Immortality Starts with Kung Fu Panda

The writing of Kung Fu Panda is barely good, while Rainbow Cat and Blue Rabbit have started to write a running account, and there are no changes in the latest chapters. 1. There is little foreshadowing, the process is too fast and there is no emotional accumulation. It is really just pure collection. 2. He is not stupid, but he does not have a high IQ, nor does he have wonderful dramas, which cannot reflect his IQ. 3. There is a lack of opponents, and the description of the characters is simply personal stereotypes, not three-dimensional or vivid, and single details are repeated too much. For example, in the world of Tian Long Ba Bu, it seems that the protagonist has no feelings for the original characters but keeps helping, so some people think it is "wiping the butt". 4. Changing the plot is entirely incidental to the collection of skills. The protagonist has not reached the top yet, there is no life and death crisis, and life is still no fun at all. 5. Summary: It's too ordinary. The protagonist has no rich emotions, no time to make mistakes, no time to be smart, no lofty ambitions, and just mechanically executes the author's orders. The shining points of humanity cannot be seen in the protagonist and supporting characters.

The plot of Kung Fu Panda in the beginning is very new and makes people want to watch it. But there are a lot of poisonous points. The first one is the girlfriend. She appears too abruptly and doesn't use much ink to describe it. As a background, I personally find it disgusting. The second one is that one side is unwilling to believe that the Five Heroes of the Jade Palace hide the secret of their own time travel, which is understandable. But on the other hand, he regards his savior as a thug who travels through another world, which is even more disgusting. Otherwise, it is directly written as a summoned projection, instead of writing that after signing a contract, he can be summoned as a thug. When the summoning is over, he loses his memory and returns to the original world. (Just like the death of Master Oogway, although it is the original plot, he is also an indirect savior. The only pity is that he did not sign a contract as a thug before his death)

The first 2 animal worlds are very good. But in the third world, whenever you write about people, you pull your hips. . Smiling proudly at Huashan, rushing to give away resources, why? You don't owe them anything. . It was to save people, to drive away the Sword Sect, to sit in Huashan, and to help out at the Five Mountains Conference, and to give Zixia secret books and Dugu Nine Swords. . . The protagonist is a dog licker 🐶 Moreover, it is said that ordinary people can also practice the Dugu Nine Swords. . Everyone who has watched Xiaoao knows that, Linghu Chong's talent + the foundation of Wuyue swordsmanship + Feng Qing's precepts and deeds are what made him reluctant to get started. . . Last strike, first come, attack but not defend, either defeat the enemy with one move or kill directly

Is there this dead pig

Xiao Ao's strength is worthy of comparison with that of Rainbow Cat, Blue Rabbit and Seven Heroes. Fire Dance Tornado can even make his brother create a tornado, but Xiao Ao can't even penetrate an iron plate. Too poisonous.

The Changhong Sword Technique is 4 stars, and the Qingcheng Sect's Mental Technique is also 4 stars, so awesome! What is the level of Nine Yin and Nine Yang? 6 Stars? When you reach Fengyun, wouldn't it be impossible for you to win at 9 stars?

What is Xiaoao written on the back? He wrote "Pig Man", "Twelve Zodiac Signs in the Jianghu" and "Luo Xiaohei's War Chronicles". "I am the White Ape in Yitian", "I am the Eagle Brother in the Divine Condor", "I am the Fire Kirin in Fengyun", "Godzilla: The Eighteen Palms of the Dragon"

In the first episode of Red Cat and Blue Rabbit, the 10-level sword technique is as powerful as a nuclear bomb What does Xiaoao compare it to?

After reading a few chapters, I feel that the author's writing is a bit confusing. All the actions of the protagonist are very abrupt, and sometimes he will give you a flashback to explain the reasons. The reasons are also very far-fetched, and it looks messy.

Why didn't you trade Fire Dance Whirlwind Sword Technique?

Hongmao's martial arts secret book is rated with four stars, Zhou Botong's left and right fights have five stars, and 18 Dragon Subduing Palms has six stars. Hongmao has the power to destroy the world and destroy the world after practicing it to the highest level. After understanding it, it even flies away. How can Xiaoao compare? Hongmao slaps his hand on the ground, and the whole mountain will jump

Kung Fu Panda World is okay, but subsequent ones are not.

After Kung Fu, the panda began to decline, and when it came to Xiaoao, it was no longer possible to watch. When I first entered Swordsman World, I had a problem with my writing. Not to mention the sudden change in the character of the protagonist, I also kept writing a running account of running pictures...

It has indeed become a chronicle. The author should at least write some content, instead of running around the world just for cheats, going from place to place in two or three chapters, going to one place in two or three chapters, all with the same template. The author at least provides some content and useful information. Even if it is free now, there should be some people following it. If it is put on the shelves and it looks the same, who will buy it?

There is a saying that Master Turtle should be regarded as an immortal.

I have seen it several times, and every time I see the introduction, I am persuaded to quit, Ouyang Feng: Who in the family understands? Is this appropriate? Haven't you thought about changing it? 😅

The writing of "Swordsman's Arms" is too high.

I really don't know about the so-called earth plot and girlfriend Otherwise, delete it

The main thing is that Kung Fu Panda is a good idea, I have seen it before, but the combat power gives me a headache. The author is not good, but the idea is okay.

Negative review, Xiaoyao Yufeng is on the same level as Yi Gen Jing, which I didn't expect

I really can't stand it anymore after seeing Tianlong, and I can't think of a good plot to write. That's the feeling it gives me. You might as well just write the main character to get new martial arts skills to save Wu Yazi or something like that. Wang Yuyan is doing your shit.

Disgusting bitch protagonist. If modern people think of monogamy through time travel, can they have three wives and four concubines without any care?

The feeling of starting a running account from the third world

Why can Master Raccoon kill the Black Heart Tiger instantly? Aren't they about the same strength?

Is there any brother who can introduce me to a similar genre? I like being invincible and flowing through various worlds, and I can do whatever I want.

Chinese people are dragons, you are a panda

What is it like to change your hair after each breakout? It feels weird!