Psychotherapist at Tokyo Women's Hospital

I'm convinced, isn't the male protagonist a spiritual healer? Why go to the police? Forget it once and do it again. Isn't it a bit off topic?

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I feel that the book title synopsis and the actual content are not the same thing. A psychiatrist should do his job as a psychiatrist. Instead of going to the police station to be a detective every day, it is better to be a criminal police officer. I can accept having a career line, but it is obvious that people who read the title and introduction of the book are most likely not here for serious reasoning. The author should carefully weigh the proportion of space this takes up.

Change the title of the book. A more serious title is more suitable for you. It can be seen that the author does not want to be harmonized, so he writes very conservatively But the unexpected text is very beautiful. Compared with the pure benefits of the introduction and title, the text is more like 99% reasoning and 1% promotion of relationships. It is better to change the title to a detective type of book, which can also enhance the audience.

The case is quite boring. I didn't come here to watch this kind of plot. The main point is not interesting. It ends with the return of the Dragon King.

Psychiatrist in detective guise

Check the text, and in order to prevent the protagonist from being promoted too quickly, the protagonist's identity is a doctor

The writing seems pretty good, but I don't quite understand the story line, or the relationship between the male protagonist and the characters around him? Ever since I started telling the story of the male protagonist's life experience, I felt it was quite inexplicable and strange. I also know that I want to write things slowly and unfold step by step, but is your entry into the development of events too sudden? Foggy

Can you write Qingshan to death? He feels so unhappy.

The text is well written, but it is really rushed. One plot follows another, without buffering in between, and then I take what someone mentioned. The specific content is different from the book title introduction. The current short-term main plot can be seen to be centered on the truth of the death case of the protagonist's parents. Then, In the early stage, the case is used to drive the plot. The protagonist is basically from the perspective of a detective, and the case is used to advance the relationship between the heroine and the heroine. It feels like the cart has been put before the horse. At present, the plot of the case has always been the main part. Readers who are attracted by the introduction and the title of the book may not be able to stand it Then there are also parts of the main plot that are not explained clearly and are not satisfying enough. First of all, when the Momoka family is in trouble internally and externally, Miss Momoxiang can think of instigating another person to do it because of her conflicts with Kanto, and even provides him with a gun, but in fact she can't even eliminate the evidence. It can't be done (although it doesn't seem to be difficult to provoke other people to take action, but this young lady seems to have no such ability at all) and the kind of female imp young lady who slaps her buttocks and then stabs her heart every time is so classic, I originally expected the protagonist to punch hard, Then the male protagonist never showed much emotion, and I didn't stir up the feeling of resisting Aoyama. And based on the previous performance and reasonable inference, Aoyama must be connected with the death of Mrs. Miyano. It can even be said that he is the murderer based on the content of the book. Finally, it is said that his reasoning is wrong, which means there will be another reversal? It's easy to get bored if there are too many twists and turns. Also, since you have already started to get involved with the case of the death of the protagonist's father, you can bury some hidden links in front of it. You can also whet your appetite and satisfy the feeling of refreshment There is also the relationship between the protagonist and his sister. The protagonist is so smart that he has never doubted whether they are related by blood. There is something wrong both in daily life and system prompts. In general, it feels good as a mystery text mixed with emotional lines. The author has a good foundation, but the title and introduction of the book put the cart before the horse, making everyone think that it is mainly about emotional lines. Those who want to read mystery texts may not necessarily click in. I feel like there is something else to say but I don't know where to start. Anyway, the overall writing is very smooth and has no poisonous points. If you like mystery texts with emotional lines, you can read it.

The plot is too tight. Wouldn't it be better to slow down the pace and add some daily life?

Did I mention before that the male and female protagonists are not siblings? I forgot.

The protagonist's sister has a colleague in the police station who is a female copper and likes the male protagonist's sister.

Is this Tao Xiang still the heroine? 😥

The writing is so good, especially the description of food😌