Immortality Begins with Travel and Storytelling

A few points: 1. The panel content is a bit too much and messy. Just record one name. For example Name: Zhang San Age: 18, Cultivation: Qi training level 3, Kung Fu: Tai Xuan Jing, first level 89%, Yijin Jing, first level 55%, Skills: 1. Cases without false starts, entry level, 85%, 2. Listening to Rain Sword Technique, mastery, 12% , There is no need to describe too many functions. When receiving the reward, the protagonist can just explain it after researching it. 2. The system rewards are a bit fast-paced, numerous and miscellaneous, making it easy to cause drama and create a hodgepodge. It is recommended to change it to: reward: Listening to the Rain Sword Technique, first level, second level, the higher the number of levels, the more powerful it will be. 3. The emotional line is a weak point, and too many female protagonists should be avoided. 4. There is a lack of plot coherence, and the protagonist's main mission is unclear. 5. The protagonist relies too much on the system, and the golden finger is an auxiliary. Too many system props can affect reading. Zhang Wuji's entire book is just a golden finger, the Nine Yang Magic Skill. Others are the development of various functions of Jiuyang Magic. The above are just suggestions, don't spray if you don't like it.

Can you change the label from Xianxia to Fantasy? , What does this book have to do with Xianxia?

Isn't the peaked cap (snake-pressing cap) joke in Chapter 24 a bit outrageous? 🤔Ancient background•ᴗ•💧? ? ? ◔‸◔? I'm a little confused, what's so funny about it? 🙄

You traveled through time, but gained the inheritance of a plug-in novelist. The martial arts in the book can be redeemed through the wishes of living beings, but the more powerful the martial arts, the more changes it will have on the world, so the more wishes can be redeemed. So at first you can only choose relatively low-level novels, such as Jin Yong's novels. But even so, it still needs to be huge. Only willingness can be exchanged for martial arts skills. And the main thing is. Even if you can redeem those martial arts skills. But you also need to practice and exchange for the treasures of heaven and earth.

You have traveled through time and physically traveled to other worlds. In this world, you are lucky. You have a plug-in. The plug-in is very simple. It is a little book spirit that can be transformed into a book spirit. The little book spirit can exchange the skills or weapons in it for you through the novels you wrote, but it requires a huge power of fantasy, and you have no choice but to start the storytelling process. You start to tell stories continuously until you have enough fantasy power to redeem the skills. As you understand, This world is a world of high martial arts, or a world of super martial arts. The strongest people in this world, and even the legendary ghosts and monsters from the upper realm of the Broken Void, etc. And in this kind of world, if you want to protect yourself, you can only rely on your plug-in, the Little Book Spirit, which can collect the power of fantasy and help you redeem various techniques. All the required fantasy power will be stronger. According to your estimate, redeeming the skills in Tianlong Babu will require at least close to a dozen threads of fantasy power. As a last resort, you keep wandering around various counties, starting Storytelling absorbs all kinds of fantasy power. Fortunately, you have chosen a small place and there are no very strong masters. In addition, you can hide when you can and do not compete with others for profit. Even if others ask for your book, you will give it to others, because even if others take it from you The books tell stories, but these powers of fantasy will also gather around you. Later, after you worked tirelessly to tell stories, you finally gathered the power to go to the fantasy world to practice. Then you transformed into Zhang Wuji and entered the sky to slay the dragon. Remember the world and start practicing. After forgetting all memories, you successfully completed Zhang Wuji's life, and then returned to this world with the memories of Zhang Wuji's Nine Yang Divine Art, Great Movement of the Universe, Tai Chi Sword, and Nine Yin Manual.

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Isn't this the setting of the sand sculpture animation on Douyin?

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It's quite interesting. I feel like the author should be thin and wear glasses.

Very well written, keep it up. It's really nice to be able to explain the story clearly.

The first part of the writing does not match the second part 😰

The male protagonist is a bit too casual when it comes to relationships. He won't refuse early if he knows someone likes him, while the woman is unwilling to be there until she is deeply affectionate. If you can't give your feelings, be cold to others. The male protagonist's behavior is a bit green tea

A hodgepodge, I want to write about everything, but nothing is outstanding.

The love and hatred in the world of cultivation in those years