Douluo: Both True and False

It's over, Tang San's reputation has actually improved now. Compared with the protagonist group that some well-known masters talked about, Tang San was actually whitewashed.

The main text is an ambiguous pseudo-harem, and the extras are a harem. Wan Ye's setting cannot escape the laws of love in the mainland. If you don't write the emotional line, it will be like death, disgusting. The inheritance of the three ghosts of the Huang family really allows you to learn the essence.

I personally prefer not to. The main reason is that the role played by the protagonist is the big boss in Sun and Moon. The Immortal of Wanye left a very deep impression on me, and inserting a love sequence would cause a very serious sense of disobedience. In addition, the plot of Douluo Dalu itself is relatively thin. Unless all 1,234 Douluo Dalu books are allowed to compete in an ultimate competition at the same time, as the book friends in the comment area envisioned, there will still be too little content. In short, as the Wanye Corpse Immortal from another world, you have to do big things, do big things. Of course, this is just my opinion. If you have other ideas, please feel free to post them below.

The most critical point of this novel is that Wanye has its own consciousness. If the protagonist wants to become a god through Wanye, he will be targeted by Wanye, let alone replace the law of cause and effect. The current Tang San is completely unworthy in front of Wan Ye. It would be more appropriate for the protagonist to become Wan Ye in the end, and he can solve the disaster he caused by himself!

I was stuck for a month, and the finale was stuck for a month. The results of this book were achieved through time and effort. There is no sense of satisfaction (it's almost like a Prison Age Douluo legend), and the rhythm is sparse (four hundred thousand is finished, a sentence of several years has passed, and the protagonist has directly been transferred from level 30 to level 90). I'm bullying Sun and Moon fans who haven't had a good experience, right? 🙂

Good guy, I really haven't seen the Douluo version of The Sun and the Moon 🤓 Come on, wake up, Wanye Immortal Corpse!

The behavior of Wan Ye in the original book is equivalent to the enlightenment of Da Luo. When Wan Ye completely completes the dream of Wan Ye (Da Luo Dao Fruit), everything is irreversible. However, with the efforts of the three true disciples of the past generations, the dream of Wan Ye has a loophole (there is a five-pointed star gap in the last dream of Wan Ye in the comics). The three true methods of the final battle are equivalent to the enlightenment of Wan Ye. Success will make Wan Ye Da Luo eternal, and failure will make all industry come to naught. In fact, the fact that Chen stole luck in ancient times and accidentally proved the existence of Wanye may not be a good thing from a macro perspective, because Wanye itself is the product of the abuse of cause and effect and was born in the distant future. Without these thousands of years of paving the way, the birth of Wanye cannot be stopped, and the world will fall into the hands of Wanye.

The War of Cause and Effect and the birth of Wanye are two different but interrelated events and cannot be confused

Advantages: I like the subject matter Disadvantages: There is a lot of room for improvement in the writing style, and the setting is inherited from the original work

Time is revered, space is king, cause and effect cannot exist, fate is king. Little Douluo Universe's play on cause and effect is a bit advanced 🤫

Judging from the introduction, we know that the author has never read the original work, or has only read some fan creations, and some marketing accounts. Otherwise, he would not even know the essence of the Ten Thousand Years Plan, and directly say that it is someone's conspiracy.

I felt that the addition of the heroine was a bit too deliberate, and it would have been just fine without the heroine.

I still remember when this book first started to be updated. The results are still very good among Douluo fans. But now he is basically dead. However, this is purely the author's own doing. The following is an analysis. First and most important. What is the relationship between the protagonist and Manyo? At the beginning, it can be seen that the author imagined that Manyo was the protagonist's kake, but later in the writing, Manyo became the protagonist, and the protagonist was Manyo. The protagonist even loses his subjectivity. The author just listened there. Some suggestions below. Do you really believe what they say? Taking in a heroine and opening a harem lowers Wanyu's status. Please. The protagonist himself is not Manyo. Why do you need Manyo's style? Manyo is just his friend. It should have been obvious that the protagonist wanted to take in Gu Yuena and Xu Xiaoyan. But after listening to that stupid suggestion, the author gradually integrated the protagonist and Manyo into one The second rhythm was pulpy. The pacing of the first dozen chapters is still okay. But after that so-and-so Sui Yuan appeared, the narrative rhythm suffered a devastating blow. The role of the protagonist is greatly reduced. For those who didn't know better, they thought the protagonist was Sui Yuan. After carefully describing the protagonist's cultivation, he only reached level 30. Later, it took just a few jumps to get my account banned. It's really outrageous. The third is the protagonist's death, which is not well grasped at all. Too strong. And there are no usage restrictions. It's not that you can't have powerful attacks. But there are definitely usage restrictions. Otherwise, why would the protagonist need to practice and grow? He could just use the horizontal push. But our book conjures years beyond. Directly let the years advance each plot with god-level cultivation. It seems extremely bland and tasteless. As for the thugs who use the Summons of All Industries, there are almost no restrictions at all. In fact, after seeing the war of years, Tang Hao and Holy Lord Abyss were still jumping around. I knew this book was basically finished.

You have to remember that your readers are basically here for the same purpose, so don't suddenly and stupidly offend the literary youth and get yourself killed.

The protagonist is becoming less and less important. Sui Yuan is now level 99, which is too high. You can do whatever you want. It has just been released and the rhythm is a bit off. Although your book is about Douluo and Sun and Moon Chefs, I have read both of them and feel that I am not happy at all. I want to The main character relied on the sun and moon's magical powers of cause and effect to fight with the Douluo and slapped him in the face. He was invincible at the same level and all kinds of fun. I didn't see it, but I saw the dog-leg prisoner relied on the selfless method to reduce the dimension. Shouldn't this book be about Douluo being the bones and the sun and the moon being the skin? It's a bit putting the cart before the horse, the author

So now there is only one cause and effect, Wan Ye will become a god. I feel that there is nothing written behind it. The improvement of the protagonist's combat power is meaningless. I think it is better to let Tang San, Huo Yuhao and Tang Wulin fight Wan Ye in their own era. The penalty of the causal rate is a must-try feature.

This is only chapter 31. The second cause and effect war began. The pace of the narrative is accelerating. It seems that the author also realizes that there is nothing left to write.

Pause: Time stops Fast forward: Time speeds up Slow play: Time slows down Replay: Time loop Time speeds up/down: Double speed playback Pull the progress bar: Time travel Timeline: Progress Bar Preview on the progress bar: precognition/retrospection Delete a certain segment: Time jump Insert a certain segment: Time gap Edit video: Timeline deconstruction/fusion (plucking the string of fate) Complete editing video: Destined fate Abolition of editing: Parallel timeline Delete video: Timeline deletion Change video: World line jump Cut other clips to make up the duration: Time loan The duration is too long, delete some clips and keep them as material: Time bank Original material and secondary creation: origin and timeline branches Play videos recorded in different time periods simultaneously: summon the same thing at different time nodes (time and space overlap) Disrupt the playback order of video clips: chaos of time and space Hover the mouse above the video: Eternity (detachment) Mask: Range time stagnation (from the comment area, it is also a kind of time stop, but the performance effect is different from time stop) Out of sync between audio and video: time afterimage Subtitles: History of the years (adding, deleting, modifying history) Editing sparsely: turbulent flow of time Cutting 1 (replacing the background): time and space transformation for some objects (summoning across time and space) Undo: time reset Positioning: time anchor point Multi-purpose card: sense of déjà vu Rewind 1: time reversal (back in time to a certain node) Reverse effect 2: Reverse effect is caused (the witch was burned to death - the dead witch was reborn from the ashes!) This may be difficult to get. Let's describe it this way. The ending becomes the beginning because of the process. The difference from 1 is that 1 is the video being played backwards, and 2 is the video that has been processed by reverse playback. Being burned to death. It is the ending of the witch, the process is to be burned by the flames, and the witch is alive and well at the beginning; the opposite is the cause: the witch is dead, the witch is burned by the flames, and the witch is resurrected intact! Assign an end-of-get out of class task, filters, stickers, transitions, templates, text, digital people, all equal to the ability of the time system

I think the author wanted all karma to fall, so he was punished😃🤭

Seeing as this is the rhythm of a eunuch, your monthly vote is in vain 😂 At the end of the movie, the protagonist's sense of presence is too low, so I had to bite the bullet and finish it.

Finish it quickly. How long have you been delaying? Even when you're hospitalized, you don't usually live like this. If that doesn't work, just open a new book and write about Douluo One and Douluo Four. Or write a Douluo II one.

This author is one of the best writers of Qidian Douluo fan fiction. Unfortunately, this book has not been updated since then. Miss you.

This book is awesome, don't look forward to it

Author, please at least come out and finish it.

This has almost caught up with the last update. What's the reason for this time?

Once the writing is completed, it counts as a victory, but the author seems to be unable to achieve even this kind of victory.

Come on, author, win the Easter match

Self-recommendation

The new book by Dazzling Super Buddha Emperor is very interesting. Everyone is welcome to read it~ Thank you so much to the author!

It hasn't been updated yet, and it hasn't even said a word.