The White Lotus of the Female World

This book is poisonous! All straight men, please stay away! The author is definitely a girl! The main character is written like Marisa, who is a green tea bitch, and the gender of the characters in this book is changed and it becomes a female novel. There are too many poisonous points in this book, please note that there are ntl! This book will turn straight men into a pervert after reading this book. The author was definitely a professional writer of female videos before. . The setting at the beginning of this book put me off! It turns out that the main character at the beginning has been fucked, and was written in the style of a female video and turned into a green tea bitch packaged as a white lotus, Marisa, etc. It made me a little sick, and it was too poisonous, so I gave up the book!

Don't tell me that Shen Xing and Xu Bing really didn't pay attention to anything and disappeared from the world. After so many favorability points, they didn't pay any attention to the protagonist?

This book is probably the most enjoyable type of sadistic (or should I say enjoyable?) Book I have ever read. I remember I had read a similar book before... But I couldn't remember it. It's the kind of feeling where it's obviously a piece of abuse, but it looks very enjoyable. It's such a joy and satisfaction. If this writing technique could be copied, it could even become a new genre.

The fiancée chapter has fallen apart a bit, and it has become more and more inclined to ordinary women's videos. This kind of routine is difficult to write and update the rhythm. After writing this article, I suggest you write down the time to slow down your daily life and trace the thoughts behind it.

The quality is really good. The stories of the miracle doctor and the president are very nice. But the plot after returning home was too sadistic and perverted. It felt like reading a horror novel. It was very tiring to watch. Also, the male protagonist is such a bitch and treats the female protagonist as a tool. It is really unfriendly. There is no real emotion at all, which makes me, a kind and gentle Madonna reader, feel so cruel.

The author shouldn't write too detailed about the sex scene, I'm afraid I won't be able to see this book tomorrow! The plot of this book is already very attractive, so there is no need to spend too much energy on the sex scenes, otherwise the gain will outweigh the gain if it overturns.

Hiss,, the female video is so scary,,,

Finally finished reading it! Starting from the King of Killers chapter, I almost read at double speed. Personally, I still like the characters Xu Bing, Shen Xing, and Jiang Meng. The system is great and the extras are so sweet. The two characters Wei Shui and Wei Yishui are so closely related that Wei Shui has no sense of existence after he loses his memory and Wei Yishui goes offline... The character image has completely become a pendant qvq I haven't watched the fairyland plot between Di and Xiao Zeyan at all... The extra story is really sweet as the home of the system... Xu Bing and Shen Xing each have their own characteristics: ascetic doctor, domineering doctor President, it's very touching. I feel that my girlish heart (?) Has really sprouted... I really like Jiang Meng, especially the section about asking for medicine. I was rolling on the bed when I saw Jiang Meng. I have forgotten who she is (she seems to be the boss?) Oh... I think about it, Jiang Meng is reborn It's so cool... I really like the scene where the yandere Yanbao begs for medicine, don't be too sentimental... Song Qian is also pretty good, but there are too many domineering bosses... And Song Qian doesn't have Shen Xingxian It was really boring. The part about losing the child and begging Jiang Meng for medicine was basically a change of the soup without changing the medicine. I can only say that the same move cannot be used twice on the Saint. I hope that Yan in that world can spend ordinary and happy days with the harem XD

Divine book, but I think the two chapters by Xu Bing and Shen Xing are actually the best, and the one by Jiang Meng is actually not bad either. I just prefer death escape, but there is a disadvantage of death escape, that is, if you escape too much and are discovered by people from the past, it will feel like Su Yan can escape death every time. In fact, it is also possible to change the world (must be a heroine), but I still recommend staying in the original world and see how the author handles it. Also, I actually felt that the killer was not that exciting anymore, and the Jiang Meng chapter also lacked a bit of flavor, but I still thought it was good-looking, but it was just a bit inferior compared to the first two chapters. Come on, I've already ordered them all.

Writing a book is always difficult to accept, especially this kind of niche article. As more and more people read it, there will be more and more objectionable voices, and the book will face more and more difficulties. Many authors will choose to give up. I hope that the author will not forget his original intention and write an excellent and completed book. There are many readers like me who will always support you! Words🙏

If this little girl is the heroine of the new chapter, then I hope it's just her powers that become like that, rather than a clichéd lolita character that must appear in light novels.

How could this kind of novel appear in a male channel? 🤫🤫Oh my God? This is a rhythm that will bend male compatriots. How many women's clothing tycoons have appeared, and you are still not satisfied?

There is a novel about a woman next door that has been reported again. I really don't understand those who reported it. If you don't like reading it, you can just stop reading it

(There are book reviews and thoughts below. If the author is Kavin, you can read it.) Sorry, didn't the author talk about immortal characters? The front foot is also BB, the protagonist thinks that it is enough to abuse the character and make the lamb 🐑 regret it! I won't kill any characters, I think it's enough to let them abuse them and collect the regret points. Don't take away the character's life and future life. My previous thought was that when Xu Bing and the others were about to kill Wei Shui (for feeding 😂), the protagonist pretended to be a second personality and forced himself back, stepped up to block the gun (it's exciting to think about it), and then died (forcibly not letting the urban miracle doctor operate 😂). The protagonist hugged Wei Shui and said: Master, I did not betray you, eh... (Coughing up blood) and then bb a paragraph about the master who just can't let go of the master anyway, which is sensational. Then he faked his death (to make readers cry💧, and to gain points of regret). It was very awkward to write the plot where the protagonist stabbed Wei Shui to death with a knife. But once it's written down, it can't be changed. I think it's easy to write it like this: the protagonist's second personality comes back and forcibly takes Wei Shui out of the sea. (Don't say that the protagonist is weak. The plot is over and done with. There is no need to go into details. The bottom line is that when a person is extremely angry, he kills a tiger with a shovel.) Then he hugged his master and cried bitterly, "Master, please don't leave me. Besides, I won't let you die!" (Note that Wei Shui must be sober to listen). Then he used my skills for everyone to cure Wei Shui in front of Wei Shui. (It also fulfilled what the protagonist said before that he would not kill any character without depriving them of their future life.) Then the injury was transferred to the protagonist, and the blood on the protagonist's chest began to flow freely! Then Wei Shui hugged the protagonist and cried bitterly: "My dear, come back, I won't lose you again! No! You don't want to die! Ah...! (Screaming) I will take you to treat your injuries now." Then on the way, the protagonist weakly said: "Master, I am back, I really miss you! Master Don't cry, I feel so bad! I'm so happy to see you again, Master! (Coughing up blood again) Master, I really want to be by your side all the time. (It's so emotional that I'm so moved that I'm heartbroken.) Let's write about the protagonist using his bloodless hands to wipe away Wei Shui's tears💧, but when he raised his hand halfway, he paused and then dropped it. (The protagonist can pretend to be dead or not.) Then Wei Shui screamed in pain: "No...! Baby! You just came back, I don't want you to die! No...! Ah...! Baby, hold on and you'll be at the hospital soon (I don't know what the hospital on her island is called, so let's use hospital instead)" The regret value exploded to two thousand! (The sheep's organs were pulled out by pulling out the wool so hard 😂) I was so moved when I wrote it that I even felt involved in it! I was moved to tears! (I hope the author can read my book review (of course I would be happier if you copied it from the author. However, as a person with high emotional intelligence, I will not think that the author copied the book review. I spoiled it in advance 😂, right, the author is awesome.) Later, the author can write that the protagonist comes back but falls into a permanent sleep, or he can directly write to death. Either way can make money. . However, Wei Shui had to wait anxiously outside and then the doctor came out to tell her. Then the author wanted to move to the next lamb by describing the expression of his dead father. I have already thought about it for you, so I just wrote that the protagonist kept lying in the hospital bed and one day he didn't know what happened. The bed is empty and the heart is empty! You can pick up another wave of Wei Shui's wool (who asked her to do it so many times, so I need to pick it up twice), but I also have to give a little hope that maybe the protagonist is still alive. If nothing happens later, I can go back and pick up another wave of wool. , Almost kill me) {"TopicId":"579960761355534336","TopicName":"The White Lotus of the Female Queen's World"} {"NickName":"Drunk and Ridiculous","UserId":346862844}

Talk about your feelings: I read this book not long after it came out. The writing was okay at first, but I tended to prefer the kind of writing that purely tortures the male and female protagonists. Why? Because at the beginning, although I knew that the male protagonist was acting, there was too little inner activity. I gave my opinion, and the author should have accepted it. So there are a lot more inner activities in the back than before The first two articles were pretty good, because there are still people from the first two volumes in the third volume. The third volume is well written, except for the ending. Why do I say this? Because I don't feel that Jiang Meng is abused. Because the fourth volume of Jiang Meng has not been released, I don't feel that he is abused. I only feel that the male protagonist is abused. Did Xu Bing and Shen Xing come out to remind me that they are in pain now? I can feel it. Volume 4: The Killer Volume, the emotions are processed too quickly, and I am a little anxious. And he still didn't abuse Wei Shui, and he lost 100 million. The fifth volume is a very poor volume in my opinion. The relationship with the time traveler was more like child's play. In the end, I didn't feel that he could regret it much. What's more important is that she traveled through time and there will be no more of her in the future. I feel that she was not abused. She can just let the system eliminate her feelings and take them out when needed. Volume 6 is the worst in my opinion. I don't think the identity of the King of Bing makes any sense. I don't feel that he is the King of Bing. Except for a few moves against Wei Shui, Xu Bing can also fight against a few moves because Wei Shui has lost his memory. I thought there would be some god-level plot after Wei Shui regained his memory, but it jumped directly to the seventh volume. I hope the seventh volume will be better. The author's early trap was that Su Yan returned to the previous world to do some things. Then this fairy world will have at least a million regrets. Let's see how the fairy emperor can regret A book I like very much. I hope the author's next book will be better.

Such a good subject matter, don't let it be a eunuch, don't make it a mess, the author must stick to it

Ask for refinement

The author gives you some poisonous advice The protagonist ran out after discovering what Jiang Meng did The drug took effect while crossing the road And then unfortunately he was hit by a car and became a vegetative state Later Xu Bing and Shen Xing found out Then......... The author can consider this development 😏😏😏

Bite your tongue and commit suicide, but you will not die in reality -_-||

I'll watch it again on January 1st, and I won't watch it until chapter 50.

After 40 pictures, the writing became more and more excessive. It was really too much. The author used to write pornographic novels, right? This book will be 404 sooner or later.

Very pretty. But because it is relatively niche. There are also fewer people watching. Come on, support the author

Does anyone know how many QQ groups there are?

Su Yan

Su Yan in my mind

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As a transvestite, I say that this kind of novel is very suitable for me😏

I hope the author will not forget the previous characters and can make some extra daily chapters to write Su Yan, Xu Bing, and Shen Xing in this community. Everyone is a neighbor. Every time a character is added, a neighbor can be added. The miracle doctor chapter is really well written (✪▽✪). You succeeded in writing them very real. You have this person's image and personality in your mind. I hope the author will not abandon the characters you created! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง!

Su Yan, come back soon! I can't help it!