Dream of the Red Chamber: I Want All Twelve Beauties

If you don't gather all the assistant hairpins, it will be difficult for you to achieve your great goal.

First of all, it should be clear from the beginning of this book that Byte's positioning of Shuangwen without any brains is clear. In this case, we can ignore all kinds of unreasonable things as blind eyes. For example, a leopard can bite heavy armor, and a horse can carry a strong man + a 120-pound sword + heavy armor and still move freely (the type of Tiefutu that is all heavy armor requires a special breed of horse , not to mention that there is a 120-pound sword in it...) In this case, it would be better to write it down. I don't know why I have to write about so many nonsense during the competition. Wouldn't it be enough to just win with perfect accuracy? No, no, no, wouldn't you feel that you were so cowardly that you couldn't hit the target, that you were forced to fight with a leopard, and that your arm was almost bitten by a leopard? It was a good write-up, right? And when you encounter an opponent who is causing trouble, you still show weakness for no reason, and you are afraid that someone will kill you with an arrow. So what is the meaning of heavy armor? Papery? Even paper armor won't be killed by one arrow... Wouldn't it be better to just shoot one arrow at a time and throw it to the tiger, or quickly get close and slap it to stun it and throw it to the beast? Anyway, you don't have to think about it. Can you please be more relaxed?

Chapter 14: See if you can stand it first, you are a bitch

The Red Mansion is so bad that I don't even want to complain about it, but I really like The Red Mansion. I haven't seen this book for a long time. It's an interesting Red Mansion novel. I hope the author will write with heart and keep up the good work.

Not a buddy... The title of the book and the gimmick at the beginning are very good, and it is understandable to lock Qingwen forcibly, but... Your way of writing is too outrageous Qingwen is just arrogant among the maids, and she is a little temperamental to the big-faced girl who is obedient to girls. But it doesn't mean he is stupid... Even if Qingwen badmouths her to ask for it, she can make the badmouthing part more serious, but move it before the male protagonist speaks out, and then the male protagonist insists on this, saying that it is good to ruin the family's reputation, otherwise Qingwen will get angry if the male protagonist speaks out. It's too weird, too witty... (And it's unreasonable that no one informed the male protagonist when he entered the big-faced treasure's courtyard...) Also, if you ask for Qingwen's reason, even if you write that the male protagonist is lustful, it will be better than the so-called rebellious emotional value of this kind of love (no wonder so Many people criticize me as a bitch, maybe it is really difficult for us to get this point) This point is really dissuasive. There are many other reasons, such as whether trying a second hairpin will be effective. In short, it is recommended to change it, otherwise this chapter will dissuade many, many readers.

How could a scholarly family have a name like Chang Wei? This name has too high a connotation and may have some derogatory connotations. It would be more suitable to be the name of a deputy general or a minor official. In addition to being a joke, the protagonist is very dramatic with this name, which is very dramatic.

The last ten or so chapters have been extremely boring.

One mouthful of an old man, it's disgusting

Starting from Chapter 35, it is really boring among boring. Red Mansion, Red Mansion, what are you looking at? Girls! Even if you want to write a protagonist who is pretentious, you can't do it without them. What's the use of having the protagonist hum and act arrogant all by himself for more than ten chapters?

When acquiring the ability to float on water, which is the ability to speed, the author specifically stated that not only are the legs and feet fast, but the hands are also fast. With this ability, there is a lot to be achieved. You know the author. The ability to float on water shows that I had visions of "Iron Palm Floating on Water" and "Divine Taibao Dai Zong". Also, I like to watch 7 Days to Die videos. I am a cloud player and have never bought any games. When the protagonist gains initial abilities, and even suffers for more meritorious deeds, without caring about being injured, what I think is, it is better to be stronger. As the saying goes, the rich rely on technology, and the poor rely on mutation. No matter what the genre, a certain amount of strength is still necessary. I can restore a little blood in five seconds, am I afraid of being injured? Who would give me this hard work! When we capture three camps, there are animals and people. Both of them will attack the protagonist, and other forces will fight against the protagonist for animals. This looks even more familiar to me: Let go of my flesh, you damn zombie, I killed you! And in the plot, what I think about is: perception! This is definitely perception! When the protagonist abandoned the camp and went alone to inquire for information and set fire, what I was thinking about was: Get/Clean/Gather? And stealth! You don't wear thief-type clothes, you don't prepare too many Molotov cocktails, and you borrow a torch, so you dare to play high-level missions. It's too reckless! Oh, it's an open space, so that's okay. If you can't fight, you can still run. Is it just my fantasy to excite myself or whatever, as long as it brings happiness.