Seeking the Dao in Qingyun: Beginning as the Fifth Disciple of Dazhu Peak

The earlier chapters about Dazhu Peak were excellent, and Lu Xueqi's chapters were also very exciting, but what's the point of this mortal war? Is this part of a cultivation world? Not only is it boring and lacks any sense of immersion, but it also takes forever to finish, making it impossible for anyone to continue reading. You can write about clashes with demonic cults, the emergence of new races or sects, or even fortuitous encounters, but these mundane battles are just too awful.

This new map is a bit off-center; it's already turned into a mundane battlefield, and I'm losing interest in watching it.

The mortal army was a real blunder; they skipped over everything.

Damn, they're all cultivating immortality now. Why are they still doing this body-training stuff?

If you're going to write about cultivation, then write about cultivation properly. Adding martial arts elements to a cultivation story is one thing, but this book is over ten chapters long and still not finished. People are reading this book specifically for its cultivation elements.

How could a time traveler not know who's in the ancestral temple? Especially considering the legend of slaying demons and gods? That's nonsense.

Isn't the protagonist too much of a saint? Why is he risking his life to save Li Xun?

I think you could change the name a little. To be honest, the main character's name always takes me out of the story.

Let's discuss whether it would be better for him and Qingyun Sect to try to uncover Cangsong's true colors, Zhang Xiaofan's dual magical abilities, and the truth about Caomiao Village in advance. Personally, I think this is better. Exposing the traitor Cangsong resolves a major crisis, allowing Zhang Xiaofan to focus on cultivating his dual techniques and using them freely. Knowing the truth now, before his feelings for Puzhi deepen, won't be too unacceptable.

To paraphrase an old saying, there are a thousand different worlds of Zhu Xian in the eyes of a thousand readers. In my eyes, the world of Zhu Xian is a vast and spiritually rich world of immortals and heroes, but one where cultivation is just beginning. Immortality is possible (for example, the beast gods, the Yellow Bird, and the Black Water Serpent before they were sealed).