I Use Kendo to Fight Against Fandom Culture

I was confused when I looked at this topic on my resume. I thought it was about urban aura cultivating immortals or something, but it turned out that it looked like a traditional immortal, not a buddy. Is it true that if you are a traditional immortal in the rice circle, there will be people who will kill you with one sword?

No buddy, who is Chu Li in the profile 🙂, I am a top 32

This book would have been a hit if it had appeared a few years ago. But now the environment is different 😅😅😅

What does "not cover" mean? I don't appreciate it.

Are you from a female channel? It looks weird.

🙂 When will there be three crops a year, red temperature, warning to eat hands?

I feel that it is better to invest in female videos, because there is a flaw in the logic, that is, why is the Demon Queen so strong? To know the background of the protagonist in the book, wouldn't it be exaggerated to say that he is a direct descendant of a wealthy family and the seed of an immortal sect? No matter how weak a person like this is, he is surrounded by countless losers and hordes of geniuses. However, the protagonist in the book is described as a loner with only a few friends, a sick cat who can be slandered by everyone. I don't know why. And you must know that in ancient times, there was a department of the royal family called Zongzheng Temple, which was full of royal family members and very senior old men. They had a mutually beneficial relationship with the royal family. If any demon queen really caused trouble, they would not sit idly by and watch. Moreover, in the world of cultivating immortals, maybe the ancestors of other dynasties are still alive and will not let a monster cover the sky with one hand. Then there is the sect. The sect is like a hanging sword. It has a natural confrontation relationship with the royal family. In my opinion, the Green Sword Sect is not a weak sect. After all, there are only two sects in this dynasty. There must be an ancestor and a true immortal from outside to suppress the luck. In other words, people The ancestor of the sect may have gone into seclusion, but he is not dead, so I really don't understand why there are so many surrender factions in this sect. Even the core elders want to be the monster's lackey. A fox monster, no matter how strong it is, in the realm of the human race, can it still want to rebel? If the most powerful sect in the world bows down under his pomegranate skirt, the whole world of cultivation will be extremely explosive. There is no other intention, just what I feel, that's all.

No? Indirectly, isn't it a metaphor for Da Tou and Sun? Da Tou doesn't practice well and loses every day, so he and Sun are in the business circle. After Sun loses to someone in a competition, that someone will be scolded all the time.

I don't understand what the novel is about. 🙂

Stop describing the psychology of the villain, which only makes people laugh and feel disgusted. Write more about the protagonist.

I feel sick when I hear about rice circles. Also, there is too much nonsense. Have a fight. The supporting character was grinding aside for a long time. Is it a little watery?

This book should be distributed next door 🍅. It's hard to tell the upper and lower starting points.

The biggest problem is that it's not fun and exciting enough. You can practice writing and other things, but it's not fun or enjoyable🙅‍♀️ First, let's talk about how I came across this book. I was attracted by the introduction to Lezi. However, during the reading process, such elements did not appear, and it was still the routine of the "Xiu Xian Invincible" novel. When I mention the plot again, let me tell you straight away, I'm here to have fun. You have to be happy and have fun to have people's desire to continue watching. The rice circle in your introduction naturally has fun attributes (it is recommended that the author take a look at the great work created by the rice circle. As long as you can reproduce or rewrite it interestingly, you don't have to worry about whether it is long), but the plot is still close to the traditional cultivation of immortality: new map/activity→forbearance→showing off and slap in the face→new map/activity cycle, and the description is a bit bland. It does not make good use of the fun attribute of the rice circle. It is too bland to only form a camp and have no brain support. The rhythm of the writing is a little slow. There are three main storylines in the chapter so far: I don't mention the creation of B-frame by my younger brother Ying San for the protagonist, because the writing gives each of the forces and characters who appear in a scene, and there are a lot of so-called words, so it is almost impossible to enjoy. Waizong Kiguan, although the character templates are too typical, but there is no desire to read, and it is not as exciting as the real fan circle; the rhythm of the writing has improved, and it can be seen that the author is absorbing opinions. Akamura is quite decent here, but there is a lot of nonsense. Yes, when it comes to explaining Du Changsheng, the suspenseful points are stated directly. No one in the temple knows about it, but you, a dungeon player, know it? I don't think you have a B rating yet. Of course, if you update ten times a day, these problems are all my problems.

There are too many descriptions of the supporting characters, resulting in not enough shots of the protagonist. It is not exciting and the plot advances slowly, which makes people feel that it is watery. Of course, if you can update it 10 times a day, just pretend that I didn't say it.

The master's daughter, the sect leader's daughter, the eldest princess who is awesome and coaxing, why can't the emperor be the empress?😅

What do you mean by covering up 🤔

Doesn't this introduction really contain the connotation of national table tennis?

What a wonderful setting and written with a childish flavor. The way the introduction is written, it can be said that there is no heroine. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't use the inexplicable sentence "literary youth" in the introduction.