Wizard: Toward the Stars

I've never seen the Witcher Stars novel. The wizarding civilization enters the starry sky. The wizarding articles I have read are all about plane flow (because they are all about flat-earth theory), and so far I have not seen any stories about going to the stars and leaving one's own planet to explore the universe.

I understand, it is a spiritual civilization, people who take the path of spiritual ascension, and then call themselves wizards and witchcraft

I found that the protagonist is so kind. It is not like the wizard's concept of equal exchange. All knowledge is given to others for free. You know that in the wizard world, knowledge is precious and must have the same thing to exchange. Well, then I won't read it. I wish the protagonist first, and he will become a great saint in the wizard world.

On a green-skinned but highly feasible nuclear power reactor, it is faster, faster and more cost-effective. Daily operation requires 6 to 12 10,000-ton fusion bombs

The summary is that I can't sit still and it's very awkward to watch First of all, from the perspective of the protagonist, these new theories, new technologies, and the emergence of geniuses are too designed and mechanical, with not enough foreshadowing, and not enough convincing explanations, including the technological progress in the mortal world that is also very abrupt, sudden, and stiff. The traditional and ignorant medieval atmosphere was created at the beginning. Changing the map twice is so abrupt that it is close to the industrial revolution. Although there is an explanation, the two-sentence explanation really doesn't make the impression much better. It's completely like shooting the arrow first and then drawing the rake, but only the red heart in the middle is drawn on the target, and the outer rings are not drawn at all But if you put it on a civilized scale, from the perspective of the stars, the period is mixed The description of a large number of strange interpersonal plots seems too delayed and unnecessary. It can even be said to be retro, because under the novel concept of playing with the stars in the guise of a wizard, the plots of a saint who abuses mortals in front of others, the darkness of the church, and the inescapable orphanage are simply a bit retro. It's time to get drunk. On the contrary, the plot of a classmate's poisoning is more in line with the atmosphere However, these contents are all mixed together in a blur of time due to almost no transitions. It's completely unsettling in one breath. You must move when you want to lose your mind. Brain, when I wanted to use my brain, I ran into a plot that required me to lose my brain (Actually, I can tolerate Akali's private goods. After all, I can completely understand this little idea, but the above problems really affect my reading experience, so I specifically bring them up.

This shit, I said it was a fairy tale. On the surface, it says that wizards are actually elite individuals. Ordinary people are just fertilizer for elite individuals.

It feels like the author just wanted to write about the stars, but the development was too fast in the early stage. Even some people and things, emotional relationships, gods, generals, geniuses, and time relationships are very vague, or even mentioned in one stroke. It feels like they are going directly to a certain node goal in the outline, without taking into account the coherence and rationality of the intermediate content. To sum up, the author is eager to achieve a certain goal in the outline, and goes straight to it, too fast, without thinking too much about the content in the middle, which is a bit self-pleasure. Maybe the author thought a lot, but did not write it out in a large space, leaving the reader feeling a bit inexplicable and confused.

The pacing is too weird, the map changes very quickly, the map was changed as soon as I entered the academy, and the map was changed before anyone could recognize it. I can only say that the core is still good, but the polish is too poor. The characters that appeared in the early stage disappeared after just two pictures, and I didn't understand why the protagonist wanted to go to the mainland from school. You said it was for the children, but you didn't say why you wanted to go to the mainland. It's a bit baffling.

I am also an expert in forensics, and after conducting forensics with many people, I found that 90% of them are addicted to other people's thoughts and have no content of their own, so they only think about things that they don't understand at all. As Lao Ma said, they are a group of delusion patients without any practical ability. From living ability to common sense to logical thinking ability, they are all maintained at a very weird level. They have a lot of random thoughts and imaginary enemies everywhere. There is no real program and purpose. The logic seems to be orderly but is actually chaotic and cannot withstand in-depth study. Even if the expression is not forensic related content, it often shows the above flaws. . . The evaluation is based on imaginary "fine logic" and is thought to be "connected", but in fact it is inexplicable and is divorced from both reality and the readers. . . 🙄

Sooner or later, it will collapse. A congenitally lame civilization is still a time traveler. It has also seen a spaceship civilization. It still has immortal characteristics, and it still plays the single elite mode! Ridiculous comparison!