My Avatar Is Becoming the Final Boss

Is this a plot flow? Looking along the way, there are neither boring monster spawning and upgrading, nor dark and deep cruelty, nor obscure and lengthy principles or complex settings. In short, it is very easy to read, and it is worthy of the light novel classification.

The eldest brother Gu Qiye and the good brother Li Qingping The eldest brother can be said to be my favorite character in the early stage. He is just, friendly and gentle. The eldest brother is like a mother who has supported the broken family by himself, cares for his younger brothers and sisters, protects civilians outside, and uses a route that can be said to be somewhat "foolishly loyal" to investigate the death of his mother. Early viewing I just feel that this character has a kind of self-dedication and sacrifice that "a good man should be held at gunpoint." He has extinguished all his self and silently gave half of himself to the vigilantes and the other half to his younger brothers and sisters in a broken home. However, he could only secretly apply medicine late at night to survive battle after battle. The background of this character reminds me of Batman, who restrains himself with extremely high moral standards and turns himself into a blazing fire. It also makes me feel like Nightwing. He is friendly, gentle and approachable, and can get along well with everyone. He is the anchor for everyone in the Gu family. What really makes me fall in love with this character is that the eldest brother knows his sister's identity, but he still doesn't say anything when they "encounter" at a barbecue restaurant. He just tells her to be safe. Oh, he is really good at writing. He is such a gentle and self-destructive eldest brother, but he is also really determined and indomitable. He is very in line with the feeling of a superhero! Although I like Big Brother, I will also call Big Brother Laolan hahaha Then there is the good brother, alas, why did you sacrifice your good brother who I have never met? I probably guessed that there were so many flags in front of me. When I saw him being surrounded and killed, I felt a little heavy, but the subsequent plots were the ones that really broke the defense. How can I put it? As a reader, I naturally have a good impression of the protagonist's good brother, not to mention that the author writes about brothers who are very friendly to each other in daily life. Although there are not many appearances in the past, it can be seen from a few conversations that these two people have the same affinity (?) The life experience of the good brothers is revealed. It became even better in the end. A lonely person met the only friend who could truly understand him. From then on, he was no longer alone when watching fireworks at the beach. He wanted to confess every time but always said "next time", but in the end he still didn't say it. What a genius invention. I just want to tell you "I will remember the fireworks I watched with you that day" because the author wrote about mutual loss so well. I am really sad that my brother died💔 I have been pretending that I can only let go of everything in front of my good brothers. Return to the truest self 😭 I like other plots very much, such as my sister's awakening. If she had died in a corner without a good farewell, her family would not know about it. The last words she said to her family were too bad. For example, wearing the No. 1 Unit vest, from the initial unfamiliarity to gradually getting used to the existence of family members, I understood what family is. It's a really good book🙏🏻

On a whim, I wrote a book review "My Avatar is Becoming the Final Boss" is undoubtedly a book with extremely clear advantages and disadvantages. Advantages: The ability to render scenes and emotions is very strong, the characters are vividly created, and the settings are quite interesting (although I have seen these settings in the past) Disadvantages: The plot is not as good as I imagined (except for the early stage, which I had high expectations for, I think the subsequent stories can only be regarded as barely close to passing standards). After peeling off the gorgeous shell, there is only a taste of the "bankrupt version of Gangnam" inside, which is just a spiritual candy that satisfies the dreams of a specific audience. The author has a strong ability to render emotions and create characters (90 points). Although you may think it is "pretentious", it is undeniable that the author is very good at creating the atmosphere of "a lonely boy against the world" as well as the must-try blackened elementary school students and beautiful girls. The author not only writes "hypocritically", but also writes it delicately. Whether it's the sharp edge of Black Chrysalis when she complains, or the arrogant posture of the eldest lady who repeatedly "gasps", we can feel the lifelike character image. The character's inner struggle, obsession and tenderness are unfolded like a picture scroll under the delicate brushwork. This kind of link obviously deepens the intimacy and interaction between the characters, and creates a sense of reading participation that "only we understand", which is also an important reason why so many people are addicted to it. However, I am not very satisfied with the design of the plot structure (70 points). The plot line of Unit 1 reveals the secret identities of family members in the early stages of the world view. The "Ghost Clock" beats the "Black Chrysalis" when it was released, and the Black Chrysalis fakes his death in the later stages. I am willing to give 90 points to these scenes, but the family members revealing their identities to each other are not that exciting (there is a sense of asymmetry that I think I can score 90 points but only use 60 points). Although the eldest lady is brilliantly portrayed in the plot line of Unit 2, the villains of the "White Crow Troupe" or the entire world view have a sense of "playing house in the fantasy of a teenager in youth". Here, evil deeds are downplayed or even not depicted, but the pain must be remembered. (This may arouse some readers' dislike of moral double standards, so let's stop there.) The Ripper's death and betrayal of the brigade are shortcomings (70 points, probably). Wang Ting in the No. 3 Plot line is equivalent to a target designed to "destroy for the sake of destruction" from the moment he appears (the routine can only be considered qualified, 60 points). As for Unit 4, it has returned to the "emotional narrative" that our author is most familiar with. Readers who are willing to appreciate it will enjoy it. Readers who do not accept "logic giving way to emotion" will not be interested in it (it depends on your opinion, I will give it 55 points, because I have tasted enough). As for the queen The episode progresses quickly, the pace is fast, and I won't say anything about it going straight to the ending (I respect the author's unwillingness to ruin Qian Shuiwen's will, so I won't make any unnecessary comments about it) In this regard, based on all the comments above, I am willing to give the author an objective score of 76 points. Recommended for: young readers who like the youthful pain of "Dragon", don't mind secondary lines, pursue a sense of emotional substitution rather than strict logic, and want to easily follow a completed work. Not recommended for: old bookworms who are sensitive to moral double standards, value the self-consistency of the combat power system, require the "mastermind behind the scenes" to truly show their IQ game, and can't stand the repeated jumping between "primary schoolboys acting cute" and "black and deep cripples". But, will it be that simple? (Tired of Wadokana!) Jie Jie Jie, what follows is my subjective evaluation. It is true that this book has shortcomings such as the internal fragmentation of the characters, serious moral double standards, and the collapse of combat power and logic, but it still has flaws. I like this kind of author who never changes his original intention. Let me turn back time to 2022 and get to know the author from then on. Whether it is "Phantom Crow Paradise" by "Chiryu Urushihara", or "Old Chess Players", "Superman's Ultimate Manual" and "Myth Visionary" by "Rainfall Bell", those elements that appear in different stories year after year are like scattered puzzle pieces (machine body, world tree, albino heroine, Iceland, around the world, chess players, family of gods, the mythical sequence Sun Wukong, an awkward but cherished villain organization, Japanese gambler Crow Urushi Genri... And many more There are a lot of them (so don't blame me for recognizing you when it was first serialized, hehe.) They appear repeatedly, but have never been discarded. They remind me of the days when I was hiding under the quilt and reading online articles in the second grade of elementary school, and of the days when I was in the second grade of middle school when I fantasized about becoming a "blackened elementary school student". When I came up with a touching design, I couldn't just use "logic" to measure this feeling. This respect for "the original intention remains unchanged" made me willing to give it [SCORE+10] - a subjective score of 86 points Dedicated to the author who still stubbornly cultivates his own fantasy in the torrent of online articles, and also to all readers who have not given up their ambitions as they grow up (Internal ps: I still can't type it out without conscience. Is it a score higher than 90? Forgive me as an "old person" who has been reading online articles since the second grade of elementary school. No matter how much I want to increase my emotional score, I can't ignore the plot loopholes. Although to put it bluntly, this book is literary saccharine for patients with advanced secondary disease - but who makes us willing to take this set? As for the remaining 14 points... Hehe, I will save it for next time. If the writing is better, I don't mind giving him a piece of moral integrity!

Finished spreading flowers! The writing style of this book is excellent, especially the characterization of the characters' moral values ​​and the elaboration of individual thoughts, such as the dialogue between the left brain and the right brain of Black Chrysalis. The emotional line is also one of the best among the many online articles I have read. The relationship between Xia Pingzhou and the eldest lady is like a bitter dark line, and the looming sincerity is presented against the sad background. To be honest, the level before Iceland is undoubtedly high. However, perhaps the expectations were too high, and the final climax fell a little short of expectations. But but! The eldest lady has won the throne of the palace! For this reason, I am still very willing to give a full score!

This novel is considered to be of high quality. I feel that saving it in this state can make the next player fierce. However, there is a problem. The protagonist's avatar's combat power increases too quickly. I feel that if I didn't intend to write it too long, it would be okay. If it is too long, I feel there is a problem.

When chasing the update, everyone gritted their teeth and wanted to kill them all. It was almost the end, and everyone was crying and shouting again, begging not to be killed. After reading the extra, I feel regretful, but it's so good, Ji Minghuan.

I read the latest chapter in three days, so I can just write down my feelings as an ordinary reader. First of all, from the overall reading experience, this book is undoubtedly a masterpiece: The protagonist's superpower setting is relatively interesting, and the parallel communication from multiple perspectives is refreshing; the plot design has a certain tension, the endogenous conflicts are reasonable, and create a distinctive character image; the writing is natural and smooth, and the dialogue is lively and interesting (little thought: the ideas of different characters are more unique, but the dialogue of some supporting characters is sometimes infected by the black chrysalis, haha, but it is already very good). It can be seen that the author put his best effort into writing, and the most important thing is that he has a passion. It is a work worth reading! It's not like some authors, although their writing skills and settings are good, but there is a sense of laziness and numbness between the lines, which is hard to swallow. After talking about the advantages, let's talk about the flaws (not criticism or guidance, just subjective feelings for reference). First of all, let me make a small complaint. Although the light novel is about male protagonists ruling the world, is 12 years old a bit too much? In the rebirth novel, everyone has to be a high school student. In the main body, elementary school students are a bit too genius, and they can also be distracted. It's basic to have a cheat at the beginning, but it would be better if the character's cheats were smaller. The growth of the supporting characters is good, but the growth of the protagonist is locked. For me, it is a pity that there is no room for further advancement. For people like Rudeus and Emiya Shirou, it is better to grow from talented normal people to supermen rather than from useless people to normal people. Of course I can understand that the author may be out of consideration for stability and pandering, but I believe that the author's dialogue and emotional skills are here, and he has the strength to write about growth. I look forward to the author's next book in advance. In addition, the protagonist has a skill tree to add points, so various skills are flashy, but the skill development of the supporting characters does not seem to be enough. It is completely based on instinct, and I don't know how ordinary extraordinary people develop and exercise their skills. The current transmission memory is even more heavyweight, and to be honest, it is a bit abrupt. In addition to the rich detailed settings under the overall setting, which is a very labor-intensive thing, it is an important step towards the masterpiece in my heart. It is also an important foundation for future film and television and fan creation. Moreover, now that there are large language models such as DeepSeek and GPT, it should be much easier than before to do these modifications. I hope that after this book ends with a good result, the author can take a good rest and polish the next book. The last thing is about the subsequent plot and ending. I personally feel that there is a small probability that the protagonist is reincarnated or continued by 1001, which is very boring. The higher probability is that the fourth body chooses immortality, and then there is a big BOSS or other crisis that destroys the world. After the decisive battle, the Salvation Society unlocks the restrictions on super powers, and the protagonist's ability explodes and swallows the BOSS + destroys the earth, and the world becomes a humanoid. The thing in Shark Garden should also have the time-based ability to send the protagonist back to more than a hundred years ago, and then lose his memory and have incomplete abilities, and become a ghost-like existence to find the penguin, but the penguin has also become a spiritual ghost, like the consciousness of Gaia, and has become a prophet to guide the closed loop of time. The next guess is that the ending is that each body will accompany its little girlfriend to live a happy ending after marriage, haha

I heard it was well written and my friend highly recommended it. Take a look 😠 It's a bit interesting...

It's so cool, the sacrifice of Black Chrysalis, the paleness of the whole family after their identity is revealed, is as rich as the fine wine that has accumulated for hundreds of chapters; the relationship between the kitten and the eldest lady, a pure and beautiful but repressed love, reaches a climax at the moment when the Ripper's head is cut off; the three of you, the idiot Shark, the idiot Red Dragon and the shady third prince, live a good life more than anything else 😭 This is what I want to watch! It's not the birth of the so-called reply king Zhan

A very good book, Half Immortal Grass.

My avatar is becoming the final boss. Now that the avatars are almost dead, who will become the final boss? It's so hard to guess.

The structure is clear, the story is clear, there is no word count, and there is a clear ending. The worldview is concise and clear without too many bugs. It is a very mature work. Judging from the writing, it is a rare good work. It is not written for the sake of writing, but tells a good story.

We are seventh on the monthly vote list, please update the ten chapters as soon as possible~

I have read through it three times. The flow of the text is quite good. The design of the exciting points and the sense of anticipation are absolutely first-rate. The subject matter is between the player's arrival flow + the mastermind behind the scenes. The writing style is very mature. I heard that the author is an extraterrestrial demon. It is true. He is indeed of top quality. I am looking forward to the future development of the plot. The design of such stories is often through the emergence and exploration of different characters. The sister, brother, and father in the first scene have all appeared, and Daoming and the protagonist have also shown their talents, negotiated with Lan Hu, and gained goodwill. Now it's the interaction with my sister, I'm looking forward to how to express the tension of the plot. This volume should have a big job, to explode the things that have been laid out previously. The author is very good at writing about people at first glance, and all the parts about people have been carefully considered. Magical girl sister, anti-hero dad, hero blue arc, and some others not revealed. Each character has a great life, and these great lives will eventually come together to burst out with brilliant brilliance. Summary: Come on, the author will update 😍😍😍

1. No one in the family of Unit 1 will be stabbed in a short time. There may be identity exposure or fake death but not real death, because the mystery of my mother has not been solved yet. If it were me, I would not have the heart to let them die with regrets 2. There should be a collision with the Salvation Society soon. It should be Unit 4 or Unit 5 if not later. Because the male protagonist's power has improved a bit, there should be a first trial by both parties. The result may not be good but there should be a new setting in the future 3. Female! (Personal needs) When there are non-human species, you shouldn't have a female account to change your taste. It doesn't have to be male or female. It's better to use some trash talk to tease other characters. 4. Black Chrysalis' identity will not be exposed unless you have to fake death to escape, because this identity is already too high, even if it explodes, you can't show it to him. Brothers and sisters explain how they got their information 5. Unit 2 should not kill all the brigade, but the Ripper. A lot of people in the brigade should also die in the following. It should be in a mission, and then Unit 2 takes advantage of the chaos to kill people and run away, waiting for Ms. Origami to find someone There are so many for the time being, I forgot about it.

Things like the distinction between good and evil, cause and effect, and morality are sometimes said to make people laugh; But when a book is written particularly well, the underlying structure may become particularly important. I hope I am overthinking...

What is the essence, power, plot, and world view of this book? No, it's love, my friend, it's love and tears.

"My Incarnation is Becoming the Final Boss" This book currently sets three types of people with special abilities: 1. Superpowers: possessing certain abilities; 2. Exorcists: signing contracts with demons; 3. Anecdotes: collecting and utilizing anecdote fragments. The male protagonist Ji Ming was forcibly taken in by the mysterious force Salvation Society because he was prophesied to destroy the world, with the intention of controlling the male protagonist. While being imprisoned, the male protagonist is loaded with the power of "Infinite Split Game", which can generate game characters simultaneously in reality. The character's skills can be upgraded with points, and he can control multiple characters at the same time (which will increase the burden on the brain). Up to now, the main line is that the male protagonist controls the characters, understands real-life intelligence, and saves himself when he is trapped. The created characters include Gu Wenyu (Dark Constraint Belt) and Xia Pingzhou (Chess). One of the highlights of this book is the erroneous social collision of the personal plots of the game characters, the dramatic conflicts of Gu Wenyu's family's "father is kind and son is filial, brothers, friends, brothers/sisters are respectful", and the vests are exposed. Now all forces are gathering at the Tokyo auction, and all the talents are here. The undercurrent of blood is about to reach a climax, and the climax is about to begin. Summary, Grain + Even Ambrosia, worth reading.

Can't the extra story be unlocked using starting point B? I voted for the monthly ticket and can't watch it.

The world view of the book is not small, and the author may not be able to grasp it.

This is the first time in recent years that I have read a novel so carefully. Sometimes the details and hints in the book have to be read back several times to understand. The writing of each character is also good, whether it is Ji Minghuan who turns the situation around, or his partners/friends/family members with distinct and unique personalities in each of his machines, as well as our villain boss mentor, everyone's image is particularly vivid. I can only say that the author is still too high as a newcomer, and I hope that the next work will continue to exceed the standard.

Like the title, why do I think World Tree is like a hotbed of chaos, they are all going to the core, they are all masters of battlefield cleaning, why does bgm 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂 automatically appear in my mind when I read it?

A very complete novel, with not a single bad word count. The rhythm is tight, refreshing and full. The most important thing is that I finally have a dumpling maker. I look forward to the next work.

Coming from comics, the protagonist's ability setting is quite novel, at least I haven't seen this kind of thing before. Secondly, the character design is also good, and it does not make people feel thin or labeled. Another very important point is that the main line is very clear and not procrastinating, but it does not make people guess the subsequent development at a glance and lose the desire to continue watching. Finally, the character's ability design, combat power setting, and fighting process are all highlights. Overall, I quite liked this book. I personally feel that the style of the front and back of the novel is stable and the taste is unified. There is no high or low, and you can taste the free part. You don't need to hesitate whether you like it or not.

I just started this book and just finished it. It took me a week to read it. Every time I finished it, I would feel reluctant to leave. Talking about this book, the pace is fast and not sloppy, but I think it lacks a bit of life, like a side story. It would be better if more can be inserted in the middle of the content, so I like the character Shark very much. It makes me feel It's interesting, and you won't be stuck on the main line all the time. Sometimes the most attractive part of a novel is lying in bed at night, and the content you read can make you roll around like you are having an ambiguous conversation. So I really like the extra content, but I think there can be more interactions between characters. I hope the author's next book will be more exciting. Thank you for your company.

A very good work, which shows that you can't judge whether it is an interesting book just by looking at the title. At first I came across this book out of boredom and saw that many people were paying attention to it. I found it quite interesting and started reading it. The more I watched it, the more I liked it, which reminded me of watching Dragons in junior high school, so I stayed up all night watching it. The characters are described very delicately, and there is a very two-dimensional perspective from a boy's feminine point of view. This feeling is indeed very strange and a bit similar to those Japanese light novels I read before. It is the only fun on the Qidian monthly ticket list, if you can adapt to this style. This is my first time writing a book review, and I haven't caught up with it for a long time. I hope the author can continue his work on the next book and write better and better.

What a great book, what a great book, what a great book. . .

Among the books I have read this year, it ranks in the top 1, and I can't control my desire to buy them all The writing is superb, and I personally like the emotional scene with Origami. If I still had doubts about Origami as the heroine at the beginning, after the emotional scene was written, I was conquered Plot content It's also very compact. It can be said that it ended suddenly after watching it. I even feel that Nian Beast can actually write more. I feel that Lin Xingshi's role is still too small ps. Although the ending of Xiaomai and Little Penguin as family members is okay, it would be more interesting if more emotional scenes could be written.

It's all subscribed. It's excellent among the new authors I've read, but it's still far from a masterpiece. It is based on the American hero super brawl and has multiple story lines, but it can take into account most of the characters. The characters are flesh and blood, with delicate emotions, and the handling of each character is also in place. It will not be like some online women who are all classified as harems. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort in this aspect, and the story will not be too repetitive and boring. The collision of multiple ability systems is also quite interesting. Although it does not feel as in-depth, of course the portrayal of Duo Duochan is still too dry. However, there are also some shortcomings. First of all, the world view and ability system are not very complete. For example, most of the stories are about the interaction between people with abilities. Are there stories about people with abilities and ordinary people? For example, ordinary people in modern cities worship mutants as heroes, and whether there was a relationship with god worship in the past. For example, the upgrade process and the assessment of strength are a bit vague. Another example is that the time in the book is really rushed, and many events cannot be unfolded. Also, although there are three ability systems, it feels more like a simple American brawl of ability users. The anecdote itself can be more flexible. However, it may be because of the light novel. The author did not intend to write these in the first place, or he planned to continue to improve the settings in the next novel. I would like to ask, does the author plan to continue writing the next novel in this worldview?

The pace is smooth and not sluggish, and the characterization of the characters is also good. Although there are some flaws in the setting, it is still a good book and can give you half a step of jelly.