Who Left Their Last Words Here?

It feels a bit like Apocalypse Forecast. I haven't seen this kind of literary youth flavor for a long time. It's also a bit similar to Urban Night Fight.

The first thing that deserves recognition is the character creation. Let's not mention the protagonist. Taking the two bento characters of Xiao Fang and Lao Liu as examples, a very three-dimensional and sensible character is sketched out in a small amount of pen and ink. The character design of the protagonist is also very interesting. This kind of kindness mixed with some neurotic and abstract characteristics has to be said to be very popular. This is a big reason why I can associate it with Fengyue. Secondly, the author's ability to tell stories is also worthy of recognition. The climax is not muddled, the daily routine is detailed, and the rhythm of the entire story is very well controlled. In this aspect alone, I think it is better than Feng Yue (not a disgrace, it is just that too many people mentioned it in the comment area). Of course, the sacrifice is not It is too suitable for Feng Yue's gorgeous vocabulary style, and it mostly adopts the bland writing style of light novels mixed with some complaints. However, I don't think it is a bad thing, and it does not affect the climax () Okay, now that I've finished my praise, I'm going to start outputting. First, the following is just for me as a senior online writer. The author's personal opinion. If you feel uncomfortable, you are not allowed to delete my review. How many years has it been since the Qing Dynasty fell? You are not allowed to be the emperor of the book review area 😡 The first problem is the rhythm, because I like to read a lot of fast books, so I am very aware of this (continue to stack armor, will I destroy the world today? I have complained before about whether the rhythm is inappropriate but no one cares about me 😢) After looking at the table of contents, the current progress is chapter 102, and the protagonist has been promoted to level three. Since there are six-level characters in the background, I assume that the top level in the world is level nine. So, author, how long do you plan to write this book? Three hundred chapters? I suggest that the author review his outline and check the rhythm. If he puts himself in the light novel section, he really needs to engage in daily life. Otherwise, it is better to invest in fantasy, but fantasy seems to be a bit cold () Because the pace is too fast, it naturally leads to my second question: story design. I said in the advantages that the author has the ability to tell stories, but the problem is that I feel that every story told by the author is too fast, or the pace of each copy is too fast. Take the first chapter of Lao Liu as an example. The previous chapter was still highlighting Lao Liu's goodness, but the next chapter just cut it off (not that I really thought it was a fake death when I saw that paragraph). It is very emotionally incoherent. Is it necessary to send out lunch boxes so fast? Although the gun in the first act will definitely go off in the third act, can you have a second act in between? Bro, even if your story is a little bit different, there is really not much difference between Lao Liu and Zhao in Zhanshen. Bro, give some time for the emotions to ferment. I really can't fast forward As for the setting and combat power, which are the most likely to collapse, the setting is not revealed much. To be honest, I don't pay much attention to the combat power () It's not about playing a big knife in front of the public.

Xiancao, if you always maintain this quality

It's expected to be a masterpiece, it won't be a big boss trumpet, right?

The full score is about 8.5 Points. The protagonist's character is similar to that of Chi Xia, his chivalrous style, his acting style is the old six methods, and he is affectionate and righteous. The author has written a lot of jokes in the book, which reduces the depression in this mysterious and cannibalistic background, and adds more knowing smiles, which makes people's eyes shine. If the author can complete the book at this level, it can be called a masterpiece. Readers who like Mysterious Flow, Lao Liu Flow, and Ren Xia Flow can try this

Can you write a book? Why are the heroines all female? I'm really vomiting.

After reaching the 100th floor, I personally threatened the author to add more updates. Hee hee, you don't want to be awake every day and night.

Dear book lovers, come and check in if you have nothing to do and help this book get out of the circle!

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I feel that Bai Zhou should be a little more depressed, a little more depressed, just muddle along, wait for death, and output a lot of nonsense every day. Only at the climax of the plot did he cheer up. There seemed to be a lion in his eyes, shouting that the mighty night would end here, and then he would blow up the enemy.

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I'm really convinced, why is the author like this? 😭

The feeling of a combination of dragon clan, apocalypse prediction, and night battle is so right, I would like to call you a god!

Next year, I can say that I can win the King of Heaven if I check just one person 😁. This wave of fantasy orders is blowing up. It's all about AI😭 I'm out of ideas.

I'll see if I can get into a league after I finish the exam (half of it is possible), it depends on how much funding I get 😁

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A timeline in which a certain white porridge became a master of the Body Pie and brought Charmander into the Tiankeng major? ()

If you like to write about women, you can change the protagonist to a woman, so it won't be awkward.

I put it on my bookshelf last year and read Chapter 60. I thought it was quite good. How is it now? 🙂

Chaowei, an AI restriction, promoted the author to the second place on the list

Niang Mingfei

In this fast-paced era, I haven't seen such a deep novel in a long time. It can satisfy the fast-paced reading and can also be savored carefully. There is no suppression of preaching, nor does it deliberately kill people for the sake of plot. There is no nonsense, and there is no personal stuff mixed in. The characters are written about normal people, the characters are described delicately, and each character is very vivid. There is no forced intelligence. I hope the author can maintain the quality! All monthly tickets are given

In fact, this is white porridge...

Gpt, please give me a good picture😡 Pretending to be the cover of a criminal investigation article

I think one of the biggest problems with this book is that the main character is in Xinshou Village. The book says it is just a low-ranking metropolitan area, but the organizations in it are too high-grade, especially the description of the Wu Lao Yuan. Is this an organization in a small place? The wording is too exaggerated.

How was the emotional drama at the end of this book? Who was it with? Did one of the heroines successfully escape?

(You filled in the city for the place where Bai Porridge grew up, or you accidentally entered the city and became a master later) In the Human Body School Gallery Bai Zhou's sharp robotic hand was holding a living heart. "Ah, Fang Xiaoxia, very good. After your treatment, this heart is as fresh as if it has just been taken out for a week. It seems that at this point, I have nothing left to teach you." There was no emotion in Fang Xiaoxia's mechanical eyes, but The Facia in her hand seemed to feel the joy of the creator, and her heart beat faster. "I have just been following the master's teachings seriously." Fang Xiaoxia said, looking down at Fasia. A warm feeling like a mother looking after her child appeared on her face, even though the silver mechanical prosthetic body did not have the function of making expressions. "Master" Fang Xiaoxia suddenly stopped Bai Zhou, who was about to get the teaching materials. Bai Zhou turned around and looked at her doubtfully, "Why do I need to learn about the characteristics of extraordinary people in various ways in addition to the knowledge of the human body?" Facia also seemed to be confused, contracting her muscles, Bai Zhou smiled, left Holding Tibia in his hand and hooking it up into the gallery, a thread of tendons and blood vessels was pulled. A work of art next to Fang Xiaoxia suddenly let out a roar that sounded like a wild beast. The muscles contracted violently. Several spines bound by the tendon threads suddenly stood up like a peacock spreading its tail, and as regular as a snake. Rhyming "Look, this work uses the Destined Ones from the Adventurer Path as the main body, and several Extraordinaries from the Adventurer Path as the material. I also referenced the techniques of Fauvism, combining the characteristics of the Adventurer Path itself and his special instincts to express the wildness in him," Bai Zhou said While explaining this work, I waved Tibia's retractable real Tibia's sword to draw several lines, so this living work reproduced the wildness of its material. "Do you understand? Only by learning to understand the characteristics of various methods can we create materials in a more appropriate way." Fang Xiaoxia nodded and looked at Facia in her hand. "Master, it's time for Facia to eat. Just in time, there seem to be uninvited guests in the gallery who have not been invited. Can you let me take them to visit your gallery?" Bai Zhou nodded and gently pulled a few lines to show Fang Xiaoxia. "I recently had an inspiration. These lines are connected. A device that can collect the scattered flesh and blood of uninvited guests to form an auditorium. This work of art is equivalent to a ritual. If you and Facia can't handle the guests well, you can use this. I will deal with the last uninvited guest. Let Facia have a good meal~"

A great victory for the hand-rubbing party. 😃Fortunately, I have no feelings for those books written by AI. I didn't even read it, some even added bookshelves, even after reading a few chapters, I didn't check AI in any of the books on the top. The author also directly rose in ranking.

Can anyone tell me when Bai Zhou will go to Tianjing? There are more than 300 chapters in Tinghai Map.

I see that many people say that this book is like Dragon Clan, so after reading this book, I don't need to read Dragon Clan. After all, I had heard of some bad things about Dragon Clan before, which I couldn't accept, so I didn't read it.