Buddha, Gunpowder, and the Transcendent Ming Dynasty

Since it is not a Buddha in the eyes of ordinary people, why do you still have to use the word "Buddha"? People who like Buddhism don't want to read it, and people who don't like Buddhism don't want to read it either.

I haven't read it yet, has Shen Nong told me what the protagonist is planning to do? Is it technology with one hand and extraordinary with the other, uniting the majority? Or will he be extraordinary alone and take over the world by himself? Or maybe he joins Mr. Zhao in running a factory and whipping tops with a whip?

The creativity is there, but the logic is poor. The protagonist is a puppet of the plot, and is completely pushed by the plot. He has no normal subjective thinking! For example, the skills can be obtained from the possessed noble girl, but there are so many mindless plots. The reason why Mystery is a classic is because the protagonist takes the readers to experience and explore the plot. However, the book is secretive in the details that should be written, and there are many plots that should not be written! The Eight Great Divine Mantras of Taoism can be used, and the simple six-character Great Ming Mantra Heart Sutra of Buddhism can be understood by all college students, right? Why not give it a try or buy some Buddhist scriptures from this world and study them for a while! What I see is a rigid development logic in order to have a plot to write! The background, the behavioral choices that the protagonist should have, and the plot are developed based on this, rather than using the protagonist as a puppet to develop the plot, because the reader is the protagonist, and the puppet protagonist is equivalent to the puppet reader. How can any reader like it?

It's well written, but it feels a bit too empty

The writing is quite good, but at the current starting point, it might be difficult to put it on the shelves.

It is similar to the feeling of college students going to the battlefield during the Anti-Japanese War. Apart from peeing and wasting bullets, the compassion in the head cannot cover up the hypocrisy in the bones.

You might as well let AI write the article. You can write it yourself, knocking here and touching there, and there is no main line.

The writing is eloquent, the level is not very good, and he also likes to engage in literary youth, so he likes to use montage techniques, right? It's written here and there.

You don't want to write about a time-traveler. It's really like an aboriginal who bears the name of a time-traveler. He just knows some modern things. I can't see modern thinking at all. The main character you write is startled and seems to be a child. His mind is not right. He has been a child for decades and has not seen any growth.

I can't say it's bad, but I can't say it's good either. It looks very scattered and feels empty. Typical of opening high and moving low, especially the protagonist's ability to start a team is really speechless. It perfectly explains the operation from diamond to silver. What's even more speechless is that he is still cheating.