Seeking the Dao in Qingyun: Beginning as the Fifth Disciple of Dazhu Peak

The previous plot of Dazhu Peak is very good, and several chapters of Lu Xueqi are also very exciting, but what does this mortal war mean? Are you writing this in the world of cultivating immortals? Not only is it boring and devoid of any sense of immersion, but it also goes on for a long time, leaving people with no desire to read. You can write about the collision with the demon sect, you can write about the emergence of new races or sects, or you can write about adventures, but this ordinary war is really too disgusting.

This new map is a bit biased. It has already started on the mundane battlefield, and I have no desire to continue watching it.

The mortal army was such a failure, they all skipped it

Damn it, they have all become immortals. And doing these physical exercises?

When writing about cultivating immortals, just write about cultivating immortals. If you write about martial arts in cultivating immortals, forget it. I've written more than ten chapters and haven't finished them yet. I only read this book to read about cultivating immortals.

Can the time traveler know who is in the Patriarch Temple? Still talking about killing ghosts and gods, this is nonsense.

Isn't the protagonist too much of a virgin? Why did he try so hard to save Li Xun?

I think the name should be changed a little. To be honest, the protagonist's name makes me laugh every time I see it.

Let's discuss it. Is it better for him and the Qingyun Sect to try to reveal Cangsong's true identity, Zhang Xiaofan's double-dealing, and the truth about Caomiao Village in advance? Personally, I think this is better. Exposing the traitor Cangsong relieves a major crisis. Zhang Xiaofan can practice the dual methods with confidence and use them at will. It won't be too unacceptable to know the truth when he doesn't have deep feelings for Pu Zhi.

To use an old saying, there are a thousand worlds of Zhuxian in the eyes of a thousand readers. In my eyes, the world of Zhuxian is a vast world with abundant aura, but the world of immortals who have just begun to practice can live forever (such as the beast god, the yellow bird, and the black water snake before the seal). However, no one has yet explored that realm, so everyone is groping, due to their own ideas. They are different, the environment is different, and the purpose is different, so the path of cultivation is a situation where a hundred flowers bloom and all kinds of frost compete for freedom. Therefore, some become mountain people in order to grow up, and some choose to return to the mortal world with the strongest combat power in order to defend the people and things they care about. The world is very big, but the author's writing power is limited and he needs to describe it slowly. There are some shortcomings in his ability and some omissions. Thank you for your guidance.