Naruto: I, Uzumaki Naruto, Defected

Brother, what you wrote is a bit, how should I put it, too impulsive. The best time to defect is the mission to the Kingdom of Waves, Mizuki Naha. In fact, it is impossible to defect and escape. The crystal ball monitors in real time. Even if you leave the village, you will be monitored by ANBU. The best hiding place is not the Mist Ninja Village. The uncle who gave you a warm baby when you were born is there. I am afraid I won't send you directly. The best place is the Moon Country.

Behavior: Defection, bloodthirsty Character: Funny, bad-mouthed He is not decisive at all in killing, and he has to talk for a long time before killing someone. The character described is only suitable for being a Konoha fun person, not a rebel ninja.

I can't stand it anymore, I've absorbed Otsutsuki Shiba, and I almost overturned when I hit a weasel. Brainless weakening?

I saw Chapter 25, what should I say? The author wanted to write about a blackened person, but he wrote a lot of nonsense. In chapter 25, a blackened person didn't kill anyone at all. And the protagonist system is still the kind of monster-killing and upgrading system. The whole article talks about how miserable the protagonist is. He wants to kill someone but he doesn't want to kill someone to become a virgin.

Too impulsive, with a look of bitterness and hatred. Even if it is affected by the memory, the time traveler has at least twenty or thirty years of experience, can't he suppress a twelve-year-old child living in the village? He was too deeply affected, and when he saw that there were only multiple shadow clones in the Book of Sealings, he could follow the plot and practice quietly for a while. In the original book, Naruto was affected by the Kyuubi's control ability. He couldn't perform simple clone techniques well, his physical skills were stretched even more, and he was not good at learning. , Was called the Cranetail. He only relied on the Nine-Tails to burst out without any brainstorming or skills. At least he lay dormant for a while and quietly familiarized himself with the Nine-Tails mode in the dungeon. Then he learned a ball or practiced Taijutsu or something like that. He had one or two skills and then ran away during Zabuza or the Chunin Exam.

Bro, I think you're about to pounce again. Seeing that you have written so much, I would like to give you some suggestions. Your writing is too bland, and it feels like there is no climax. Nowadays, online writing is too damn convoluted.

To be honest, the values are a bit broken. You shouldn't give those values to ninjas, otherwise there will be many contradictions. The speed of genin is 50 meters per second, the speed of chunin is 500 meters per second, and the speed of jounin is 1000 meters per second. If you decentralize ninjutsu at this speed, it will become The flaw is that general ninjutsu is only mid-range. Within 200 meters, people can reach 50 meters in one second and put a hammer. It is not a turn-based system. With this speed difference, even 10,000 genin cannot beat a chuunin, and a jounin can't beat a chuunin. It is repressive. It can be said that ninjas can walk sideways without ninjutsu. The kinetic energy of running is comparable to many ninjutsus. The setting of 50000000 meters per second in Naruto tail mode also shocked me. This plug-in It is estimated that the value added to death is not even one-tenth of the Nine-Tails. The cheat has turned into a clown. Naruto is afraid of the Six Paths Madara Hachimen Kai at this speed. He cannot reach the speed of light. I don't know how the ninja world is only so small. How come it hasn't been blown up by these big guys?

There are 60 new chapters on the shelves, ten chapters in one day on National Day👍 Not only is the quantity large, but the quality is also at the level of good grass, it must be praised

A clear and stupid college student with no plans and no maturity. How can such a person survive in society? Have you ever been suppressed by work? It would be better to write more maturely.

The plot is okay The characters are crappy and Naruto's personality is the main focus The TV series is like a pig's trotter template, but the pig's trotters in the current TV series are used to kill pigs Looking ahead and looking back, hesitating and having no position, you can delete it after subscribing.

After so many years, you are about to become a leader, and you say you quit 😁, which is also 6

It has nothing to do with Shuangwen. The third generation is still white to the extreme. The beautiful national political advisor, Hokage Konoha, can see it. I really learned the essence. Qualified capital political science 🤫

I am not an audience for this type of writing, but I happened to read this book and saw a single chapter of the author, and got to know a little bit about the author's thinking. Then I found that the background of the entire story frame seems to be in conflict with the exciting point of the story. I wonder if the author has thought about how to solve this conflict. If this problem cannot be solved, starting a new book will probably have a similar result. That is, as a book about defecting to Konoha, the background of the whole story is often anti-Konoha, resolving hatred, that is, Konoha is hopeless, and Konoha F4 is undoubtedly a scumbag. It is close to the perspective of conspiracy theory, at least it means that the entire Ninja Village is actually hopeless, and only then can I say "I have seen through you" and "It is better to defect than to be a dog." But despite the loopholes in Kishimoto's official setting, in order to make the celebrity side as fair and rational as possible, in terms of the background of the entire ninja world, it is not an exaggeration to say that Konoha is the conscience of the five ninja villages. The other four ninja villages are darker than the other, and many operations are like "I am the bad guy anyway, what do you want." This method of forcing darkness by villains and light by righteousness actually has many bugs, but once you really follow it, you will find that defection is completely insufficient in terms of emotional support from a rational point of view. Whether it is in terms of interests or emotions, staying in the village is the best solution. This is the power of "Kishimoto's personal promotion". When the background of the whole story cannot support the emotion of the main line of defection, whether the defection is successful or the defection fails, I am afraid that it will be very awkward emotionally. How to truly solve the problem of conflict between this architecture and Shuangdian may be a difficult point. —— The above is a little reflection on the idea of ​​​​defection, and it is not true.

It's too long-winded to write so many chapters about a defector.

After fighting for a long time, no one was killed. What was Naruto thinking when Kaka's strength at that time could block the 3-tailed mode!

There are so many pictures, no one with a name or surname is dead, they are all sent as part-timers.

There are too many loopholes in the plot and character design.

There is too much nonsense, it feels like a rant conference, and the protagonist obviously failed to take advantage of the plot prophet. The biggest advantage of Uzumaki Naruto is that he has the Nine Lamas, the Fourth Hokage and Uzumaki Kushina in his body. The two groups of parents' chakra in the body have their own memory and body memory. Do you guess there is body ninjutsu memory? So the protagonist is a complete fool who carries a mountain of treasure without knowing it. Guess if the fourth generation has read the Book of Sealing? Guess how much sealing techniques Kushina knows. Since she was raised in the Senju clan since she was a child, how much ninjutsu does Kushina know about the Senju clan and Tsunade?

I haven't read it here yet, would you like to ask? Does this Naruto have any long-range attacks? I have always felt that since there are so many Narutos, the right way is to cast one Ninjutsu alone. In the original book, I only learned two Wind Release Ninjutsu in the theatrical version, but none of them are used in the main series. As a rabbit, fire coverage is the right way to cure the phobia of insufficient firepower. Close combat is poor, and there is no other way.

The downfall of this book is Boruto. Okay, Naruto is not finished. Go to Boruto and finish it. No wonder the results are not good.

There are real forbidden jutsus in the Book of Sealings, but there are only a few of them that are similar to the popular ninjutsus like multiple shadow clones. The book of Zhuyue in the Ninja Road was cleared by the big spiral wheel and went to the forbidden jutsu library to get it. The one that Naruto stole was a forbidden book catalog with several commonplace forbidden jutsus...

Without the protection of Konoha, how can one survive by defecting? The Kyuubi's identity will be revealed. How many other villages don't want the Kyuubi Jinchuuriki? Nagato also wants to capture you and use you as a dry battery.

Damn such a prolific author 666 Love it

I should have just been there for two days, but there are 13 more chapters?

It makes people worry that Hinata wasn't killed by a bag of rice, right? Although he will definitely be resurrected later, but you don't want the Minato couple to experience death again, isn't Hinata important? The author please pay attention to the readers' feelings and don't get too excited.

It's half cool, there's too much nonsense. Moreover, all the people killed were characters in the dungeon, but not a single one was killed in reality.