Gou Dao Xiuxian: Isn't Your Righteous Method Wrong?

First of all, I have never been an author, but I want to say, is it difficult to write a hundred chapters a day ? It's not that I'm being unreasonable. After all, I said at the beginning that I've never been an author.

The writing is good. Above Liangcao, I feel that there are not as many female characters as other reviews say. Strictly speaking, the only female character who often communicates with the protagonist is a clerk. The other female characters are not even supporting roles.

🤔The design of the plot is a bit strong, and it gives me the feeling that the protagonist is not looking for opportunities, but the opportunities are looking for the protagonist.

The previous writing was quite good, that is, Chapter 84, but Lin Na's writing was a bit poisonous, forget it? How can we not talk about the protagonist? How could the memory of the protagonist's two great magical powers, true spirit, and eternal certificate be touched, directly lowering these two levels. Not to mention that the protagonist's cultivation level is low, but this is not the reason for their next level. What foundation building the protagonist uses, and the gold content is there, no matter what the woman is, it is impossible to compare with the protagonist.

If you don't update it, please tell me.

At present, for me, it is above the level and suits my taste. For me, it reads smoothly with almost no stumbling. I did what I needed to do, and I didn't deliberately suppress it.

Did the author forget that the protagonist can enter the game world at any time? Don't think of running away easily, or be frightened and speechless when you meet a master.

Please distinguish between the names of pig's feet and waistcoat, don't get confused.

1. The core cheat of this book is this game, but the interaction between the protagonist and the game is too low. No matter whether it is equipment, medicine to restore blood or mana, or any skills or mounts, there is no exploration of the world outside the regular map. When the protagonist wanted to start a new game, he never considered clearing the main story. 2. When dealing with the characters in the game, as soon as you practice the magic weapon, you just want to practice it with your own sect. The problem is that your sect is not the only one in this world, there must be a large number of dungeon bosses. Since you have written that it is obvious that NPCs have certain thoughts and feelings, then what you write is bound to dissuade some readers. 3. When you start the second game, it is obvious that the person you buried together may be a real person. What is the protagonist looking at the ghost killing picture here? Another place to persuade people to quit. Why is interaction not considered at all here? 4. Since you want to join the Zhang family to get money, and you write it in a positive light, why do you write that the Zhang family lady is a prostitute? The young lady who survives later will inevitably be in crisis. At this time, the protagonist saves her, because the readers of the male-female channel are unhappy, but if you don't rescue her smoothly, it is unreasonable. No matter how you write this plot design, it will not be pleasing.

What's the point of this update? I've always hidden my cultivation level, and now I can hide it even after joining a sect. He also opened a clone, which is useless and does not improve his strength at all.

It takes ten thousand corpses to practice the third level of Qi? Do you want to put so much pressure on the protagonist?

One kilometer per minute is 60 miles per minute. All cars in our city are faster than this Seven hundred meters per minute is less than 12 meters per second, which is a little faster than Bolt, not as good as the Cheetah, and even airplanes can't fly. So this airplane is maglev? Anti-gravity?

I feel that the protagonist doesn't pay much attention to magical powers, and his fighting skills are not very good. After hiding for so long, I haven't seen him practice more spells or buy more magic weapons. Blindly avoiding it is not a coward, it's a coward. Normally, you can be stubborn and save up various means. When you encounter an enemy, you will crush him to death violently. It is not like this now. I feel that the protagonist will be killed by the enemy when he encounters it. I am very speechless.

I hope I'm not a virgin for ten thousand years. Even if I don't want to write a female protagonist, I might as well go to a brothel to solve it.

The gods in this book are so awesome, so intelligent, they won't go crazy or die, they are among the most powerful people in the world of cultivation, and they can develop followers. How could such an awesome being live like a rat in the gutter? Does the author think it's logical?

After reading more than 20 chapters, I have a question. After more than two years, the protagonist has been killing bandits not to mention millions, but hundreds of thousands. The result is just from the fourth level of Qi training to the sixth level of Qi training. If the monsters in the game are the same as ordinary people in the real world according to the settings, and so many people can upgrade to two levels, then how do other magic cultivators practice? In the real world, is it possible for a demon cultivator in the Qi-training stage to massacre so many people while practicing?

The plot is not coherent, and it's not interesting to read what you wrote in the first place.

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]

Please 😭

Is this a demon cultivator? It's best not to stress your level when writing about magic cultivators. There are so many demon cultivators who can refine their Qi successfully in one year and start preparing for foundation building.