People Are Covering the Sky, Refining Gu and Becoming Immortals

The biggest problem with this book is that it feels too fragmented, and the setting and plot are really contradictory. The protagonist is a time-traveler who has read the original work, but I feel like he only has a rough idea of ​​the plot. Also, the scene written above is so awesome that it is extremely grand, and then comes a fifth-level mortal level killing move, which is like punching cotton. Wow! The emperor takes action, wow! Immortal golden material, wow! The Heavenly Thunder Avenue is watered, and then the sixth-turn Immortal Gu + the fifth-turn mortal killer move. Just, very fragmented. There is also the scene at the entrance of the ancient forbidden land, where the protagonist helps Ye Fan block the dragon-marked black gold cauldron, which is very different from the setting of the original work. If Ye Fan could be beaten by the dragon-patterned black gold cauldron at the gate of the ancient forbidden land, I don't know where to laugh without looking so rude.

The writing is fluent Relaxed Kind and funny to the protagonist Nanny writing Not cool With the memory of the venerable, I still feel like a child, and even with all Fang Yuan's Gu refining memories, I can still be like this. The protagonist has no motivation. I don't have a strong sense of logic. The protagonist is always startled There is not much explanation for the plot, just react to whatever happens, and planning is scarce. Not Gu's calculating style.

Even though there is a motorcycle behind me covering my whole body, I still think, sir (author), you are really funny (this thing is not a killer move)

I have a few ideas for the author                         Cultivation ideas 1. The Gu world needs humane means (such as the Supreme Immortal Embryo Gu) to solve the conflict between Dao Marks. The secret method of covering the sky originated from Emperor Huangtian, and can be regarded as a humane means (such as the practice in the Chinese Cave). This shows that the cultivation system can be changed ( I remember that the secret method of covering the sky was the result of Emperor Huang Tian changing the rules of heaven and earth and planting seeds with his body for all living beings. Otherwise, the secret method would not be so easy to use)            Improve Qualification 2. The author can use the relic Gu as the prototype to develop a series of Gu Insects to improve qualifications (for example, use the five secret realms of the Dacheng Holy Body/other constitutions as materials to create a method for adding Holy Body qualifications to oneself, which can be combined with The Secret Realm Method, and the same way as the ruthless person to achieve the Chaos Body plus the Supreme Immortal Fetus Gu, after all, it is 'refining the Gu, refining people and refining the sky')                              Laying out the world 3. The protagonist has the ghost inheritance and the star inheritance, and can use the Immortal Mortal Gu and Zhidao inheritance to hold the empress's lap (there are four coffins in Wanlong's Nest. The ruthless man is now the fifth generation, and he is unconscious. The ruthless person achieved the acquired chaos body with the sky-swallowing magic skill in the first life, and the immortal heaven in the second life. The old body has been transformed into an innate chaotic body, but now it needs the Immortal Heavenly Skill on the Yuan Shen, otherwise it will not cause unconsciousness, and the ghost and star inheritance can be used as a hug)                       Winning allies 4. There must be many achievements of heaven in the venerable inheritance (the will of the stars, I don't believe he doesn't study Wuji, Paradise, etc.) And see if we can get longevity Gu (the poison of heaven, but it needs to be in harmony with heaven and man, for example, the long-haired earth spirit said, rely on the hairy people continent to produce longevity Gu). The method of extending life by covering the sky and the universe is still There are many, but they do not produce longevity substances, and there is no restriction by God (God restricts the production of longevity Gu in the era of the Venerable). You can win over a few Supremes who have not launched dark turmoil (such as Qilin, Wanlong, etc.)                            Enemy Methods 4. Among the Venerable Methods, the soul path, esophagus path and law path can be used in battle. After all, the body type mainly cultivates the physical body, the soul path has miraculous effects, and the esophagus law path can be used to brush path marks into numerical monsters.                       Targeting the Supreme 5. Against the Dark Supreme, Thieving Heaven's Stealing Life Immortal Gu steals lifespan, and Juyang Daai's blood path can specialize in qi and blood (there are also compound killing moves, stealing the blood path, air path, and stealing qi, blood, and essence). The Dark Supreme has killed too many living beings, and his luck has long been darkened. (The ancient holy body's health bar will be combined with a compound killing move to continuously heal and infinite energy, which will directly allow Ye Fan to speed up his cultivation. When the darkness is turbulent, Ye Fan will be directly controlled by the quasi-emperor. Then, with the blessing of personal Tao means, Ye Fan will directly go up and fight. I don't dare to think about that scene. I hope the Supreme is fine)                 Collecting resources 6. You can make a Zhetian version of Baohuangtian to collect resources (the author should not stress the protagonist's resource level, after all, eleven sages have inherited it, and I think the readers will scold the protagonist if you put the pressure). You can make nine-turn elixirs, etc., You can also introduce new ones, collect resources to practice Gu, etc.                       Develop forces 7. In the later stage, let the protagonist build a force to directly replace Ye Fan's Heavenly Court and bring the Gu world system to Zhetian. The conflict and fusion of the two systems are still interesting to see. Turn the Cave Heaven Paradise into a small world or the sixth secret realm. In the later stage, Ye Fan will not be left alone in the fight. It can be less tragic and it is also quite a training ground.                       Ye Fan's cultivation 8. Those who have improved his qualifications will see if they can get Ye Fan an innate holy body, a Taoist body, a beginningless inheritance, or a Canadian spirit body, etc. (You can also not add it, but I kind of want to add a hegemonic body, let's see what other readers think.) Ye Fan's main strength and blood path are to bring law, the strength and blood bars are multiplied, pure numerical monsters are like a powerful flying brick. There is also the great love of Wango, the union of Linu, Wango is a humane Gu insect (Youth version of his transformation) The ultimate move of immortality: endless bloody battles The more you bleed, the stronger you will be, and you can also use blood and injuries to heal. Immortal killer move: majestic blood The thicker the blood bar, the stronger the strength, and the upper limit of the blood bar can be temporarily increased. Immortal Ultimate Move: Return of Blood and Energy The blood bar can be converted into mana and energy, and what is lost in the conversion is also considered an injury. Immortal killer move: Full of blood You can be immune to special status at the cost of blood, and the cost is counted as injury. Immortal Ultimate Move: Blood Debt Repayment with Blood It can cause damage in return. If he hits you, he is also hitting himself. It depends on who has the thicker blood bar.                       Innovate 9. The world of Zhetian can develop many new schools (such as Dan Dao, Military Dao, Yin Yang Dao, Mu Dao plant medicine, Formation Dao, Human Dao with special physique, Luck Dao to seize the Holy Spirit's luck and the luck of heaven and earth, and Dream Dao. It depends on the author whether he can do it or not. If you want to play Dream Dao, you can create a simulated world, adjust the time flow rate, and absorb Inspiration from Wanling, let Wanling help the protagonist work) to create your own secret world (such as the ocean of collective subconscious, the Danta, the sea of blood, the sea of people, the long river of time, the wine pond and the forest of meat, etc.)              Questions about female protagonists 10. Single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists? Can the author write emotional lines, etc. If not, you can write about the companionship of Taoist companions, who will accompany you along the way. Just cultivate your power and add some cultivation to write, so that you can make it up (who and how many female protagonists there are) These are all problems. People like Zixia and Yan Ruyu who study physical fitness, or those who are married like Huo Lin'er and Longnu, and people like Xiao Tuantuan and Jiang Tingting. In Zhetian, it is best that the emotional benefits add up to be safe. Whether ruthless people want to do it is also a problem.

The memories of the eleven supreme beings add up to at least one million years, especially those like Hong Lian, who often uses Spring Autumn Cicada, and Ghost Demon Lord, who has a large number of clones and is still alive. I don't dare to think that the protagonist has any special ability to retain himself in the memories of the eleven supremes. Unless there are twelve personalities in the body and the memory cannot be understood, otherwise it is the protagonist who has integrated the personalities of the eleven supremes. However, I would like to see a protagonist who is both the Origin and the Constellations, as well as the arrogant Red Lotus Yuan Lian Stealing the Sky, the Giant Sun, the Ghostly Soul Paradise and the Great Love. Of course, I only accepted the memory a little bit, and only the memory of refining Gu, so I didn't say that

Have some people forgotten? He also said that the Great Emperor can only live for 10,000 years. Your Majesty does not have the longevity Gu given to you by God. Under normal circumstances, you can only live for 100 years Or it is dozens of times more difficult to survive than a natural knife. To survive for hundreds of years🤣🤣🤣

Skyhorned Ant: The ultimate in power, the force school; Nine-leaf Sword Grass: The ultimate in sword intent, the way of the sword; Thunder Emperor: The ultimate in thunder, undoubtedly the thunder school; Crawlies Tribe: control time and space, there are more descriptions of space in the treasure, Yu Dao; God-killing stone: hard, hit, less description, may be the Golden Dao; Qilin, seems not good at attacking, It has abilities such as precognition and auspiciousness, and is a school of fortune; Kunpeng: yin and yang, extreme speed, may be the path of change; True Dragon: represents attack, strength, as well as physical and mental attacks, very powerful But not as good as the Sky Horned Ant. Considering the Dragon Qi of the Imperial Path, it may be the Qi Path; True Phoenix: Life and Death, Eternity, Nirvana, may be the Wood Path; Nine Nether Dragon: Darkness, Devouring and Destruction, may be the Dark Path.

1. The inexplicable setting of the hatred of Tianxuan Holy Land is really inexplicable to the extreme 2. There are a lot of messy armors in the middle, just sew them in. Returning the entire Pokémon is also a Japanese novel.

Sha Xiao: "It's very simple. I just want to become a respected person. I already knew that the world would be difficult at an early age..." Ye Fan: "No one told me that becoming a respected person means reciting poems!"

You must know that the dark supreme beings who cover the sky are all trying to survive in the final analysis, launching dark turmoil, that is, for a few lifespans. In the end, all the lifespans that were finally obtained were stolen by the life-stealing Gu. It feels like all the supreme beings are going crazy 🤤

Good Luck Qitian Gu is my dream. You also need to tell more of your own stories. It's actually quite understandable for newcomers to draw Ye Fan for new books, but in the end Ye Fan doesn't need a nanny. You have to have your own story to get people to subscribe. Otherwise, if you drag Ye Fan through the original story in simple mode, why should I spend money? The creative ideas are all pretty good, keep it up

For the great love in the world, let's activate the fate Gu on the nine heavens and ten earths

The Tomb of the Green Emperor was really a failure, resulting in the protagonist being hunted down for more than twenty chapters.

At present, the protagonist is very fragmented and has a mixed way of thinking. However, the protagonist camp of Zhetian World is very upright. As a result, every time a major event seems to be great and upright, the protagonist will suddenly bewitched, but the integration is not good. The description is very confusing, coupled with some strong logic, it is like a piece of ginger mixed in when eating braised pork.

A venerable person attains enlightenment in each life, and by the way creates some secret realms of heaven and earth. As representatives of each venerable person, there are the marketplace, Danghun Mountain, Valley of Desolation, Gate of Life and Death... And ghost clones (Bo Qing...). In the last tenth life, Wuji: Millions of years of planning and saving, waiting for today Chao Wuji has eternal life. In his eleventh life, the Great Love Immortal appears, and the Spring and Autumn Cicada (if the later timeline is not easy to write, just send it back to the past to change history). The cold wind blows in the valley of desolation, and the Spring and Autumn Cicada sings. The young boy returns... Then in the 12th and 13th lives, the protagonist finds a way to sacrifice himself. Above

By the way, how about the Supreme Gu's combat power covering the sky, saint? The Great Emperor probably doesn't have one, right?

Does the author really like this kind of plot where the protagonist is doing nothing and then gets beaten up by someone who has no foreshadowing?🙂

Contributions are welcome for both poisonous insects and killing moves, and the author regularly adopts interesting ideas. Gu insects and killing moves are too complicated, and the brain is exhausted. Let the author copy the book review!

I don't understand, I don't want to ask for help, I actually want to help Mark. . . .

Cultivation Issues It is best for the protagonist to practice with two practitioners. The main thing is to be able to practice together. Your secret realm method can be used all the time in the wheel sea. It is not a big problem if it does not reduce the combat power. It is best to follow the Gu path alone at a faster pace. It is best to be the fifty-year supreme. Give Buried Emperor Star will give you some big love speed shock. Now it looks like there will be a holy body. After the body can handle it for six turns, let's start painting Dao marks. Wuji is very suitable for covering the sky. The flying bricks are all numerical values. This will be easier to write and there will be no sensory conflict. Short-term plot At the end of the Beidou plot, it is best not to take the imperial path. You can also not fight with your peers. You can't afford to lose that person. You have to fight against the supreme and high-end games. Only by leapfrogging to become a great sage and quasi-emperor can you look good. It will also have an impact on the world of Zhetian, such as Mengwang, simulated training, trading platforms, etc. (You can first build a top-level trading platform 'Gu house or Gu array', and organize a high-end trade fair for the forces with imperial soldiers. Gu Dao requires external materials too much. It can also solve the problem of the outside world's concern for the protagonist to a certain extent, collect materials, and trade to help practice Gu, giving them an opportunity to gain access to Gu Dao to earn resources) Later plot In the later stage, it is best to combine the two methods to create your own new method. The best idea for the new method is to combine the human body's Gu training with the blood channel's Gu training. You can use your own blood's divine power and emotional perception as the material, and cooperate with external objects to practice Gu. You can also use the tribulation to advance and practice Gu worms. Special physiques/bloodlines can be combined with physiques/bloodlines to train unique Gu worms when crossing large realms. (In the later stage, when Ye Qingxian returns to the chaotic ancient times, the protagonist gives the Spring Autumn Cicada, "The Spring Autumn Cicada reverses time by returning to its own body with its will and cannot return to the time when it was not born" or the will is resurrected and then goes back, so that she will not interfere and become a media protagonist and uses the Spring Autumn Cicada to return to the chaotic ancient times. While saving her life, there will be an extra plot to write) Training system Construction The Gu Realm has Heavenly Dao Marks (the ratio of Heavenly Dao Marks and ordinary Dao Marks is 1:1000, and any Dao Mark can be transformed into any Dao Mark. Any Dao Mark must be arranged in a certain arrangement and can also be transformed into Heavenly Dao Dao Marks). The Secret Realm of Zhetian can calculate the Human Dao, the Secret Realm can calculate the Human Dao, and Gu can cultivate the Heavenly Dao. This combination feels good, and it can also be regarded as a way to solve the conflict between Dao Marks. Without God's will, Zhetian can take off directly. Problem of the heroine There is also the problem of the heroine. The main plot of the writing is unclear (the rhythm is too chaotic, there is only one late-stage fight to fight the supreme, and the others are random). The heroine can be buffered. Now you can take Nannan with you and develop her into a primary and secondary person or an independent existence. This is the only way to conquer ruthless people. (Don't the ruthless people want Ye Fan to believe in reincarnation? Give ruthless people a similar operation to see if she recognizes it.) Wait for the ancient race to come out and see if they can marry several ancient princesses as the sons of the ancient forbidden area. This will not only solve the problem of female protagonists, but also spread the Gu Dao, as well as the research on the combination of blood and Gu Dao, and compete in the peak competition of the alliance in the later period.

By the way, can Master Gu's Gu last until this novel runs through the entire Shroud of Heaven trilogy? I feel like even if I play with the mechanics, I feel like I can just play it in Zhetian. The combat power of Perfect Holy Ruins is too high. When the time comes to defeat all magic with one force, the mechanics won't work anymore.

The author seems to be caught in the middle of the war of gods.

Eighth-turn ultimate move, Evangelion transformation Have you ever felt that you are not understood and care about what others think of you? Have you ever been alone after being injured and wanted someone to accompany you, but if someone really came, it would hurt you? People are inherently lonely, and the cornerstone of everyone's thoughts is different. Mutual understanding becomes a luxury. But the more impossible it is, the more people want to do it. This pursuit of the impossible is the power hidden in people's hearts. Evangelion Transformation, with Heart Gu, Mind Gu, and Loneliness Gu as the core, it transforms into a humane compound killing move, using humanity as strength. The power is directly related to the mental state of the Gu Immortal. The more Gu Immortal feels not understood and lonely, the stronger its defense becomes. The more the Gu Immortal cares about other people's opinions and the more it wants to pursue mutual understanding between people, the stronger its power becomes. And before the killing move is dispelled, all damage will be converted into pain and inflicted on the Gu Immortal. This means that if Gu Immortal can resist the severe pain that comes, this transformational killer move will not be broken! This is also the most powerful part of this move. Debu, let's experience this trick!

Is anyone watching? I feel like it's too messy to watch. The two settings are forcibly combined and weak. It's too messy to watch.

Are you more serious? ! ! ! ! !

The appearance of the Venerable later is a failure.

Dad, I've already called you dad, hurry up and update it😭 This is the novel I like to read the most😭

The character of the protagonist is too fragmented, and he is always beaten for no reason. It would be better not to come. After all, Ye Fan would be beaten so badly if he didn't come.

I saw the latest chapter and found that it has not been updated for more than ten days.

The author keeps doing sit-ups, which makes readers very worried. Can we make a good outline first? As long as you can do one per day