A Lonely Ghost Story Game

In order to save a so-called friend who I haven't seen for more than ten years, I put myself into a scene where I could lose my life at any time. I don't have much ability. I don't know how useful the props I got at the end of the novice trial are. I don't know how dangerous the scene is. There shouldn't be many people who can take on the role of the protagonist.

The plot is that there is a female ghost in red who falls in love with a pig's trotter for some reason, and then the pig's trotter commits suicide and the female ghost saves her. The plot is the same

Let me talk about the evaluation first, then the opinions, and finally the shortcomings Overall, the first copy performed well, and the second copy was quite satisfactory, which is interesting but not amazing. If you don't have many books to read, it's okay to pick them up and pick them up. If you don't have too high expectations, it will be average to above average. I would like to give you two suggestions. The first is to have a proper review after the dungeon ends. You can focus on the difference between the normal clearance method and the protagonist's clearance method, as well as the dead end. This can effectively eliminate the feeling brought by the protagonist's halo that "this dungeon will not be cleared normally unless the protagonist cheats". The shortcoming is a common problem among new writers of supernatural novels. In order to improve the rhythm, the settings are thrown away, resulting in the combat power being increased early. Supernatural novels are actually very taboo about introducing the combat power system too early. To be honest, the look and feel is not very good, and the rhythm can easily break. My outrageous comment is that even in the uncut version of House of Horrors, which is already very good in this regard, the rhythm of the plot was actually quite slow after the red clothes were introduced too early and the magic battle started. To put it bluntly, it is still a classic problem [the nature of a horror game changes if you give it a gun]. From my personal point of view, No. 3 Is released too early. It would be better to release at least the third or fourth copy before releasing it. However, since it has already been released, the author can only find a balance by himself.

The first story is well written. Although the content can be roughly guessed, it feels well handled when reading. However, the content of this world feels a bit awkward. The mystery of one's life experience is too old. Isn't it describing modern society? Also, two years of rumors have become reality, and there are investigators. Don't let ordinary people appear to be unaware. Overall, well written

Author, please take some time to think carefully about how to write it. From the second scene onwards, it becomes unreadable, especially after the female ghost is introduced, the sense of weirdness plummets.

At present, the plot that the author wants has been implemented smoothly, which is good. The disadvantage is that the desired plot is a bit too fast. At this pace, the strength will reach the sky after 300 chapters. If the increase in strength is slowed down while the rhythm of events remains unchanged, and some pretentious copies are interspersed in the main line to ease the plot, the same main line can produce at least 200 more chapters. For example: The protagonist suffered a defeat in exchange for a great increase in strength. He was beaten out of stone before he got over this hurdle and stepped into the next realm. What should he do at this time 1. Enter the next main line and continue to suffer a defeat 2. Daily life. Plain and simple, out of touch with the worldview 3, as a mid-level investigator, he led a group of evil ghosts approaching the bloody robe, and led a junior investigator to bully Lese Black Robe. Everyone would choose 3. If you don't show off, your strength will be meaningless. Then there is the problem of dungeons. The protagonist rarely searches for and investigates carefully at present. Most of them are what I think, and then it is like this. It is like the second clown book. It should first analyze the survivors' words and reason about some situations, and then visit around or organize database inquiries to investigate the clues. Analyze the exact time when the ghosts appear to cause trouble every day. During the safe period, investigate from the outside to the inside, and monitor the safety. Controller, the main character is clown. I guess there is something wrong with the clown. There is a clown doll inside, so the clown doll is probably a monster. Monitor them. What if they are not clowns? This is not in line with the objective basis. Although the result is, it is from the author's perspective. The protagonist knows nothing except the survivor's recording. Why does he know it? Therefore, in this kind of copy-like article, the author lacks the process of finding reasoning. Chapter 100, 2 main-line dungeon advancements, 2 branch-line dungeon advancements, the strength spans from ordinary people to senior investigators, but the experience does not match the strength. Therefore, what is most needed at present is the pretentious dungeon, slowing down the advancement of the main line and the improvement of strength, and at the same time increasing the protagonist's dungeon experience.

Open the first chapter → click on the upper right corner → search Shen Yue. "A chapter only has a few thousand words? You know how to count words?"

There are only 6 posts for Chapter 71, but this book is recommended every day. Is the author stepping on something and violently controlling the comments? I am more or less afraid to read it 🙂

If Fu Meizi doesn't wake up, then how can he and all the investigators and black robes defeat the professor?

I've finished reading the first copy and I feel very good about it so far. I've picked up the book list ~ I hope the author writes well. Don't be a pigeon 😄

The more I watch, the more I feel like I have a house of horrors.

If you look at the introduction, you will know that the inspiration comes from Dark Gathering, also known as Dark Pokémon.