Sharing Talents, Starting with The Outcast

The first chapter is problematic. Zhang Chulan was attacked on a mountain the first time, and then taken away by a hotel near the school with almost no resistance the second time. Where did the scene of a group of zombies chasing him to the beach come from? Moreover, those zombies only showed the physical abilities of ordinary people. How could the protagonist be knocked unconscious without any resistance?

The main character is a chatterbox and has a rather low IQ.

I couldn't bear to watch any longer after Xia He's second attack.

What a clown protagonist… He's poisoned to death in the first three chapters… He lies on the ground pretending to be unconscious, saying he doesn't want to attract attention, but then immediately performs some kind of indestructible act to get everyone's attention… Later he says he wants to survive, but then immediately calls out Feng Baobao's name to act mysterious… His personality is seriously contradictory in one chapter, like a character with severe schizophrenia…

Why do so many people like to join Demon Slayer as servants and worship that Japanese lord?

I watched it! There were all sorts of dangers and death threats aimed at the protagonist, but he didn't kill a single person!!

Is this written by a level 4 author? It feels like it was written by a novice. It seems like they wanted to write well, but the additions at the end made it a mess.

Speechless, absolutely speechless. The writing could be any more damn embarrassing.

The sentences are particularly awkward, it feels like it was written by AI.

Did you sell the account? It doesn't seem like you're a Level 4 author.