
Battle of Two Cities: Zaun's Super Mechanic
双城之战:祖安的超神机械师
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 201k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Isn't there someone who led Zaun to fight against slavery and defeat capital?
Ping's current popularity is as long as he writes correctly and puts the words between 3 and 4, then he will be able to catch this overwhelming wealth.
The writing is a bit messy, brother. The protagonist has no outstanding features, the personality charm is not highlighted, the character is not strong enough, and the technical strength is not highlighted. It is just a system synthesis after a design drawing, and the resourcefulness is not very prominent. It is all improvised, without planning, and the plot arrangement is a bit fragmented, there is no way to integrate it, and the cause and effect relationship of each event is relatively weak. I can clearly feel that the author wants to write the protagonist's hot personality, but it feels a bit empty. The protagonist's strength is not enough to make people fearful. If the system of upgrading and adding points is okay, there is only an equipment synthesis system. It is still in the initial stage. I can't imagine the scene of the protagonist's beef.
No mechanical ascension, Victor became arcane and ascended, the Mechanicum is gone 😭
Black Star: Why does it seem like someone is calling me 😎😎
Do you have to limit yourself with money? Do you have mental mysophobia? Robbery is the fastest way to make money
I always like to use the word "further" at critical moments, but the meaning is unclear when placed in a chapter. And "you", does the author have any strange habits?
I thought it was the super mechanic.
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The author must avoid the plot of "there is an old saying in the East" and fit the communication tone of the animation. It seems pretty good now. Come on!
If you want to defeat Pi City in the early stage of the Twin Cities, just use numbers. Defeat Pi City in one wave. It will be difficult to wait for the council to reach a consensus. It is a waste of time to use individuals. I guess it is better to write a little bit.
Another mechanic ×, a universal technician√
So is there a female protagonist? , If there is one, how many?
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