons. I really don't want to follow it anymore I read this book just to see how the dungeons are upgraded. I didn't expect it to be so good.

There are more than 80 chapters before you can leave the Novice Village until you reach level 40! This is really ink.

The author has also written a book, won't your editor guide you? It's still so illogical. If it continues to be like this after you put it on the shelves, I can guarantee that your data will definitely be bad.

It was a bit novel when I first watched it, but it became more and more template-like as I read it.

It's not interesting, the update itself is slow, and the ink is dead. With slow updates, many problems will be magnified infinitely, especially Moji, which will be magnified infinitely. If you want to enjoy reading this book, you need to keep it for at least a year. For one year, forget it.

By Chapter 46, I couldn't hold on any longer and died of poison.

Chapter 32, doesn't the author think it's too much? Is it necessary for a commander to praise a new recruit so much?

Mad wasted my coins, what did you write?

I saw a lot of negative sentiment in the comments, so the author, are you a fan? Are you still writing? I think your plot is very good, very innovative and worth watching. It's important to stick to yourself. Come on.

Do you write or not? Yesterday's chapter will not be changed today?