Mechanical Evolution: The Beast Mechanist

A picture of a genius!

All are products of nature, and their intelligence is inherently superior. The initial legion storyline is unsuitable, especially given the survival-of-the-fittest mentality. It's absurd that dozens of chapters dedicated to the legion's daily life appear without any apparent awareness.

To be honest, it was very abrupt. They fused with the same fire core at the same time, yet others were stronger than the protagonist. I don't understand, but I was deeply shocked.

Putting aside everything else, after reading a few chapters, the fact that a beast that had only awakened for one day was more intelligent than the protagonist's previous human incarnation is a bit far-fetched.

Having read these dozens of chapters, I can say that the subject matter is quite good, and it certainly appealed to me. However, overall, it's still a bit rough around the edges. The descriptions of characters and events are somewhat superficial, and the characters' emotions aren't strong enough. With a little more polishing, it would be even better. (Please don't criticize if you disagree.)

After being converted to mechanical, the system is like a broken machine, losing all its original characteristics.

There's a system, but it's pretty useless; what was supposed to be an upgrade system has turned into a digestion system. It's a classic example of protagonist-torture; the main character never has a good day. One small fry is beaten, another big one appears. Every time the protagonist lands and doesn't move, some troublesome thing inevitably comes knocking.

I've read a similar novel before. The story begins with humanity being transformed into various kinds of robots for unknown reasons. Then Earth began to merge with other parallel worlds, starting with relatively weaker worlds like Attack on Titan, Demon Slayer, Tokyo Ghoul, and Inuyasha. Later on, we gradually encountered more powerful worlds like Berserk, One Piece, Naruto, and Dragon Ball.

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The protagonist's cheat ability is too weak. Why can't he absorb the characteristics of other mechanical life forms to evolve, or at least create something like a fusion robot? The premise is terrible, but it lacks any imagination. Transformation and fusion are supposed to be the romance of robots, but your transformation is practically nonexistent, and the fusion is very perfunctory.