I Work as a Scavenger in the World of Cultivation

I personally have all kinds of flaws. For example, the most serious one is that the protagonist has a partner, regardless of gender and race. As long as it deviates from the original theme of the story, the book is probably useless in my opinion. At the beginning of this story, I thought it was just ordinary. When I saw so many negative reviews, I thought to myself, Huh? Does this book have so many bad reviews? Ugly? Then I won't watch it. As a result, I almost finished chasing it in one breath. Well, it seems to be quite to my liking! It's quite good to watch, the story is compact, the main character's perspective is okay, and it's not very dark or anything. I just want to ask, why are there so many bad reviews? How strange. However, if the author is not interested in making money by writing books, and it is just a hobby, then that's pretty good. After all, you can't ask for more beautiful writing. Everyone has their own preferences, and I personally can't appreciate what some great authors write. Some of the values ​​they convey are not what I like, so naturally I won't agree with them. I just want to say to the author, just write what you want to write. Anyway, in the end, it's hard to say whether I like the subsequent development or not, but I will try my best to support you.

The author's writing style is particularly poor Generally speaking, even if the writing style is poor, as long as the story can be told smoothly and smoothly, it is considered qualified. However, from the introduction written by the author and the main body of the story in the book, it is obvious that the author wants to write a "light comedy" This is difficult to handle. A bad narrative coupled with comedy elements makes it feel like Just like "The author tells a joke that can be told in three sentences, and he laughs in two and a half sentences himself" For example (laughter analysis): ①Chapter 3 The author probably wants to use a plot similar to "Hu Shi's Diary" to describe the protagonist who is addicted to drinking every day and does not work well, but when describing it in detail, he does not want to describe the protagonist It was written as a person who drinks alcohol all day long. At the same time, he also wanted to write some background settings, character clues, foreshadowing and other things. In the end, the original "diary" laugh point structure was written to pieces, which was particularly bloated ②Chapter 4 to Chapter 6 The author arranged the laugh points very densely in these chapters, but it is still the same question. Title: Disastrous Narrative The main body of the story is: the protagonist took a private job given by his boss because he had no money. After finding the employer, he decided to take action. The employer took the protagonist to find a group of cult members and started to fight against many. In the end, it was revealed that the employer and the cult leader were Taoist monks, and cults were just part of their fun. The humorous points prepared by the author for this story include: a The protagonist does not want to take the private job, but because the employer gives too much, the protagonist kneels down directly b When the protagonist arrives at the scene to clean up, he realizes that the employer has not started yet c When the employer does it, he imitates Xiaobai Wen and shows off d The protagonist is cheated by a shady businessman Man trap e The incident is reversed, the employer is looking for his family f The incident is reversed, the employer is not looking for his family because he joined a cult, but because of a trivial matter g The protagonist molests the two survivors when cleaning up the scene afterwards So where does the author focus on the non-prize Q&A, with all the above jokes? Answer: In the process of killing (fighting) by the employer...˚▱˚? This is a disastrous narrative where the author cannot distinguish the key points... ③The character of the protagonist planned by the author is: a newly graduated college student who cherishes his life so he chooses a safe career as a scavenger The character of the protagonist actually written by the author is: a fresh graduate who is lazy and lazy but has a good eye and a weak hand. He drinks every day after graduation and even affects his work. When I have no money, I blow my parents' gold coins. I say safety comes first, but I dare to accept any job without asking for money Summary: Interesting setting and laughter, but at the same time the writing is very poor. The author is a new writer with a lot of inspiration, and the future is promising (This is the real future, writing skills can only be practiced by writing more)

Aba Aba, today's home page introduction

Come on author, I am optimistic about you

To be honest, this kind of really funny books have really become a rarity recently, and they are not the kind that are filled with bad jokes. Okay, does the author have any other books?

All Heavenly Ocha is here for a visit!

Too fake. I was fishing at work, and I just found a private job (no danger) introduced by my boss and earned 200 monthly salary. Moreover, this boss and I have an ordinary superior-subordinate relationship, and it is not a private job only through special channels. Is this reasonable?

The writing is actually good and you can read it. Author, please update

The writing is quite good, I hope I can finish it

Congratulations, I got the poison😜

Today's update! ! Want to see

The author's writing is very interesting and very interesting. Come on!

It's so exciting, this is actually the plot I could see at the starting point