Journey to the West: Start by Simulating the Immortal Golden Body

I originally thought it was a Westward Journey fanfic, but after following dozens of chapters, I found it to be quite good. The real attraction is the original simulation world, but it is too short. The second specious Lotus Lantern World is also quite good, but it is also too short. No matter how well written your fanfic is, it is still a fanfic, but the audience is too small. The prehistoric and Westward Journey novels are written with the same routines. I have long been tired of reading them. Only the original simulation world is interesting. I suggest that the author should change back to life simulation: start with the Eternal Golden Body. Most people don't even have the desire to click on the words "Primordial World" and "Journey to the West" when they see it. Good original writing is the key to attracting people.

Tell me your thoughts, for reference only You can reduce the number of simulated plots. If not, you can also create second creations or original works. There are many excellent works, and second creations have taken off Finally, please update soon!

A bunch of people complained about simulation because there were too many words in it, and the title was "life simulation," isn't that what they wrote? What can I write about the simulated world that is separated from the world?

That kid says it again, the protagonist's methods and ideas in this book may not be consistent with the ideas and ideas of some adoptive fathers. After all, everyone has different ideas, so I hope you foster parents can understand. My foster father, if you think you can't stand this, please give this kid a chance to eat and support our family. In addition, I would like to thank my adoptive father for your support. It is you who allowed me to get more than 500 collections and more than 100 views without any recommendation. My parents gave birth to me and raised me. My adopted fathers asked me to support my family. A foster father, a foster father for life!

After writing the third simulation, I chose the sword reward with the greatest hidden danger instead of choosing other good rewards. This book was basically worthless. There are obviously normal choices not to choose, but I have to choose this one and still analyze a chapter. Not many people watched it in the first place and wrote this kind of plot. This is probably going to be an explanation of what was affected. This kind of routine is really disgusting. When giving simulation rewards, aren't you looking forward to finishing the game to see what good rewards you can get? As a result, if you come to Tuo Da, you have to choose the one with hidden dangers.                                                                                                                                                                                                                           posing the poison in the first few chapters released, otherwise, you would have suffered a big loss if you had already ordered them all." I'd say he's a good person in this regard. Subscribing to a chapter specifically as a thank you.

Yes, I just want this rhythm, not too stressful

How to put it this way, the opening fairy grass, whether it is The Sims or the main story, is well written, but after going to the Journey to the West, it becomes difficult to read. It jumps too fast. The chapter is still difficult and the next chapter is difficult. There is no continuation at the end or the beginning. It is very interesting to read. It's uncomfortable, there is a sudden turning point with no foreshadowing, just a patch of blood rebirth, and the concept of good and evil is also bad. A real strong man never bullies the weak, and always faces difficulties. Why don't you go to Shituoling when you are strong? They have said that even a quasi-sage can fight, so he is timid.

I feel that what the Tathagata said is correct, "Your eastern land is Nanfangbuzhou. Just because of the vastness of the sky, the vastness of things and the density of people, there are many deceptions, unfaithfulness and filial piety, unkindness and unrighteousness, and you have committed endless sins." Living sacrifices, human cannibalism, human murder, even Li Shimin imprisoned his father and killed his brother, Zhumen's bones were frozen to death on the stinky road of wine and meat, etc. Although there are monsters doing evil in Xiniu Hezhou, they have done evil for a hundred years, and they probably haven't even started a riot in Nanzhanbuzhou haha 🙂

The author needs to run away. The new map is directly above the Heavenly Dao, and the combat power has collapsed. In what world can such cultivation be practiced? Even if the red-haired old monster is above the Sacrifice Dao, it is not considered to be an awesome combat power 🙂

Isn't it better to use [] directly? Writing a bunch of nonsense is a waste of time. Can't you write the main story? I'm watching the simulation, why should I watch the main story? , I want to watch the main story, so why else should I watch the simulated first person? , Wouldn't it be good to directly write about what happened in this year and what treasures there are, and then skip a year and continue writing?

There is no distinction between priority and secondary. The number of words in the simulation is more than the reality of the protagonist. You are wasting the number of words.

As the saying goes, there are three golden pictures. I can't stand the first one. Even a primary school student can't write such a thing.

I see some people say that Tathagata says Nanzhan Prefecture is full of deceit and deceit because the monsters of Xiniu and Hezhou eat people and eat humans, which is the law of the jungle. However, Nanzhan Prefecture has wars for years, with people eating people, sons killing fathers, and fathers killing sons. It can be said that people kill more people than monsters eat.

I feel that there is not much difference between drinking the male protagonist of the dark style, he is selfish

The game after the end of Journey to the West is too big and not interesting anymore

It's not good. Stop writing. It's a waste of time.

The writing style is so dull, but the writing style is not good, and it doesn't feel like it has the flavor of fairy tales and fantasy.

Life simulation, if nothing else, I am very curious about who came up with this genre 🙂 Your half-day simulation has nothing to do with the main story. The story is sparse. Can readers feel a little bit more involved 🙂🙂

Dear adoptive fathers, it is very important to read the new book issue. I beg you all adoptive fathers, I feel that this book is still interesting to read. Please read the latest chapter after the update. Thank you all the adoptive fathers for your investment, collection and full support in reading. Thank you all the adoptive fathers again.

Didn't you post the ending?