Heroine: Falling in Love Is Okay, but You Have to Pay More

Now I have watched a lot of heroines, and I found that most heroines have very good plots when they first conquer the characters, because there are few characters, all kinds of ups and downs, and abuse of the protagonist. The process of the character's attitude towards the protagonist slowly changing is also very interesting. Anyway, I love watching the plots of heroines during this period, but when the characters are completely conquered, more and more After a while, the plot will gradually become dull. At this time, you will usually pretend to die in the next place or change the world and start over, or directly end. This feels very difficult to write and it is easy to get addicted or unfinished. In fact, I personally feel that the ending of Xiaoyue's fishing system is already very good. Keep up the good work

I thought I was leaving the biosphere, but I shed a few tears for you

Unbelievable. That's right, I want to watch Nitian

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I saw about sixty chapters. I feel like the front part is fine, and the overall content is concise. But when I started paying for chapters, the content started to get a little watery. Especially for some ideas that are not very necessary, I always like to expand them into two or three paragraphs to increase the number of words. Originally, this question was designed to create a sense of freshness with concise content and a fast-moving plot, right? Slowing the pace like this makes it not as good-looking as before.

Winning this resurrection match is different. Not only is he good at writing, but he also writes fierce materials. It depends on this guy to recast the glory of the heroine.

A few days ago, I went to a friend's dormitory to play, and I bumped into his roommate. I was stunned on the spot. He looked very beautiful, had very good skin, wore fluffy clothes, had soft eyes, and was half a head shorter than the average height. And he is not the completely feminine Nanniang who is popular now. You can tell at a glance that he is a boy, but he is very good-looking and cute. He should be on the same level as Su Yan who has not been strengthened by the system. I really had surgery, and I'm not afraid to joke that I think about him every day now. I believe that as long as you have good looks, you don't need to deliberately attack ordinary people. Just showing your face can make people remember you.

Alas, after cutting so much, I'm afraid that after another three minutes of heat, you won't have much integrity left 🙂

"Hey, you look a little embarrassed!" Huh, I'm hearing hallucinations again. But a moment later, Li Shiying felt something was wrong again. The voice was not Gu Qing's, nor her mother's, but a voice she had never heard before. Confirmed that it was not a hallucination. Li Shiying opened her eyes with bloodshot eyes, searching for the source of the sound. A black boy in strange clothes leaned against the door and looked at her without blinking. The white camouflage on his face was particularly eye-catching. At this time, a week had passed since the birthday party. Li Shiying had stayed in this small room for a week, and her condition was miserable. The hair is messy, mixed together, and shiny. His eyes were dull, and his good-looking face was a bit decadent because it had not been taken care of. The white skirt has lost its original appearance, as if it were a piece of junk picked out from the trash can. There are a lot of takeout boxes scattered on the ground. Every time I put my foot down, I trust in my childhood playing hopping. This black boy made Li Shiying feel inexplicably familiar, but she searched her memory and couldn't remember where she had seen him before. Besides, the door is still locked, how did he get in? Li Shiying tried to cheer herself up and asked coldly: "Who are you?" The black boy stopped talking and walked up to Li Shiying and pulled the Z-drive. The blue energy wrapped around Li Shiying and rolled her up in the air. The ripples of time and space are intertwined, distorted and confused at this moment. Li Shiying finally remembered, this guy is Ike in the League of Heroes, but why did he become a man? "How much love can come back?" Ike smiled, "Do it again!" The blue energy expanded to the limit and disappeared with Li Shiying. …… Blue energy flashed in the darkness for a moment. Li Shiying felt dazed for a while, and then came not far from the door of her home. She seemed to realize something, and hurriedly took out her mobile phone and unlocked the screen saver. Time is extremely clear at this moment. 11:55. The date is... The day before her birthday. The sour feeling at the tip of her nose quickly spread to her whole body. Li Shiying's body felt numb, and she fell to the ground as soon as her legs gave out. The dirty white skirt was already stained with dust. Li Shiying covered her mouth, tears flowing out uncontrollably. "Woo... Wu!" The huge emotional impact made her body, which was already at its limit, even more tense. She couldn't even stand up. Ike, woo woo, Ike, can't you let me recover and send again? Woo hoo hoo, how can I see Gu Qing in this state! Li Shiying is now like that super big flying dance, flying but unable to dance. "Li... Shiying, you have to... Stand up!" Li Shiying choked and encouraged herself, "Gu Qing, I'm still... Waiting for you at home!" The name Gu Qing seemed to have some kind of magic power, and Li Shiying's body miraculously squeezed out some strength. She took a deep breath, relieved her emotions, and stood up straight. Staggering, he walked towards the home where Lu Qing was. Wait for me, wait for me! "Pfft." Li Shiying fell and chewed the mud. She had never felt that her body was so uncontrollable, just like the little white man in The Failure of Mankind, as soft as noodles. My mother's praises from childhood came to mind one after another. Li Shiying took a few deep breaths, stood up again, and walked towards the door. This was a difficult journey. Li Shiying never imagined that going home would be such a difficult thing, but fortunately, she persisted. Li Shiying stood in front of the door. There was no clean spot on her body. She looked like a homeless girl who had just emerged from the trash can, but she was extremely excited (knocked out). She, Li Shiying, did it. "Bang, bang, bang!" There was a rapid knock on the door, or a tap on the door would be more appropriate. He woke up Gu Qing, who was sitting on the floor and leaning on the sofa from a light sleep. Li Shiying is back! He was stunned for a moment, and a sincere smile subconsciously appeared on his world-weary face, but the smile only lasted for a moment before being replaced by panic. He turned on his phone and saw that the time had reached 12 o'clock. Oops, why did you fall asleep? Gu Qing's heartbeat was beating fast. He stood up, and after confirming again that there was nothing wrong with the arrangement, he picked up the ribbon salute that he had prepared and walked to the door. He opened the door anxiously. Gu Qing opened the ribbon salute according to the method that he had rehearsed several times in his heart. Colorful strips of paper mixed with little stars fell on Li Shiying's body. "Welcome home..." The happy welcome finally turned into confusion. Colorful notes fell on the dirty Li Shiying, forming an absurd scene. At first glance, where did this homeless girl come from? At second glance, no, this is Li Shiying! At the third glance, Li Shiying is a homeless girl. It seems that after the company went bankrupt, Li Shiying's life was really sparse. From Li Shiying's perspective, once she went bankrupt, her boyfriend since childhood disappeared. He couldn't accept it, and it was no wonder that he had to answer his phone calls. However, now, they will definitely have a new beginning, definitely. Li Shiying's eyes were red and swollen, tears kept falling, her lips were trembling, and she couldn't say a word. Gu Qing adjusted his emotions, stepped forward, hugged Li Shiying, and hugged Li Shiying tightly with his arms. He didn't care at all that Li Shiying was dirty. What he experienced as a child was much worse than this. Just come back, just come back... It would be great if you could forgive him. He will make up for it all. I will definitely be a good man. Gu Qing's world-weary face was filled with relief. In the night, they hugged each other like this until Lu Qing realized something was wrong. Was this hugging time a bit too long? And why is it getting heavier? A slight snore came from his shoulders, and Gu Qing was speechless. The cake arrangement he carefully prepared was useless. But now, I can say that without any scruples. "Happy birthday, dear!" Gu Qing's face was very, very red. …… Li Qingyan: Where is Li Shiying? Butler: I can't come? Li Qingyan: Let me ask you, where is Li Shiying? Butler: Tick-tick-tick-tock! I still like to make dumplings, and I like happy endings in everything I watch 🥺 If I make one myself, it can be considered as making dumplings, right?

At first I thought it was pretty good, but the more I watched it, the more pretentious it became, and it was pretentious while playing all kinds of jokes. It felt very fragmented, and the protagonist had too much inner drama.

I have read dozens of chapters. It's not that the book is not good to read, it's that it feels like it can pollute the Taoist mind and is afraid of turning me into a straight man. Most people read novels as if they were the male protagonists, but if you were the male protagonist in this book, I felt that something was wrong the more I read.

Everyone, we have old rules in the comment area Because this is a niche circle, Yueyue allows unrelated people who mistakenly enter this book because of recommendations to express dissatisfaction and even curse. For posts like this, we don't want to reply. Let them express their dissatisfaction and leave and just let the post sink. Avoid scolding. Harmony in the comment area is the first priority.

If you can't write it, don't write it. Who is disgusting? It's a waste of my money to write "Eunuch" once.

How long have you been talking about finishing but not finishing, saying that you are taking it seriously but not taking it seriously, and saying that you are going to start a new book? Too lazy to scold you

I was enjoying reading it at the beginning, but the more I read it, the more strange it becomes. This novel is a story about a boy and a girl. I can't read it because you are a straight man. You feel awkward because you are not a pervert. Those who find good-looking are either rotten girls or curvy ones. Now I want to read a few Liu Bei's stories to relax.

Yueyue, if you really can't do it, just keep writing about the heroine. You can have unlimited flow. You are always a eunuch like this 😡😡😡

It is touching that Lu Qing can be saved, but if the heroines fail to save Gu Qing, then I can see something like this: After his grandmother passed away, Lu Qing could make appointments with several heroines, show them the most perfect self, and then formally say goodbye on the pretext of wanting to live his own life. Not long after, the news was released that a man died in the bathroom due to excessive blood loss from the diaphragm bowl. His pale stone body floated in the blood-stained bathtub, like a dead white dove among rose petals. After investigation, the man died of purple sand, and all his property during his lifetime was donated to an orphan charity. Such a poignant plot of be.

Yueyue always wants to challenge her weaknesses and update the heroine well. In the future, there will be a heroine section at the starting point and you will be the leader.

As an old fan, I will no longer scold Haoyue. Although there will be regrets, I don't look forward to the ending of the book written by the author. I just want to watch this kind of tumultuous chat. When I have inspiration, I will write and I will read. When I have no inspiration, I will leave and come to the next book. Those who look at Yueyue are just like "It's exciting!"

The writing of this book is really bad. In the previous books, the male protagonist was not purely sadistic. He had a system and could stand as a bystander in a joking manner. His purpose was to conquer. All the sadness, collapse and injuries were staged. This is a pure sadomasochistic novel. It is a female pornographic abuse novel. The protagonist knows nothing. His feelings for his ex-girlfriend are real, and the hurt he suffered is also real. It is just very uncomfortable. The idea at the beginning is very interesting, but the writing at the end is really not good.

I don't really like this kind of "green tea" gyno-centric novels. I feel that the male protagonist can do anything for money, and there is no bottom line. Whether it's in reality or in entertainment works, regardless of gender, this kind of person feels a bit disgusting. I still prefer the "self-improvement" gynecological novels like the self-cultivation of the male god from 2D Potato. Although the essence of these two books is similar, they are about finding women in the world of nymphomaniacs, but the book of 2D Potato has a more comfortable look and feel, and has a stronger sense of immersion.

That doesn't mean that Gu Qing officially dated Li Shiying when he was 14 years old. It is known that he must have known each other before the formal relationship. It will only be earlier, maybe 13 years old. In the normal world, this is equivalent to falling in love with a 13-year-old girl when you are in college, and then officially dating and living with her when someone else is 14. Good guy, Li Shiying, I am straight up.

The group has already said it's over and can be dispersed. They said a new book will be released on the 10th.

If I don't write a new book, I will write it myself 🙂

Can it be refined♡(*´∀｀*)

I finished reading it. Although I cut it, the author's skills are still there. What a great book. It's as complete as White Lotus. What a pity. When will Yueyue be resurrected? 😆😆

More refinement! ! !

What about the new book😡😡😡

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