Lottery of the Heavens: the Peak of Internal Strength in the Opening Period

It's a bit baffling. I just said I wouldn't accept girls, but after two chapters I simply wrote two sentences and accepted Mu Wanqing. To be honest, the writing was too awkward, so I might as well not write it at all, except to make up for the word count😓😓

Suppressing the protagonist is very powerful. The beginning is different from the title of the book, which will cause readers to give up at the beginning. In 290 years, they can only become a first-class warrior. It made me laugh.

As long as there are no major problems among the gods, they can pursue it, but after reading Chapter 8, they still got poisoned and died. Readers of all kinds of heavens have their own favorite worlds, not just one, but definitely multiple, and their favorites are not necessarily the same. After you chose this subject, you actually wrote that the protagonist, who has two hundred years of pure martial arts and is at the peak of Lingbo Weibu, presented it to Duan Yu like a treasure. In other words, those who watch the world are accustomed to the protagonist having at least one ability or advantage that can travel in countless worlds. And what about what you wrote? You have successfully shaped the protagonist into a servant in the previous chapters. In the future, after becoming famous in all the worlds, you will still have to remember: Is it just him? The one who originally wanted to be sworn sworn brother with Duan Yu. Got it? This means that a person's sworn sworn relationship no longer depends on ability but on asking for help. This person is still a protagonist of two hundred years of inner strength.

After reading twenty or thirty pictures, in summary, the protagonist has the potential to take the initiative to be a little brother to others. When something happens, he will go first and go to his friend's store. However, he has no character at all, and he has no mood at all. He is really like a little loser. Really.

Well, I was a little sad when I read a reader's comment today. I felt that his criticism was against my three views, so I argued with him and then sighed at the end of the chapter. Unexpectedly, all readers also left their own messages. I have read all your messages. If you make a mistake, admit it and stand upright when you are beaten. The comments you all gave are very pertinent, especially thank you for the metaphysical message, which is very long but very pertinent. I am actually aware of the problem you are talking about. I have said it in a single chapter before. I did not handle it well in the early stage. I always focused on writing about the protagonist's efforts, but did not write about what the protagonist gained. Maybe this gave everyone a bad feeling. In fact, the protagonist didn't pay anything. What the protagonist gave Duan Yu were things that were dispensable to the protagonist. The protagonist lived in Duan Yu's house for two months in the early stage, and spent Duan Yu's money on food, drink, and fun. Duan Yu was also very good to the protagonist, so it was not a one-sided contribution. But because there is a problem with my description angle, it seems to everyone that the protagonist is paying for it unilaterally. This is my problem. My writing is not good enough and my writing is not good. But I don't think there is anything wrong with the protagonist's attitude towards Duan Yu Qiao Feng. Sincerity should be replaced by sincerity. This is the truth in my opinion. In the first world, there are indeed many problems. It is inevitable to write a book for the first time and have no experience. I humbly accept everyone's criticisms about the writing style, plot rhythm, and description of details. But please don't say that my attitude or the protagonist's three views are wrong, it will make me sad. Unfortunately, it is impossible to revise the first world now, so I will try my best to write the next world well. When I have time in the future, I will come back and write the first world again. Thank you for your willingness to read my book.

Alas, after reading a few chapters about Duan Yu, I really couldn't hold on anymore. I know that the author wants to write about the protagonist and Duan Yu sincerely makes friends. The protagonist is understandable and owes nothing to Duan Yu. But all I saw was one word - urgent. Anxious to become sworn friends with Duan Yu, eager to gain Duan Yu's favor. Readers all know that the protagonist can get more benefits by following the Destiny Child, but your description gives readers the feeling of just one word - lick! It's still a disgusting lick! The kind of licking that I was afraid of offending Duan Yu! There is also the protagonist's out-of-touch character. If he doesn't change it later, what's the point of walking in the heavens? The more people gain, lose, see, and experience, their personalities will change accordingly. If a diaosi lives a long time, he will no longer be just a diaosi. I'll take the first step, 886

The character of the protagonist is really annoying. What the hell was it written? The protagonist is like a licking dog.

I think the title of the book should be changed to "The Great Nanny of the Protagonist of All Heavens". After all, it fits the content.

I've read Chapter 8, what can I say! First of all, the data layout of the system is not neat and a bit messy, at least when viewed on the mobile phone. Let's talk about the protagonist next. He can think of going directly to Langhuan Paradise to wait, which shows that he is smarter! It's not a problem to pretend to tell fortunes at first, but but to directly talk about the Xiaoyao Sect (at least judging from the incident, it is a scandal), this is a bit speechless (counting the number of words, and it's a bit off-script). And he said it was a calculation. What kind of ability do you have to be able to calculate it so accurately and in such detail? Duan Yu still believed it. Even the story of Jianghu is more reliable than this, at least I think there are some problems with the logic on this point As for feeding Duan Yu a "toad", I am a bit speechless. The original work is that he was poisoned by the lightning ferret, and then swallowed the toad, fighting the poison with poison, and happened to detoxify the poison. If you feed it directly, you should not poison Duan Yu directly! (You yourself have written that toads are very poisonous and can poison people. Then if you feed Duan Yu, there is a 10% chance that Duan Yu will survive. Although he did survive in the original work, this is not the reason why you feed poison to people. At least you must give a simple reason in the article to ensure that Duan Yu is immortal, especially if the protagonist is a modern person) Being sworn to Duan Yu later, this is something I personally don't like among the heavens There are thousands of worlds among the heavens. If you are sworn to Duan Yu, how many years are you going to live and live and die together? Or are you planning to train Duan Yu to have a long life? If you don't give resources, you have character problems. If you give resources, if you are a licker, Anyway, I hate writing too many emotional scenes with the dungeon characters in this kind of novel, unless you are prepared to take them to transcendence together (I personally still like the protagonist Zhutian's team to be smaller)

In the introduction, the male protagonist is 178cm tall and weighs 55cm. He is so thin that he is like a lightning bolt. I am 180cm tall and weigh 100kg, which means I look burly. My colleague is 177cm tall and weighs 65cm, and he looks as skinny as a stick. Isn't it that you, the main character, have become as thin as a lightning bolt?

What's the use of drawing a bunch of books in the journal without changing the map and drawing a bunch of them again?

Wow, seeing a person is like never seeing a woman before. The poison is numb

This writing style is completely fluent, which made me feel uncomfortable.

After time travel, don't go back to reality, otherwise it will look disgusting, and don't play politics, otherwise it will be even more disgusting.

It takes two hundred years for one's skills to become first-rate. It takes five hundred, one thousand or two thousand years to become a master, right?

I saw a reader saying that he wanted to see the 97 version of Jiumozhi with all the bells and whistles, so I went to take a screenshot Wearing sandals and slippers, super fancy appearance

I'm 178 tall and weigh 55 kilograms. Are you writing about a woman? The protagonist is thinner than ribs.

Forget it, when I read Chapter 32, the protagonist said there was no heroine, so I stopped reading!

Too novice... Not suitable for me... Farewell.

Burn the kang, have a good time, collect and watch slowly

The new book "Fox Demon: Opening the Treasure Box from One Person" has been released. In the same way as Zhutianliu, the fox demon little matchmaker in the main world is the first world under one person. If you are interested, you can check it out, save it, and read it. Thank you all.

Open a post and collect raffle prizes. Anything can be used. I think it's a waste of time. I spend half an hour trying to think of a prize every time. If I don't have inspiration, I can't think of it for two hours. I'd better mobilize the power of the masses.

Level 10 piano is really not that high and not worth mentioning. It is the level for ordinary people to take exams. All piano masters are higher than this.

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Can you give me some sperm? I will always follow the drama