
Hogwarts: Me? Lockhart?
霍格沃茨:我?洛哈特?
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- Completed
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- 410k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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False Lockhart: a loser who can only forget! The real Lockhart: Born in Ravenclaw! Down with multiple elite wizards! Enter Hogwarts without hesitation to compete with the White Devil! Cast a spell to find the magical origin of the Forgotten Curse! ! !
The biggest pitfall of this professor is not that his autobiography misappropriates other people's experiences, but that his autobiography includes statements such as "magic and non-magic can live in harmony" that blatantly defy the Wizarding Secrecy Act. It would be fine if he was just selling it as a novel, but he is using it as a school textbook
Dressing as Lockhart is good, but you are progressing too fast, which is a bit of a waste of Lockhart's character characteristics. He is a writer and has won the Order of Merlin. These can be expanded and written, and you can also let him write books such as Lord of the Rings, Azeroth, and Twilight of Thrones. When you expand the Order of Merlin, you can write some original characters from the Ministry of Magic or the Wizengamot, and design a hidden line.
Why is there a plot involving a duel with Professor Flitwick in the early stage? Show the protagonist's embarrassment or cowardice? The bottom line of his true strength was exposed.
Three steps to clear Lockhart's dark history
Due to practical reasons, we must not kill people and silence them. How will the owner of the suffering arrange it? 1. Give the victim a benefit, such as buying it with gold galleons 1.1 If the victim doesn't agree, use tricks to get him to agree, such as selling him miserably, modifying his memory, similar to settling in court and signing a letter of understanding to avoid liability 1.2 The sufferer agreed and signed an unbreakable agreement 2. The proceeds from selling the book will be used for charity to help more people like the sufferer, a common routine in the entertainment industry 3. Show your own strength, defeat the mysterious man once (basilisk), become a hot search, become the leading brother, and write a book that sells well (Lockhart and Slytherin's Chamber of Secrets)
It needs to be glamorous and not something that just anyone can expose.
Anyone can expose Lockhart, so why did he travel to him? What's the point of it, and what's the point of retaining people? A purely self-pleasure novel?
Overall it's pretty good, with a few minor flaws.
The early plot is generally pretty good, but the trip to Sweden seems to be poorly handled at the moment. This part is completely inconsistent with the character of the protagonist. It seems very inconsistent. Either the problem is simply solved, or the story is written to be more fleshed out. However, suddenly another force appears and directly enters their base camp to fight. It seems very brainless. Is there no investigation in advance? Can't we contact you secretly first? Just very stiff. Even if it doesn't fit the protagonist's style to forcibly modify the memory of a few people and take over his subordinates, not to mention forcibly making enemies, this loophole itself is huge. It is recommended that this part of the plot be changed drastically. It is inconvenient to change it so that it is not a deliberate ambush by the church, but the protagonist's inadvertent exposure and conflict. After the war, the protagonist repairs the damage caused by the battle and uses the amnesia spell to erase the relevant memories of several people that night. Would it feel less inconsistent to deeply erase all the victims' memories that may expose Lockhart and the adventure? In addition, the setting of writing into the memory is a bit strange. The Oblivion Curse does not have this ability. If you have this ability, why would you use the Imperius Curse? Just rewrite the memory and collect slaves. This is not much easier to use than the Imperius Curse. The Oblivion Curse is the real three unforgivable curses. The Imperius Curse should be avoided.
Damn it, it turned out to be such a dick after it was put on the shelves. I really don't know if someone changed later. If you wrote it like this, wouldn't you vomit when you read it? If you were to time travel into Harry Potter, wouldn't you try your best to recall the plot? I really don't know what the fuck is important. Anyone who has read the Harry Potter books should probably know how to open this secret room. You acted like a retard in all your fucking famous scenes. Did you laugh when you wrote it yourself?
It's been a flood since Chapter 60
When I read Chapter 5, there is no spiritual power in Harry Potter. Magic is just magic power. If you use it too much, you will get tired.
Let me tell the truth. You saw Dumbledore with the dog and the lion. Then why did you become arrogant when you saw the Dark Lord? Will you die if you ask Dumbledore for some soul magic? He had to hold on to the Dark Lord inside a notebook. Don't you have two Dark Lords on your hands? Can't you two Dark Lords ask this together? Anyway, they don't think alike. Really like a retard.
I have read a Lockhart book before, what is the Hermione system?
It was obviously an updated and more enjoyable article, but it happened to be deleted before it was put on the shelf.
"Wry smile" every day, you can't use any other word besides this, right?
You can write some daily teaching serials to enrich the daily line, and make money by submitting the manuscript. It also gives parents reassurance in advance for future changes in teaching methods.
Why was it suddenly finished? ? ?
I feel like I had a good idea at the beginning, but during the writing process, the author used his strength to turn this novel idea into a useless one. After all, he is Lockhart, and the Forgetting Curse is worthy of his reputation. His early reputation determines that even the principal cannot do it for no reason. What happened to such a character in the end? In the early stage, you can't use your own advantages to make new friends. After all, in a school, there are many teachers who can help you improve your strength, and you have many friends with multiple paths, so Lao Deng can't take action at will;
A brief taste of Shennong
What Shen Nong said before was right, the protagonist can only smile bitterly. Although it is a bit novel to choose a niche character as the protagonist, the author's writing power is limited. Some things that can be skipped are too long, such as the magic spell practice before joining the job. There is no need to describe in detail what to buy medicine, how to practice, the degree of practice of the magic spell, and the wry smile that runs through the whole text. Some things that should be written are simply skipped. For example, on the first night of time travel, I didn't even check Lockhart's house or sort out various interpersonal relationships. I just magically practiced the spell and went to sleep directly. Although I was very afraid of my identity being exposed, I directly dealt with the fans' letters without replying to them, and did not process the source of the letters. I was not afraid of the collapse of my character, and I did not pay special attention to Dumbledore's Legilimency. The three golden chapters of this book are almost wasted, and the protagonist's actions are inconsistent. You can watch it, but you can watch it based on the settings that are not true to the original work.
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