Extreme Germophobia

This opening is too long and wordy! Metal Crack is a veteran author, but he hasn't made much progress in the last ten years or so!

The author has strong writing skills, but I don't like protagonists who are mindless and blindly follow the crowd.

Overall, it was actually quite good, except the beginning was so stupid. Did you have to have a few fellow countrymen chatting like that? If you had just rushed the plot forward at the beginning, you wouldn't have lost readers. Besides, real people aren't as stupid as your characters. If several people went crazy, many people would be suspicious. You don't need these few fellow countrymen discussing it; do you think conspiracy theories come from in America?

Is everyone running away in such a panic? Does everyone seem to have supernatural powers and know the world is about to end? 🤔

I saw Chapter 6 Countless people, in their desperate attempt to escape, died like moths to a flame before the protagonist's very eyes—clinging to the plane, some dying; jumping off buildings, others perishing... That was truly hordes of deaths... The main character, however, remained calm and chatted with his fellow villagers, while also filming a live stream...

It reminded me of the beginning of the Infected Creatures arc in the movie "Black God of War" back then; the tense atmosphere was created extremely realistically and the immersion was very strong. To be honest, the protagonist is too ordinary. It's understandable that ordinary people would have such reactions, but as a novel protagonist, this kind of writing is a bit out of touch with reality.

This book is a slow burner; those with little patience will find the part from the airport to the kidnapping difficult to read. Every time the protagonist finds a way out, it gives you a satisfying feeling of relief after suffering, but the ensuing crises and dead ends are very disheartening. Overall, it felt like watching a highly realistic version of The Walking Dead.

The writing style is completely like traditional print books—extremely slow-paced, the protagonist is as ordinary as possible, and even after hundreds of thousands of words, the protagonist is still stuck in the same pattern from the beginning, being kidnapped and forced to run away to trigger plot developments. There's absolutely no exciting, satisfying moment needed in web novels.

The book is quite interesting. For newcomers, I suggest starting with Volume Two. Few characters in Volume One are of normal intelligence; it's only from Volume Two onwards that they seem like ordinary people with some kind of superpower. Besides, whether you read Volume One or not doesn't seem to affect your understanding of the later plot.

Something's been off ever since this woman appeared. These latest chapters are even starting to resemble a melodramatic romance novel, huh? 😡😡😡 Maybe Old Hei should just kill her already. You're not really suited to writing romance; you're just throwing on a simp act.