Extremely Germaphobic

There's something in the writing, but it's not very concise. I have read about ten chapters now, and the few chapters that show the "sick" behavior of those with mild infections can be reduced and integrated, reducing part of the entertainment content and part of the dialogue that cannot advance the plot. The behavior of the infected people who are "sick" should be shown in a "sequential" manner as uninterrupted as possible, and interspersed with some brief psychological activities or dialogues of the protagonist, I think it would be good. Anyway, I will keep reading. Give 4 recommendation votes, come on.

This opening chapter contains too much and is too long-winded! Metal Crack can be considered an old author, but he has not made much progress in the past ten years!

The author has great writing skills, but he doesn't like protagonists who are brainless and follow the crowd.

The whole journey is actually pretty good, but the beginning is too stupid. Do you have to invite a few fellow villagers to chat there? As long as you advance the plot quickly at the beginning, you won't lose readers. And people in reality are really not as stupid as you describe them. If several people go crazy, many people will be suspicious. You don't need to discuss it here, but where do you think conspiracy theories come from in the United States?

Is everyone running in such a panic? Everyone knows that the end of the world is coming 🤔

It gave me the same feeling as when I watched the beginning of Krishna's "Infected Body". The tense atmosphere was extremely realistic and had a strong sense of immersion. But to be honest, the protagonist is too ordinary. It is understandable that ordinary people would react. However, as the protagonist of the novel, this way of writing is a bit out of context. Seeing so many doctors and nurses rushing to the airport to escape, they didn't even think about getting information quickly. They chatted with a few old ladies for a long time and couldn't find their status. It seemed really anxious... I haven't read the rest yet. All in all, it is a counter-paced novel. This writing method will definitely not be popular among the audience now, but there are many old bookworms who will like it. Above

I saw Chapter 6 In order to escape, countless people flew in front of the protagonist like moths to a flame, one by one, people died on the plane, one by one jumped off the building... It was really a film of death... In the end, the protagonist was not in a hurry, chatting with fellow villagers, and filming a live broadcast...

The method of writing a book is completely the same as that of physical books in the past. It is super slow. The protagonist can be as ordinary as possible. It is hundreds of thousands of words. The protagonist is tied up from the beginning and forced to run around to trigger the plot. The writing process is the same as the latest. It does not have the high-shine and refreshing feeling required by web writing. It cannot be said that it is not fun. I can only say that there is too little fun. It is indeed the process of ordinary people's survival. However, if the web writing is done like this, a few readers will pay for it. The pace is too slow and the updates are not strong. I always feel that the author should read more books on apocalyptic literature with good results. . .

This book is very slow-moving, and those who have little patience will find it difficult to read from the beginning of the book at the airport to the moment when it is kidnapped. After that, every time the protagonist finds a way out, it will give people a sense of relief after all the hardships, but the crises and dead ends that follow will make people very disappointed. Overall, it feels like watching a "The Walking Dead" with a full sense of reality. It's really difficult for the protagonist group of three to be in América. Most of them are hostile to the protagonist group, and their favorability score is negative at the beginning 😐. Can you add some more people to the protagonist group? There were only three people but only one person, so the sense of security dropped sharply. When will the last monthly ticket 🎫 be updated 🤔

The book is quite interesting. If you are a newbie, I suggest you start reading it directly from Volume 2. There are not many people in Volume 1 with normal intelligence. From Volume 2, you start to look like ordinary people with a little bit of trouble. And whether you read Volume 1 does not seem to affect your understanding of the subsequent plot.

From the moment this woman appeared, something was wrong. These latest chapters also involve Qiong Yao, right? 😡😡😡 Otherwise, Lao Hei will be killed directly. You're not suitable for writing emotional dramas, you're just going to be a dog licker.

I just like the immersive feeling of being narrated at the beginning. Listening to The Book Thief makes me feel immersed in it. I don't know why people say it's too slow. Do you like fast food so much?

There is too much nonsense written. Can you please make it more concise? Who cares about all kinds of complaints?

It has the feeling and level of writing for a post-apocalyptic TV series

Uncle Metal is still writing. The last time I read your book was about Time and Space Paradox. Recently, I often think of the time when I was in junior high school secretly watching Carapace Frenzy and Heavy Assault in the middle of the night with my MP4, which can be regarded as a memory of my youth.

It's better to write without Carapace Frenzy. Chapter 11 is full of nonsense and I haven't figured out what it is.

I just looked at the first few dozen pictures. The fungus is only spreading in one city, not many people are infected, and the spread is quite slow. Do we need to blockade the airport and then conduct experiments on real people? Is this so radical? In the beginning, there were only 13 people who were immune, and they were violently experimented with. If they died, all the experimental subjects would be gone?

After reading Chapter 16, the author's writing is very strong, the pace is relaxed and relaxed, and the description of the airport chaos at the beginning can be said to be amazing, worthy of being an experienced author. But the problems are also obvious. First, after the opening crisis is suspended, a huge amount of space (almost ten chapters) is spent on transition and foreshadowing. Although you say in the author's words in each chapter that these foreshadowings are very important, the readers ignore this and just run away. Second, the protagonist is purely a camera during the incident, and his presence is not as strong as that of a crosstalk uncle or a video anchor. After more than ten chapters, readers still don't know what the protagonist's character is and what abilities he has. Third, the subject matter is so traditional that it can be said to be old-fashioned, and there is no unique selling point. This selling point may not necessarily be cheating, but it must be different from other similar works. The above thoughts are based on reading only Chapter 16. Perhaps these questions will be answered later, but today's readers may not have that much patience.

I feel like Uncle Metal will need to rest for a while after finishing writing "Jiu", and decide on the rhythm and ideas of his writing.        ，2025，，OK，，， No matter what the subject matter of the novel is, I think that if you want to continue writing it, you have to think about and explore it from the breadth and depth of the plot. It can't be spread out all the time and then have no depth. That's the current Shuangwen Shuiwen novel. The plot cannot be explored too deeply, as that would not be in line with the current rhythm of online writing. Most of the popular online novels nowadays like to practice this style, because the characters can grow without limit, various unreasonable processes and plots can be used repeatedly, and personal heroism is indeed very satisfying. If you analyze it carefully, what the readers really need is not the routine of cool writing, but the speed and rationality of the plot rhythm. Most of the time, it should be faster and more refreshing, while in the middle, it should be moderately slow and have more depth. The alternation of fast and slow rhythm of the plot can truly give people a sense of satisfaction. Literary creation is based on life. When it comes to science fiction and exciting stories, what could be more exciting and exciting than China's development from a poor past to a modern era of various high-tech weapons? There are too many stories to write about over the past few decades, and I think this may bring you different inspirations.

A genius who uses a tourniquet for a ruptured carotid artery. Does the tourniquet need to be tied around the neck?

When I saw 130 comments on Qidian, 14 book reviews on Gouyue, and the author was active in the comment area, I knew this book was available.

I liked watching the first part of "Escape from the Epidemic Area" better, but after leaving Houston, I found it more and more incomprehensible, especially the part about the island's administration, which was so confusing that it didn't make much sense.

Lao Jin, come on 💪 Full order, raise a hundred chapters first

From 15 to 2016, I have changed my account several times. After all these years, I want to say, 1, don't abuse the owner! Don't let the protagonist feel wronged at all. In reality, we have had enough. There is no need to feel wronged anymore when reading novels. 2. Level up slowly and defeat the enemy after becoming stronger. 3. Logic is important, but the author's success is the reader's enjoyment.

Lao Jin, why does chapter 411 jump back to 214 and 215?

Such a patriotic novel, you must support it and help China occupy the world💪💪💪

It feels like they are all describing foreign countries.

It's been a while since I saw how my grades dropped like this 😰. I'd like to give Zhang a monthly ticket to encourage me. The author's writing style is okay, but the formula does deviate from the current mainstream Internet articles. I suggest you scan the list to settle down. I believe that one day it will get better.

It's a rare good post-apocalyptic article. The narrative and writing are both great. Why are there so few monthly votes? The attention is so low. I'd like to contribute a few monthly votes. Cheers to the author.

Citrus-like blood cross infection pattern