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Tell me your opinion. I couldn't stand the part about gang killings. It's not about poisonous points or routines. There is basically no problem with this. The main problem is that my writing skills are not good enough and I cannot express that feeling. It looks like the pig's trotters are the kind of young meat actors.

After reading Chapter 18, I really have something to say: 1. The social background is chaotic. A small town with 17 villages under its jurisdiction has no special local products and does not appear to be a major transportation thoroughfare. It cannot support the prosperity described by the author. 2. The balance of positive and negative forces is imbalanced. According to the author's estimate, 100% of the total population of the town and its villages will not exceed 10,000 people, or even only five or six thousand people. The government's strength has not been stated clearly, but the strength of the counter-mountain village can be estimated. More than 20 men capable of holding knives have been deployed in the town, and the deputy village leader can directly use dozens of men who can ride horses... This is a large village with at least 400 front-line combatants and a total of more than 2,000 people. It is not much smaller than the town. The local area simply cannot afford it. 3. The author does not have rich social experience. Let's not talk about why there are multiple pawnshops in such a small town. According to the character design given by the author to the Gao family, the Gao family's pawnshop mainly purchases fur goods. There are no relatively stable hunters to provide fur goods. This ridiculous thing cannot happen in reality. Realizing this supply and demand relationship, at least on August 15th, the pawnshop will prepare a mooncake-like gift for the hunters who supply the goods. 4. There are too many details missing, so I won't go into them one by one.

Time travel protagonists often forget that they are modern people and regard themselves as ancient people.

You eat a lot, how can you have time? You have to eat all day long

It's really poisonous, the price of food is more than 100 cents per catty! ! ! How did the people survive? ? ?

The creativity is good, but the writing is not good, the plot is cliché, the whole setting is explained in nonsense, and the explanation is cumbersome. Don't tell me that you can do it. You can write it and you can do it. Read the novel yourself and see if you can continue reading it.

I don't understand it a bit. Your writing is not very good. Just +1+1+1. What is the ratio of this 1 to a normal person? Is it 1 point per second or 1 point per minute? These are not clearly explained. Let me take a look!

It's too troublesome for the protagonist to eat. After breaking through the innateness, he should change it to a soul-absorbing stone.

Don't you practice Kung Fu with Pig Horns? Don't you practice Kung Fu? Why don't you find two Kung Fu secret books to practice a little and enhance your own strength? There are almost 100 of them, and I can't even understand them.

Nothing to say. It gives me a headache. I will probably go to the palace. Even if it is not scrapped, this book will not become popular.

Isn't it weird? Why are there so many trivial things at the back, 👻? Where's the demon? Where is the devil?

Author, you'd better decide how you want to write Under your setting, the protagonist can quickly upgrade to a large realm and crush equipment B, but now you have to write a dual cultivation of Taoism and martial arts to forcibly cross the level challenge Genius, such an unfixed idea is difficult to attract regular readers. Either you don't change the golden finger of the protagonist to Qi Yu and can jump levels, or write how quickly the protagonist upgrades and crushes the enemy to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger.

I would like to ask the protagonist if this is a rice bucket system. He can increase his rice intake by doing whatever he wants.

I don't know why I saw a feeling of depression, but I don't feel comfortable summarizing it.

Why do you need a sword to practice swordsmanship? Author, are you crazy?

Pigfoot chose the wrong career at first. You should choose a concealed weapon first. Little rocks are everywhere. Once you learn it, you will be able to attack from a distance, and hunting will be nothing more than drizzle. With the physical quality of a pig's foot, the kinetic energy of a concealed weapon must be hundreds of kilograms. Even if the kinetic energy is not concentrated due to irregular stones and irregular force, the killing range is tens of meters, and the destructive power within a few meters is definitely comparable to light weapons such as pistols.

It's so frustrating that the appetite keeps increasing. Do you eat 24 hours a day?

I just want to say, why do you, a peasant boy, use a sword? Swords require skill.

Protagonist, don't be a gangster, because if you are not hard-hearted, there will be no disaster. As long as you are a gangster, there will be many more things like this.

I can't even finish the first chapter... Hi! +1+1+1 For eating! What about hungry meals? Isn't it -2-2-2?

It gave me the feeling that it was quite confusing, but the author couldn't control this feeling. In the end, it felt very low when I wrote it.

He practices Qi for a while and then becomes innate. The protagonist knows that he is innate for no reason.

Less than ten chapters into the game, the protagonist is already feeling frustrated, and the minions are just trying to get rid of the root of the problem, accepting favors for no reason. Well. Maybe it will be good later.

The world is too small. It feels like everyone is the enemy of the protagonist, but the protagonist cannot be defeated. All resources are reserved, and all enemies can find you. You feel half useless.

Speaking of time travel to ancient times, we modern people seem to be much worse than the ancient people on average. The only thing is the vision of modern people. The environment makes us different from them. We are like looking at the second dimension from the third dimension. We stand at a high point and overlook them.

Below your introduction is a non-traditional martial arts novel. It turns out that the classification of your novel is traditional martial arts, ah? . . .

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I can see the status bar, this novel is good.

The latest ghost king was discovered by the Incense Cult does not match the time that Baimiao recalled. Baimiao said at the time that he obtained the information about the ghost king when he was a true disciple, but the leader of the Incense Cult said that he got the information about the ghost king more than ten years ago? Thinking about it this way, could it be that this Baimiao has only been the master of the temple for less than 10 years?

Take a look at what you wrote in the third golden chapter