Sharing Talents, Starting with The Outcast

There is a problem in the first chapter of Speechless. The first time Zhang Chulan was attacked in the mountains, the second time was in a hotel near the school and she was taken away with almost no resistance. Where did the scene of a group of zombies chasing her to the beach come from? Moreover, those zombies only have the athletic ability of ordinary people. Can the protagonist be knocked unconscious without resistance?

The protagonist has a bad mouth and a low IQ

Since Xia He's second attack, I can no longer watch it.

The protagonist of a good clown... He was poisoned in the first three pictures... He lay on the ground pretending to be comatose and said he didn't want to attract attention, but after he said it, he immediately practiced the Vajra Indestructibility to attract everyone's attention... Later he said he wanted to survive, but he immediately called out Feng Baobao's name to pretend to be mysterious... There is a serious personality conflict in one chapter, just like a severe psychopath...

Why do so many people like to join Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba and become servants and worship the devil lord?

Look! Various dangers threatened the protagonist's death, but in the end, the protagonist didn't kill anyone! !

Is this written by a level 4 author? Why does it feel like it was written by a novice? I feel like I want to write it well but the things I added at the end make it look different.

I'm really speechless. The writing could be a little more fucking embarrassing.

The sentences are particularly awkward, and it feels like they were written by AI.

Have you sold your account? Don't you feel like a level 4 author?