After Rebirth, of Course You Have to Refuse to Express Your Feelings

Emm Since I have never done anything before rebirth, and my happiness level is still lower than that of an ordinary couple, why bother hanging from a tree? The beginning is a little worse, let's see how it goes later.

Promise me not to show up about the heroine's childhood sweetheart, the heroine's engagement, or the heroine's intimate relationship with another man in her previous life.

An obvious problem is that the author is very clear about campus youth, but not so much about married couples (currently until Chapter 70) The subject of this book is a divorced couple traveling back to the campus era together, but currently it seems that Su Yiwan is mentally immature and has forgotten most of the things before his rebirth, resulting in The look and feel of the plot is exactly the same as that of her not being reborn at all, but just inexplicably falling in love with the male protagonist - the author likes to use "glare eyes" to hint to readers about the flaws of this character and the involuntary divorce before rebirth, but the same small means seems to be used too much without any real psychological narrative, making people doubt the rationality of this description. Furthermore, the current development of the plot seems to be fast but is actually slow. The two quickly established a romantic relationship in the eyes of others, but in fact the male protagonist does not want to rebuild this relationship due to his past life experience. This should have been a very big point of contradiction—also the so-called "exploding point"—but the author forcibly suppressed it. The two of them once had a close relationship, and some small habits brought about by this relationship are enough to surprise others and even the male and female protagonists themselves, and the author does not describe them in depth. I don't know when I plan to write the above, but it is obvious that the current performance of this book is average. In my opinion, it lacks the explosive point, or the climax of the plot. In a romance novel, the climax of career development always follows the climax of emotional development. Maybe the author thinks that the ups and downs of the plot are within his control, but as a reader, I don't think so. Readers really want to see some plots with more emotional fluctuations to further develop the relationship between the two, instead of the current daily watering down, which even makes me unable to see the hope of further development. Of course, there is another possibility. The author does not think that the setting of "divorce" needs any major explanation after rebirth. The main theme of the work is that two people fall in love again without having to face the discord and mistakes of the past together. That can only be said to be my own sentimentality, and I wish the author's writing will go further and further in the red sea of ​​daily dog ​​food.

Aren't you uncomfortable reading it? After reading a few chapters, I feel like I'm going to be disgusted to death by the protagonist's sister.

The most annoying thing is having to be reborn all over again. Can't you change to someone else?

I don't understand it a bit. The current writing shows that the heroine also liked the hero in her previous life, so why is there such a thing as sleeping in separate rooms after marriage?

Well written. I just don't know if the author can stick to it. It's not very popular.

Tomato, have you succeeded in chasing love? 😁 Come back and write about pure love, and give me some experience.

Author, your beginning is not attractive at all, what do you think?

We have already made it clear. It is recommended that we show off our cards directly. It would be very uncomfortable to hide it like this.

Sweet? 🙂

Although the beginning of "Not Yet" is cliche, the writing is fluent and gives me the motivation to continue reading. I added it to my bookshelf to gain some weight and read it. I will give you a reward to support you 😄

After reading the first three chapters, could I ask whether it is a single wear or a double wear?

The writing has no sense of continuity and is a bit stiff, but keep going

Not enough, not enough, I watched the latest chapter in three hours

The writing is good and the pacing is okay. Why is no one watching?