Invasion of Alien Gods, All Stuffed into the Equipment Slot

It feels weird, I can't put it into words!

What is the essence of cool writing? First, the plot is compact, and second, the updates are large, so as to attract readers to follow. I just gave up writing cool articles before they reached the climax.

It's a bit illogical. The background of the world is similar to the wasteland, but humans can still stick to one side. There are 30 million people in a city, which means that there is still a basic order and combat power system. However, the protagonist, a novice who has just awakened the ability to register, is directly summoned to fight monsters. It is very unnatural. The protagonist does not find other more powerful equipment, so he directly uses a kitchen knife/stick to enter a dungeon with no information to fight monsters and upgrade. He has no combat experience, so he relies on the protagonist's aura.

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.

The subject matter is okay, but it always writes some incomprehensible things. The psychological drama of a supporting character can last two chapters, and the psychological drama of the protagonist can last one chapter.

To level up, you need so much experience to level up now, so how can others level up?

As an author who has written several books, why does the worldview insertion and plot advancement seem so forced and jumpy (readers need to figure it out on their own).

You brave man changed his name to adventurer without any sense of violation, and the reading experience is even better, so where is the brave man? 🙂 Adventurer's Guild, A-level, B-level or bronze, silver-level adventurers are much more pleasing to the eye than you, a worthless brave.

The subject matter is very good and the world view is also good, but the author likes to write some irrelevant content and make various remarks, all with a low word count. Kill monsters to upgrade, and learn skills to learn skills. Why does it explain so much background information and personal opinions?

The subject matter is okay, but the author is too bad, I can't stand it anymore, and it slipped away.

The subject matter and setting are good, but the writing is not very good. The more I write, the more confusing it becomes.

The plot is going well, and we have reached chapters 25, 26, and 27. Suddenly the theme disappeared, and then everything became a woman's inner drama, what a mess! ?

Cut half the number of words into one chapter, and it might become popular.

It's too ink. It's all rubbish. How could a very interesting subject matter be written like this?

I mean, the writing is pretty good too. Why is it written in such ink? It doesn't feel cool at all. Goldfinger is very good, but it doesn't look good. It's not cool. It's too ink.

To be honest, I have always found the title "brave" to be particularly embarrassing.

[Name: Mutant Steel Slime Body] [Type: Special/Body Remains] [Quality: Blue (Excellent)] [Equipment Conditions: Level 8, Strength 15, Constitution 12 Basic Attributes Strength +30 Agility +10 Constitution +20 Physical damage reduction +15% [Racial Skill: Physical Buffer] Improve the body's tolerance to physical strikes, falls, collisions and other physical impacts. Core Feature: Metal Resonance When you equip this remains, it will induce metal objects within a radius of 20 meters. You can sense the location of metal objects, and add [resonance damage] to attacks against metal enemies, causing additional true damage based on 10% of your strength. [Active skill: Metal Swallowing] After activation, your arms turn into liquid metal tentacles, swallowing a single metal target in front of you. If the target is a lifeless metal or ore: Immediately absorb its metal components, restore the corresponding health points, and provide you with a [Steel Hardening] lasting for 15 seconds (physical defense +20%) If the target is a metal life type: Cause physical damage to the target based on your physique value, and restore health points equal to 80% of the damage caused. Cooling time: 40 seconds [Defense Skill: Liquid Buffer] When you receive a single damage exceeding 10% of your maximum health, the liquid metal buffer layer is automatically activated: Will 30% of the damage is converted into a [metal particle shield] that lasts for 6 seconds (can absorb the same amount of damage) Cooling time: 25 seconds [Remarks]: Its remains are still breathing, and every heartbeat is an echo from the metal.

There is creativity, but Golden Finger is too complicated and random. As far as the actual effect in the article is concerned, it may not be as good as the simpler killing and looting, or extracting entries. Simple and intuitive. The writing is not vivid, the plot lacks the protagonist, the environment, and the interaction of the supporting characters. I like to write about what the characters think rather than what they do. As a result, each character is flat and not three-dimensional. To put it simply, this is a bowl of white rice. It is difficult to attract readers because of the lack of color and aroma.

If you have any comments about this book, you can post it here. You can also mention the types of alien gods involved.

There are two pictures of a woman who may be the villain's self-portrait, 😰

The Mirror of the Tireless Sentinel can create six Tireless Sentinels, and use the mirror to remotely monitor the area where the Tireless Sentinels are. [Name of the strange object: The gift of the cross-dressing boss] [Type: special/transformation props] [Quality: Purple] [Effect of the strange object: Gender reshaping] After activation, the strange object will completely wrap the user's body and reshape all external characteristics such as appearance, body shape, voice, and posture according to the user's subconscious wishes. The reshaped image can be any female image the user has seen, or it can be a new female image conceived by the user. Core Features: Deep Mimicry Physiological reconstruction: The changes are not limited to appearance, so that the user in the transformed state will gradually have a completely real female physiological structure. Breath shielding: In the transformed state, the user's soul breath will be completely shielded by the strange object. Negative Effects The longer the transformation takes, the more complete the strange object will be in the physical and psychological transformation of the user. After the superimposed transformation duration is 48 hours, the body will be completely transformed, becoming a woman permanently, and the strange object will disappear. When the user is Sean, he is immune to all the above negative effects. Remarks "I once thought this was just a transformation item, until I really became a woman."

Is there any kind-hearted person who can help me?

In the future, we can design professions, and set up professional organizations, guilds, academies, etc. Based on the capabilities of the Silver Human Race. The acquired professions and innate braves will give ordinary people a chance.