This Fellow Daoist Has a Terrible Killing Instinct

The original protagonist's older brother was portrayed as so powerful, even leaving his younger brother a Grade B cultivation technique. Yet, in this dangerous world, he didn't leave his mother and brother any protective artifacts or methods. Any random person or even a Star Evil could easily kill his family. The younger brother's death is somewhat ridiculous; it just benefited the protagonist.

Beware of the plot hole: the protagonist releases a monster for a chance encounter, slaughtering hundreds of thousands of people in an entire city—can you believe it? This protagonist isn't a saint; he's the kind of person who doesn't care about anything else, even a raging flood.

The biggest flaw in this book is that it's clearly based on a possession-based narrative. The characters treat their family members as if they were reincarnated from this world.

It's the same old formula: a chase encounters a powerful enemy, then the character suddenly becomes incredibly strong and kills enemies of a higher level. Is there anything new about that?

What I didn't like was that the protagonist killed a whole bunch of people later on, and then the author didn't write any rewards, as if they forgot about the cheat system.

It's fine, but this arranged marriage is a bit toxic. It would be better to just break it off directly at the sect and give them something to settle the debt. A bit unconventional.

The "golden finger" (a powerful, overpowered ability) plays a significant role in the early stages, but its presence gradually diminishes, turning the story into a typical cultivation novel.

Let me mention the drawbacks. The phenomenon of "multiple synonyms" is too obvious, meaning that the meaning of sentences is repeated many times. In short, it's wordy and too rambling, like eating cotton—the air is a little sweet.

She's always provoking everyone, mindlessly chasing after people into the Demon Realm. Tian Qiwen trusted her so much, and she died because of her stupidity, along with several of her teammates. The protagonist seems to catch her charms; just because she said he was in danger, he stayed to fight. Why couldn't he escape and call for help? So many of them are either dead or crippled.

It's alright. Just a bit unstable. First, there's the fight against a higher-level opponent. Then, there's a family with several Foundation Establishment cultivators watching, ready to take down the protagonist. He dares to venture out to explore a Foundation Establishment cave while only at Qi Refining Level 6. The villains lack the necessary intelligence and strength.