Simultaneous Transmigration: My Name Resounds Across the Heavens

Isn't this the man who gave Eri clothes to Lugou again and is still busy behind the scenes?

Apart from the founder, there is no one who is not a supervisor.

I suddenly felt that the reason why Dead Fire Sea was popular back then was because the names were easy to remember. Many of them still couldn't remember the names after watching them many times. The pirates' names were hard to remember but they took the initiative to give them easy-to-remember nicknames. The Shinigami just remembered the numbers. The Hokage just kept calling out the names and remembering them repeatedly. The names of the Holy Grail kings are so cute that it gives them a headache.

The first dozen or so chapters of this book were criticized too quickly by book friends. I can't help it. I always wrote this just to attract readers. First let the readers guide you on how to write most of the world, if anyone is interested. After reading more than 20 chapters, you will find that I am deliberately slowing down the pace. Basically, the pace in the future will be to either end a world, or to break off and change the world at a major event node in the world. So, don't scold me for writing too slowly when the time comes~

Tsunade is the only one left among the Senju. Where are the other clansmen? They have already been captured by Konoha F4 for human experimentation.

I'm really annoyed by this simultaneous time-traveling. I recommend several books every day, which are banned and unbanned, and appear frequently. The settings are all the same. You don't need to read this book to know this. Every time you finish writing a world, you change the world and write the protagonist. The key is that the same person is the same, or you can create a chat group to share talents and so on. The author can write which world he wants to write, the main line? Does not exist

The word "comely" is used. The protagonist of One Piece is over 2m tall. If you don't write a domineering face, you write a comely one.

Author, would you like to read the title of your book? To be honest, the 99 flow you wrote is neither irritating nor unpleasant. The title of the book is "Resounding Through the Heavens", and the content is all about the vests and the masterminds behind the scenes. There is no pretense. No matter how strong you are, you will always be submissive. I'm also speechless. If you're a 99-level player, you're so scared. When you're done, just go out and show off. If you can't beat them, just hide in the space. What are you afraid of? For example, Naruto and Pirates, you are almost invincible. If you don't mind, just put on a vest, and you can fight them openly and kill what you deserve, so there is nothing to be afraid of. The plot is to become stronger → put on a vest → become stronger. What about the climax? Let me ask you about the climax. For most novels, the climax is a show-off moment, and 99 Liu brings these climaxes together and uses very short foreshadowing (most of the foreshadowing has already been done in the original work) to show off the most exciting moments. It's not that I can't read Gou Daowen. For example, I have subscribed to all of Wen Chao Gong's recent novels, but they explained Gou from the beginning, and there are climaxes, but they are not particularly ups and downs. Talking about vests, there is no vest that you do like this. Others use the vest to cause trouble/pave the way for the main body to show off, or the vest to show off and then the main body suppresses the waistcoat to make it even bigger. What's the status of your novel now? The writing is okay, there are not many poisonous points, the plot is propulsive, the plot is reasonable, the protagonist is normal to become stronger, and there is almost no suppression and failure. However, the plot is too bland, too flat, there is no climax at all, resulting in it being like a useless piece of food, it is a pity to discard it.

The most important question is whether Shuangwen is unhappy. Too much planning. The beginning of the game is just a little better. Your Jiujiu Liu is fully shared, even worse than others that are not fully shared.

The sea of ​​dead fire is too dense, and there is no new life. As a time traveler without the innovative thinking of modern people, it is better to let the world feel the pain of the Chinese version of Naruto