Rebirth 12: Qingmei Died After Graduation

Let's talk about a few points. What attracted me to this book at the beginning was, on the one hand, the professional development in the field of architecture. At least it can be a fresh read for people who have not known this before, and it is more or less different from other poorly written urban novels. The other is the beautiful childhood love between the male and female protagonists. In the end, it turned into a narrative of Internet entrepreneurship. Although it was not written explicitly, didn't the plan and direction go towards Douyin? The career line is vulgar to the point of being completely trashy, but the writing power and knowledge reserve are not enough to support the writing of this aspect of the story. The various plots and characters are all classics. And the emotional line has become extremely poisonous. Doesn't the heroine's character feel separated from the front and back? I also followed other people's example of pretending to be a love saint and setting up a Shura field. Do you understand what you learned? Once the field is laid out, it turns into a polite test again. Stop at that point? So what should I watch? Don't you understand that it's nice to see you all awkward and squirming? Actually, when I first read this book, I thought I had discovered another seedling (the one next door, Rebirth 08 Diagnosed Medical Master, I have been following since I first read it at 100,000 words), but I endured and read the entire content, and ended it here. It's a pity.

This book is well written and highly professional, but there is a big problem with the character design. Introduction: There is a single female protagonist, and her character always emphasizes that she only loves Qingmei. But through the description of Lin Xiao's PUA and her previous life's financial affairs, it's disgusting to say one body and another. You are not as good as the Chen Gou next door. You are a scumbag and want both. Urban single heroines are still a minority, let alone the harem. Two or three heroines with a lot of descriptions of Shura field conflicts are enough for you to write.

If you have a single heroine, don't give away a girl as a supporting character. If there are more girls, just accept them. Don't give away girls.

From the very beginning to now, when something happens later, I feel like the running account has no sense, and in order to speed up the plot, the business line is being streamlined like crazy...

The writing is not bad, but the proportion of love is not high, so the poor results are expected. After all, most readers come here for sweet love. However, it may also be seen that the author is indeed good. The next book can be written in a different track, and this one can be cut.

You mean, 2012? Chronicles?

This book has a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists. If there is only one female protagonist, there shouldn't be so many emotional scenes involving other girls.

This is a book that you have to read dozens of chapters before you feel it is good. Now that you are about to gain strength, please don't give up, author.

Why not stock trading? Stock trading is the way to get rich.

You have to decide from the beginning whether it will be single or multiple, but Shura Field should be multiple.

The previous plot seems smooth and comfortable, but starting from chapter 60, it becomes a little different. The interspersed cliche plots are a bit like a plate of delicious dishes suddenly discovered by flies, which is incompatible with the author's writing style. The literary youth flavor, coupled with the cliché plot, feels a bit too forced. Also, the author is really not very good at writing female characters. None of the female characters are likable. I don't know if it's intentional, or it's caused by the author having too few contacts with women. The pretentiousness, coquettishness, artificiality, and stupidity of women make people feel bad and make them hard to like.

Change the name, how can there be a book title with the word "death" in it! ! !

The latest two chapters are out, but I personally feel like they should be discarded.

Update, there are other books that need to be updated too

Hiss~ There is a very calm feeling in this author's behavior. I have only felt this feeling when kissing pigs. I thought there would be a lot of people reading it, but why are there so few collections? Is the plot behind it too bland?

Very well written, I like Lin Xiaoxiao

There is a book review where a pure love warrior took a screenshot of my previous single chapter (Pure Love Is Invincible). Then several pure love warriors left messages below, saying that I was undecided and wanted to wait and see. ……＼(｀(j))/ Yes, the author failed to achieve a completely single line, and only one female protagonist appeared. This is my problem. But it's not bad at all. Besides, isn't the label of this book Shura Field? Not off topic. Besides, the male protagonist likes Jiang Ci. So far, he has not been written about licking other female characters, and his character design has not collapsed. There are other female characters who want to pursue the male protagonist, so what can we do? I can only guarantee that this book will not contain any disgusting plots such as cuckolding, giving away girls, or licking dogs. They are all chasing after the male protagonist. Is this... A poisonous point? In this way, originally it was a group when it was put on the shelves. But in the past two days, my colleague suddenly had something to do, and I had to cover for my colleague, so I was a bit busy. I will finish the group in two days. You guys can discuss how to move the emotional line. I will refer to your opinions. Or you can discuss it directly below.

When was this Juan punished? He had several big feuds. Didn't he have friends? He was ruined and lost his job.

Two hundred chapters and I'm still struggling, I...

The bookworm is here, a classic urban rebirth career article. The writing is good, and the plot structure is okay for the time being. The male protagonist's design is also very good. It feels like a full-level boss starting a new game. He is stable, smooth, and has everything under control. I have two suggestions. One is to write the title, introduction, and content of the book separately. Looking at the title, I thought it was something like Summer Reappearance. This needs to be changed. The second is the cause of death of the heroine in her previous life. Please don't write any plot about the crotch. I think the KTV plot in Chapter 28 seems to have some signs of this. This kind of plot is written to be sprayed all over. I voted for this month's monthly vote yesterday. I just went to order other books and got 3 votes. Come on, author.

I finished reading it in one day. Come on, I recommend everyone to read it.

The writing and plot are quite enjoyable online, but I don't know why the results are not good. I'm really afraid that the author may have cut it.

I feel like the author didn't think about the big framework and just wrote it.

This book does not advance at the same speed as ordinary online novels, where you can't wait to step on the accelerator of the plot and character relationships. Instead, it makes people feel comfortable. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Is it suspense or romance?

It's pretty 😊

It's quite good. It's over a hundred chapters and I haven't downloaded it yet.

No update time? It's on the shelves and you haven't worked hard yet?

This book is okay, but why are there so few people reading it? 🤔

After watching Spider-Man, I feel that if Jiang Ci does not recover his memory, it will be better if Lu himself finds out the truth in the future. Qingmei seems to be a bit similar to Cheng Jinchuan who drives the plot, Qingmei is the main thread and Jinchuan is the hidden thread, plus Chen Xinran, I look forward to the ending 🤐🤭