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In the first half, one can tell that the author's writing skills are still there, with novel content and fluent writing. But later on, it gradually becomes outrageous, and even the characters are outrageous. It would be better to write a historical article, which at least can follow the personalities of historical figures. This book is not bound by a historical framework, and the characters are simply capricious.

I suddenly thought of the problem with this book. The author originally wrote historical novels and rewrote fantasy. However, the characters in historical novels all have prototypes and the characters are full-bodied. The characters in this book are too one-sided and have no character charm. Is it because the author is incapable of creating a character in his own novel? He doesn't have the ability to know how to send it! Especially when writing the protagonist, isn't it awkward to always be handsome in all kinds of ways? Has he grown? How do you make readers like a two-dimensional character, or do you think the author feels like he or she has a sense of immersion in it? The emotional line between the protagonist and his sister is so pale. How deep is the relationship between the two? Just say it by mouth? The historical Wen Chaotang's machinations are not well integrated into it, and the logic of the real world is used to apply the rules of a different world. The key is that this different world feels like the author himself has not figured it out. This leads to the logic of the writing being full of loopholes, and it is impossible to think carefully Only discuss matters. This book is really poorly written, no wonder no one reads it. They don't even have pirated copies, and they still cost me four yuan and five cents.

Loyal book fan I originally thought that my cousin wanted to hold back something big this time. The name, the introduction to the world view in the book, and the introduction of the characters are all involved a little bit, and the cultivation system relies entirely on elixir refining, which is a very new cultivation system. It's the same as the refining path of Mu Ji Zhenren in Nezha 3, and there are also the Classic of Mountains and Seas as the basis for the history of scenery, various alien abilities, immortal ferocious people, four great mythical beasts, etc. I started to feel that the pattern was very big, and it was very novel and interesting to write about. Later, most readers stopped buying it, no one followed it, and it lost popularity. It felt like the author started to speed up the pace, deleted many of the outlines he had originally prepared, and ended the text quickly. The world outside Fujie Mountain is not written about, and the various scenery and strange people are not spread out. I think the author originally intended to write about the different styles of different strange people and different worlds. The line "Mortals" is not mentioned. The importance of mortals, why we save mortals, do mortals have an organization to fight against aliens, do mortals resist under the rule of aliens, are there any organizations? Why does the protagonist betray his class? No mortal being of flesh and blood has written it. In short, I just felt that the response to this book was not very good, so I finished it quickly. In the last few chapters, when Gu came out of the well, he killed all the ministers around him. It was a bit like the scene in the movie where Zhou Chu eliminated the three evils, killing all the "pilgrims". Their "evilness" was deeply rooted in their bones, and there was no need to forgive them. At the end, it was originally a strange person, but in the end he was an ordinary person fighting against each other, ending the fate of all the strange people in Zhongzhou, and the contrast was full. It can be said that he is a prince, general and prime minister. Would you rather have the kind?

Well written, keep writing as you wish. Come on

Upgrading system: The strength prompts are a bit abrupt and jumpy, or simply not cool enough Character growth: It can be considered a high-level cool spot, but it is a bit slow, or too realistic and not dramatic enough? World view: It can be considered a higher-level cool spot? This world It's interesting to watch, but I don't know why, but it lacks some of the things that make people shine. It feels like the strength of the whole world is too different (but these are realistic, but not exciting enough. In this case, the upper limit of force value should be lowered), and there is no sense of an ecosystem slowly unfolding. But you can also see the details and customs the author added to the world, which are really interesting. From what I have read so far, it feels more like a traditional novel. It is a good-looking and interesting traditional novel, but it is not suitable for online reading. Finally, it's normal to have pain during transformation, and I think the future is promising 👍

In fact, this is reality. In reality, not everything goes as expected. The reality is that the protagonist will become a villain. It depends on whether the author dares to write it.

It is recommended that Se Ruduo be reinstated as a manager. Se Ruduo is a three-generation veteran who has worked hard and tried his best, but now he has all the infamy on his back. The bird is hidden, the rabbit is dead and the dog is cooked. Why is this! Why is this so! I am waiting for the scholars to strongly protest! Beat the drum and complain for the loyal minister Se Ruduo!

I really thought that once I became famous, I could just write a book without caring about the readers, right? Now that I am famous, haha, it feels so good to come back and flog the corpse from time to time. Watching the boomerang hit the author, it really makes people sigh that the cycle of natural retribution is not good, this is how it should be! This is how I can live up to the aggrieved feeling I felt when I chased Man Tang.

I have read the original version of Qidian for more than ten years and have subscribed to nearly 40,000 chapters in total. In Chapter 402 of the previous book, I asked where Huacai was, and I was happy to mention it for 50 years. I miss you so much 🐩Butler, help me save some coins.

In the words of Yuan Lang when he asked Chengcai, it turns out that the sentence did not enter your heart. In terms of the relationship between the author and the reader, it means that you don't take the reader seriously at all! So the overwhelming wealth of Man Tangcai is gone? So you end up hastily thinking that opening a new book will lead to another great fortune? How confident you felt when you were in Mantangcai and refused to listen to others, how weak you feel now that you are facing the current situation of no readers. The boomerang of history will eventually hit you.

Don't talk so much, give me back your capital, and we will forget each other forever

There were big problems with the operation and management of my last book, and I am currently learning how to improve it, because I don't know how to do this. If you are dissatisfied, you can tell me here.

Rt. However, the quality of this book is not very good anyway. There is no real history to back it up, and the plot cannot be promoted at all 😁 I wish it will be published soon.

A live broadcast of apology or a full refund for the book subscription are acceptable options. Li Longji cannot abdicate, and Gao Lishi's hanging is not too much.

Biao Longji's general looks like a dog

Quickly bring Seruduo back to the town and manage the reputation in the book circle well 👏

It's the same old saying. Chen Ping'an said it well, he didn't know he was wrong, he knew he was going to die.

Hahaha.

It's so miserable. The author voted for himself 3 times and ranked first

Since I'm writing fantasy, let's take Dou Po Cang Qiong from more than ten years ago as an example. One is looking for his father and the other is looking for his sister. Tudou is also cheating on Xiao Yan, but there is still a limit. Knowing that there is a gap with the villain, he must change the map to accumulate some capital before he can come back to save his father. Where is the protagonist written by the cousin? There is no need to accumulate capital, no need to sway people, you just need to keep mutating, you can keep competing with the villains, keep taking risks, and never die. It is simply a brainless and unhappy article, even more brainless than the brainless and cool articles of more than ten years ago.

Go write on the female channel! Learn more about history and what the concept of a general is. Not to mention a small investigator, even the emperor and the general have to be polite when talking. You go to the female channel to write it. The male channel is already a monster. Let the male channel go.

So isn't this thing supposed to be your dirty glove? After using it, you should give him some benefits, let him sacrifice to heaven, and give the people face, and then just finish the matter And then treat it coldly for a while, and nothing will happen. Or you can be more ruthless, give him more benefits, and let him stage a Chongzhen plan to kill Wei Zhongxian, which can divide and turn passivity into initiative, and also cultivate a new group of loyal fans As a co-author of your historical article, you don't even understand this? If you didn't have the courage, why didn't you just open a trumpet and pretend to be a sycophant? Then it would be more convenient when you cut songs, and you could just punch the trumpet to death without even giving any benefits. Your skills are worse than those who write funny articles. You also write historical articles. I don't even need to read your book to know what level you are at.

Did he lose so badly? No high-quality products? It seems

I was grossed out by the last book, so I can only say that it feels like it, so good!

If the book doesn't suit your taste, just don't read it. This book doesn't really suit my taste, and I haven't ordered all of it. Some people clearly don't like reading it, but they leave weird comments every now and then. I can still understand the comments once or twice, but it's really hard to understand if they keep reading. Are they really not trolls? 😅

Hahahahahaha, let you write blindly and seal blindly

Won't this book ban me? How big of a supervisor is Seru?

What about the author's new book? Could it be that he knew this account was bad and was planning to change his account? ? ?

You haven't even laid out the map yet, but scrawled the end as soon as a corner leaked out. It's not like your style, and it's not something a mature author would do! I don't know whether the editor asked you to end it as soon as possible or whether you couldn't bear the blow of bad data and gave up on yourself. If you still insist, you should ignore the data in the background and finish writing everything you want to write to give this story a perfect ending. If money is your top priority and you want to start a new book as soon as possible to make money, you shouldn't do this. It will be finished in such a hurry. The book friends who were still determined will lose another batch of those who have completed the order. And after this incident, can you still overcome your own psychology and continue to write excellent works after passing this hurdle? After all, you will surrender before you can get over this hurdle in this book.

After reading it to a full audience, I can only say that the new book is very good.