I Want to Be Reborn so Much

Why do you write your narrative so fast every time, and there is no emotional description at all? I don't want to read a grand narrative and grand description. You can even open a dozen chapters to talk about Sister Xia Xi, Pao Pao, and Li Shuang in the past life, and then write about daily life. I feel so boring when you are so stupid. I have written all the rebirth articles. Really, Brother Pastry, I started reading you from the two books of Secret Agent and Ying Que. Every time It's been like this from time to time. All emotions come naturally, but how come they come naturally? Tell me, these routines in urban rebirth novels are very tired, and every time they are suppressed, suppressed, suppressed, suppressed, and then exploded. As a reader, it is very tiring. Feifei, Jiang, and Li did not appear in the back part. Moreover, I have to write about Zhang Yin, an inexplicable character, and write about what she regrets in three chapters. Alas! Even if you write about the daily life of the people at the bottom who made more money because of your factory, you are like a crocodile in the early stage. Who comes and who dies before level 11, but you can't bite anyone later. I really like your work. I hope you can give this book a good ending. Thank you!

I'm not going to complain, because it seems to be a new version here, so I read it outside. To be honest, it was the first time I read a novel and I couldn't get enough marks. The first part of the novel is really good, until the university stage, the emotional line is very exciting, and the career line is also fascinating. There is nothing to say about the combination of the two, except that the pace is a bit fast But later I wonder if it was written by one person. From the second time I started a business, it was all about career, the emotional line was pitiful, and the career has been depressed. I came to read the novel about rebirth, not to see how pitiful starting a business is. I also saw in the comments that some people said that the subsequent careers are all a routine, changing places, and I don't understand, ah, success. I really don't feel like the author who could write the previous article. When I saw the success of my second business venture, I really couldn't stand it anymore. I felt that the whole novel was just a score wrapped in chocolate. It was really the first time I encountered this situation. I couldn't sleep on the train in the middle of the night and I felt uncomfortable thinking about this novel. It really failed to live up to the previous standards. Everyone, take a look at the front. The front is amazing. There is nothing to say. The back is finished and I am too lazy to spray.

The writing is good, but it should be more realistic. The villain should not be too showy, weak or characterless, and the protagonist should not be too easy to pass, but it should not be too difficult. There must be twists and turns, and there must be emotional ups and downs, otherwise everything will appear to be going well. The ending is too clear and makes people lose the sense of substitution. It's like Jiuyang, which is very good, but then... All of a sudden, the cultivation level of the Infinite Grand Master is as low as water, it has become very easy, and the high-level things have become cabbage, now half-saint, now provincial, now close to half-god, now half-god, it is awesome, but too awesome is unreal, everything seems very simple and easy, which makes people feel like they are not looking forward to it. They were pursuing it hard before, but then it is just like this. It's like you have a cow. You can say you want to donate a hundred cows, but you won't say you want to donate a cow. Why? Because you can be bragging if you say you donate a hundred cows, but you really have a cow. If I beat you to death, you wouldn't donate it. The ordinary interactions related to personal feelings are even more soul-stirring. Write more about your daily life with these heroines. Happiness, conversational life, small things and small life set off the protagonist's satisfaction, the sense of happiness that can be substituted, and the emotion with the beautiful lady. This kind of story is really attractive. You are so awesome. Without the heroine to witness and no one to accompany you to enjoy the taste, what's the point? Although the hero saves the beauty, although it is vulgar, it is the best performance, the most pretentious and the most immersive. You just forget about the previous heroines when you write the next thing. It's really not possible. So many heroines have not played their role. You might as well just write one or two innocent characters. Characters like Zhu Qingzhu are very good. Jiuyang ended too quickly. In fact, I thought it could be better like the second-generation mermaid school belle's personal expert next door with more than 10,000 chapters. Although it is watery, it can be read. There are new stories. Although there are too many copies, there are just people who keep reading, which makes him able to eat the bowl of rice he has now. .

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I have read your Nine Suns Sword Master several times, and now I am listening to the book. I heard about the World-Destroying Demon Emperor. I think I will read your book again. I hope you can continue to write well. Keep going and persevere. When I saw the author's PS message in your book, I rushed over to support you. I hope your life can be better. I added six yuan to reward you. I will also subscribe to your book in the future and continue to support you. After reading pirated copies for so many years, you have not made any money from me. Now I have graduated from college. I hope that I can support you more and understand that it is not easy for you over the years. There must be a lot of misunderstandings that make you feel sad. But as long as you can make enough money, I hope you will always be engaged in the industry you love. I hope you can make more money and live a good life. The novel will continue to be updated. I understand your brother and I will support you more. I am a traveler from all over the world and a close friend is hard to find. Although I have never met you, I think you are happy and smart. Come on, turn your intelligence into income.

First time writing a book review. I have always read time travel and rebirth novels, but I really like this novel. Even if it is only 8 points in my mind. The beginning was not very surprising, and the protagonist's entrepreneurial start-up did not make me feel that it was incredible, because it is unreasonable not to make a fortune in Rebirth. Let me talk about the emotional line. Starting from Bubble, I really feel that this is a good girl who cannot be let down. She chose to be with the protagonist despite the disapproval of the world. When the scandal happened, I actually hated the male protagonist. In fact, I can only rank behind the big butt in my heart. I don't know how many people are like me. After reading 60% of the novel, they have no patience. It may be that they all started to lose their temper at that time, just like the smelly and long foot wrap of an old lady. But I didn't skip a chapter of this novel. I was afraid of missing a certain part of the heroine, because the emotional line was so well written that I couldn't bear to miss anyone. There aren't many plot twists in this novel, and all I saw was two words: "warmth." The protagonist did not explain much about the later relationship between the two absolute heroines, leaving only three words "Teacher Xiao", but I think these three words can make me unable to get out for three days. In general, this book has little staying power and does not have many ups and downs. It is worth reading with a calm mind. 8 Points, but recommended 👍

You have a bit of talent to become a god. I advise you to write well. I will help you read Chapter 180 first.

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It's so amazing. I haven't seen such a wonderful novel in a long time. The last time I saw it was the last time. It was too early to get into the trap 😆

Ya is really Ya. I haven't encountered anything like this that excites me for a long time. It can become a god. Increase the dosage! ! !

The writing is very good and very close to reality, but there are too few

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The update time should be regular and punctual. Otherwise, how can everyone vote for you?

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Cake cake, when will you put it on the shelves? It's too uncomfortable to catch up on updates, and I don't dare to keep books for fear of being too late. I haven't been to the starting point for half a year. I heard from a friend that you came here immediately after publishing the book 🙂

The quality of the first one hundred or so chapters is good, the main line is clear, and the characters are vividly created The latter part is completely messed up and written completely randomly. In order to accommodate multiple female protagonists, I hoe here and there. The description of the characters is completely careless, and the homogeneity becomes very serious later on. The key plots are handled in a mess, the Shura field is very difficult to write, the logic of the heroine's character is completely intellectual, and I have been writing about those childish business wars in large chapters.

Big Bubble

Xia tide

Sao Sao, pure Momo.

I started reading this book because there was an English teacher in the review, and I really took advantage of it 🙂

As of Chapter 100, I feel that Paopao cannot be let down the most. This is really what I owe in my previous life and I have to pay it back. Forget it about Lian Yi, it's best not to provoke him. However, considering that this is a harem story, it is unlikely that the protagonist will not provoke others. If he starts a harem, he can only marry Pao Pao, and Lian Yi will be the third one. This is different from Xiao Rongyu and Shen Youchu. Chen Gou did not owe the heroine any debt of love in his previous life, and Chen Gou did not promise to get married every two days. It was obvious that he was a scumbag.

I really liked the process of chasing Bubbles at the beginning of this book. Later, when I entered college, my career became worse and worse every day. It was okay at first, but every chapter was like this. Who can read it anymore? The key plot and Bubbles' confession actually use ellipsis "like this... That's it..." It was skipped in one stroke, and it was completely shocking. It was so disappointing. I would like to suggest that those of you who like to read this book should take a look at the way they handle it in "Revival" written by Chang Yu. He is also a master. Why does he handle it so smoothly? The more you go to the back, the more exciting it becomes.

Don't get entangled with Ripple anymore. It's very strange. How did you start the chapter? He will not confess to her, and in his previous life, he married the protagonist and still missed his ex-husband. After leaving, he came back (Ripples came back and broke into the lives of the protagonist and Xiao Momo, which may have been the last straw that influenced Xiao Momo's depression and suicide), and then divorced. There are so many points, but we still have to create this ripple.

After reading the first three chapters, others would write them as three golden chapters. You are a cesspit. You are a fool, ungrateful, a cuckold, and a dog licker. The reason why you are not scolded as a cuckold is because you finished early.

The beginning was amazing, but then the pace started too fast, with no foreshadowing, no detailed foreshadowing, just a pure plot. The later became more and more like a running account and a diary. In the middle, it didn't look like it was written by one person. It wasn't considered perfunctory, but the level was really not up to par with the beginning.

The work gave me an amazing feeling at the beginning. The impact of the plot, the control of the rhythm, the portrayal of the characters, the output of values, and even the casual hints made people feel excited. But as the number of words progressed to the latest chapter, I felt that the writing was very watery, the pace was very watery, and there was no description at all. The first-generation mobile phone had a very good sentence when it came out. The proportion of protagonists appearing is less than 10%. Each chapter is listed with data, box office number, sales volume, occupying most of the space To be honest. Seeing this is completely a habitual subscription, because the author has no design for this part of the plot, and the narrative is straightforward. Maybe when I started the book, I started with the purpose of "thinking of a beginning, and I will cut it if the results are not good". As a result, the more the word count goes on, the more it continues. The author's description of the female characters and even the characterization of the characters are often amazing. But as the chapters progress, more and more content is filled with "box office data" and the characterization of the characters becomes less and less. The plot is losing more and more surprises If the work reflects reality, I hope the author can pursue excellence like the protagonist, rather than completing mechanical profits.

Not vomiting, not happy. The previous plots were very good, including the website, but just by doing a live video broadcast, it became a new track, which is particularly awesome. That's the author's own opinion. How is that possible? It wasn't that there were no live broadcasts around 2001 or 2002, but it was too niche, and the basic network couldn't support live broadcasts at all. There was no way out for live broadcasts at that time. Just like Doux, it will definitely hit the street in 2002. Yiqu was great back then, but it took Ali to cultivate the market for several years before it got up, otherwise he wouldn't have sold it to eBay. How many years did Ali survive at that time? . What about Shanda Box in 2005? Was its concept advanced enough? Isn't it just a rush? It took 10 years for LeTV Xiaomi Box to take over the box market. SP was indeed flying all over the sky at that time, but if you write a live broadcast, it is simply impossible and will directly hit the street. No matter how creative the live broadcast is, it is useless because the basic network hardware does not support it. The author makes a live video. You have to wait until the network infrastructure is completed before it can take off, but how many years will that take?

OK, that's outrageous. You said in the first few chapters that China can't do Facebook, yet you still write it, keep a book, and come back when there are interesting chapters. Mainly Facebook or not, what you wrote is outrageous. . . The whole chapter is full of self-pleasure. .

I've read Chapter 150, and the protagonist's relationship is too entangled. The female characters are really well portrayed, and each one has its own characteristics. But here comes the problem. Single female protagonists think the protagonist is a scumbag, LSP thinks the protagonist is dressed up, and harem readers think the protagonist is ink.

To be honest, the book "Pastry" definitely borrowed from Chang Yu's "Revive", but the plot progression and narrative are indeed stronger and more ups and downs than "Revive". However, the portrayal of the male protagonist and multiple female protagonists is still not as delicate and three-dimensional as in "The New Life", and it feels a bit like making dumplings just to make this jealous.