
Before the End of the World Comes, the System Comes First
末世没来之前,系统先来了
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 144k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Apocalypse
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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64Chapters
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The protagonist is really good, why bother buying things and stacking them? He can't rely on his own strength. Logically speaking, the protagonist's attack range is one hundred meters. At the protagonist's speed, he can kill all the life in a mountain in one day. This way, there must be at least tens of millions of layers. The more and more layers will follow. It's coming faster and faster. Logically speaking, 10 days should be able to massacre the entire 9.6 Million square kilometers of land (non-human beings). In this way, the only influence among humans in the end of the world is a great achievement for mankind. (If the protagonist doesn't play like this, I don't know how the protagonist can defeat the Lord of Darkness)
One month later is the end of the world. The protagonist chooses three skills to kill monsters and grow infinitely. Then the protagonist chooses to spend money to buy twenty kilograms of shrimps every day and burn them to death. It's so cool.
In order to suppress the protagonist, I don't even want to search on Baidu😅😅
Say a few words. ①Too many prefixes. It's just about upgrading skills. Are you ready to chatter 200,000 words? ② It's just killing animals. The raw materials for making certain feeds are bugs. It's not counted one by one, it's counted in tons. ③The author always says that the protagonist needs to save money, brother~~~! ! ! Five skills, those are superpowers. As long as your brain is not sick, you will basically lose your fortune and stack up the eight blessings! ! ! Even if there is no invasion of darkness, he is still an extraordinary human being, and he still has to go to school to study? My brain is crazy. ④Although it is not certain whether the apocalypse will happen, you should always prepare some weapons, survival supplies, etc.! I listen to books, and by chapter 30, I'm still killing ants, so be it!
You don't understand the reader's mind
To put it simply, your profile is basically half-invincible. In other words, you must stack up your combat power crazily in the early stage, so that you can feel more comfortable at the end of the day. Readers are attracted by your introduction, but if they don't see what they want, they will definitely complain. Another one, you are emphasizing the logic problem. The protagonist already knows that there is an apocalypse, but does not build a safe house, which is certainly illogical. Even if he doubts that the end will come, he must prepare in advance and be prepared. After all, the system is already in place, and who can guarantee that there will not be a doomsday.
The dark invasion system is set to arrive one month later, but it is obvious that the author's writing skills are not enough. It is clear that the post-apocalyptic story still needs to prepare food in advance, not to mention that building a safe house requires at least preparing food. The author should urgently practice and write it as a casual daily story. He clearly chooses to kill animals to become stronger. He just buys shrimps and boils them every day, uses pesticides to kill insects and ants in the wild, or goes to the aquarium to buy fry in large quantities, or goes to wild rivers and seasides to poison or electrocute fish. It is not very safe, not easy to be discovered, and does not cost money!
The pressure is a bit too much
The market price of a pound of mealworms is 10-13 RMB. There are about 4,000-5,000 mealworms in a pound. There is a 20% discount for more than 10 pounds. They are available in the flower and bird market and Taobao Tmall 🙂. You can't beat it for 1,000 yuan.
It's obviously a cool article, so why isn't it more fun? Oh, it turns out that the author made a superman with millions of attribute values look like an ordinary person.
It's obviously a good article, why don't you feel good? Oh, it turns out it's all commentary, so that's okay
Author Xiao, the prototype of the protagonist is based on yourself.
Is this a rewrite by the author? Or...? The beginning of the story is the same as several years ago...
Are you planning to put 60 photos on the shelves again?
This and that is writing. Pure science writing
I don't understand. Can't you still control the distance when using a shield to explode for the first time? The shooting distance is 20 meters. The first time you explode the mosquito, it should be controlled at 5 meters. Why can't I control everything later? One shield explosion only costs 100 spirit points. You have millions of attribute points but no mental power. Why is there a lack of range damage? Not to mention anything else, with the power of your attribute points, you can kill a piece of sand and rocks just by throwing them out. Just use the ax to chop them one by one. Is it possible to take a mace and spin it in circles? Can human bones be broken? The level of interest is so strong that I don't even feel like a person. As mentioned earlier, he has a cautious personality and was bullied and oppressed as an orphan. Facing the doomsday requires building physical and mental health in various ways. It always seems like I can't slow down. A small town was bombed three times within a 10,000-meter radius. There can still be strange things. Either you forgot to write it or your brain forgot to remember it. A range of 10,000 meters was bombed at a river shrimp stall in the market. Just kill hundreds of river shrimps. The town market sells noodle soup and bombed again. I was speechless. I went to the noodle shop to ask for boiling water after buying shrimps. How far can it be. Also, there are always 5/6 chapters for popular science. If the main plot is not driven, how can there be any passion? The protagonist takes 2 steps to learn about 2/3 of the abilities. Can I get good grades? The protagonist's powerful abilities are written vaguely and imprecisely. There is no good plot writing and a lot of repetition of daily routines. A lot of popular science content fills the word count, it can only be said that it has been mentioned too many times. What's the point of repeating it over and over again? There is too little main content.
Not many people watch this type of thing 😰
The setting feels a bit ancient. I saw something similar 6 years ago.
That's it?
That's it for 64 pictures, right?