My Attic Leads to Another World

First of all, I want to explain that I don't like to read abuse articles. If you like to read abuse articles, please treat what I say as farts. At the same time, I also want to point out that I was born in 1996, and now I happen to be a lower-class citizen. I work as a small store owner. I have read three books in college, so my cultural level is relatively low. I hope people who read my message can understand. Let's talk about the subject matter first. The subject matter is very good, but it's a pity that it is not suitable for writing about abuse, because it is very expensive to write. Let's talk about the problem that I feel uncomfortable 1. I only read the author's title before I had the patience to read it, otherwise I would have deleted it long ago. 2. There are no three golden chapters 3. The first 15 chapters are all kinds of abuse of the protagonist, which is very unpleasant Finally, let me talk about my thoughts after watching it I think the author probably went to a technical school directly after graduating from junior high school, and it was the last technical school in the province, otherwise he would not have written such a novel that is detached from reality. The good people are good enough and the bad people are bad. It's outrageous, it's just a fantasy novel First of all, it's a question of character and moral character, or a supporting role. I don't know how bad a professor's moral character is, but I don't think a real professor's moral standard would be like that, unless he's a beast and a fake graduate student Then there's the protagonist. Isn't the protagonist's self-esteem too big? It's bigger than the kind of people who have never entered society or simply think that the world can't go around without me! If the protagonist had really lived in society, he would no longer have such ridiculous self-esteem, because such people have long been eliminated by society. Also, the protagonist's family members are all from the same village. How can his father offend people so much? Can he offend the whole village? According to our side, a village is basically full of relatives, and we can offend all the relatives, and no one is willing to help when our family is in such huge difficulties. How on earth is this done? If he really did it, the whole family would have been driven out of the village long ago! Why is the protagonist's father so resentful for being able to stay in the village without being kicked out? I know my duty as a reader, but I still can't help but argue, author, what you wrote is too dark, right? Finally This book is not a good read. It abuses the author throughout. Every line is filled with the author's dissatisfaction with our country. This book is really outrageous. The author is dissatisfied with living in a war-torn country for a few days. How can you write such a book? I shouldn't believe in daily poisoning, ugh╯╰

Why is this book about hatred for the sake of climax? The level has dropped a lot. What's going on? The routines are too bad. Isn't it a bit too floating? Many routines are very stiff.

I really want to ask the author, what is the theme of this book? Trading in another world? Protagonist Sports Superman? Pretentious in drama, music and entertainment circles? Concentrating on writing a topic can attract readers. They want to do everything. I feel that nothing can be done well. The author should know very well that if sports are not done well, things will easily happen if you are beyond ordinary people. If it is too ordinary, it will not be interesting and it will not last more than a few chapters. If it is going to be a cross-border and multi-directional development, I see that the introduction has been changed a lot. The protagonist keeps mentioning that he wants to return to the sports world just to be funny. He also dissuades many new readers from being inattentive. No matter what reason he finds, it is just an excuse. Let's review the text describing the protagonist's sports, such as training or other things. Compared with cross-border performances/crosstalk, the word count and length are much different. Many readers leave comments that are embarrassing, not intentionally to discredit the author, but because they hate the iron that cannot be made into steel. Obviously this is a good setting. In a modern city, the attic leads to another world. Can some form of imagination be developed? I was very much looking forward to it at the beginning. It doesn't matter if I regard the other world as a golden finger. It's also good if the urban novel focuses on slapping people in the face and pretending to be cool. But now that I see it, I really don't feel any satisfaction. I just feel that the protagonist is embarrassed, pretending to be cool, and enjoying himself. I sincerely suggest that authors take a good look at your topic. What kind of content do you want to write? What is your story outline? This protagonist makes me feel confused. He has no sense of empathy or admirable advantages. This is the fatal flaw of the pretentious style of male videos!

Regarding the "public" in the book I think it is enough and very good. They all have expressed their opinions, 1. Supporters of Wang Huan's kingdom, 2. The majority of people who are just outsiders and spectators in Lu Xun's works, 3. Clear opponents. . That's enough, that's good, because no matter you are kind-hearted or prejudiced, the final result will be one of these three types of people. Just look at the results. If the public's thoughts are sympathy, but the result is opposition, then no matter how fancy the psychological process is, it will be zero. I no longer regard pastry books as cool articles. The turning point is when Shen Lang catches up with Jin Mulan's spaceship. The two look at each other, the two talk, and the two return to their original hometown on Earth. . . Very soft. PS, I think the pastry is written from the perspective of "shuangwen" and is the same type of thing as "Sword Comes" in the Fenghuo Opera Princes. (Central sentence 1) The only one who makes life choices is the lonely self. //(Just like what I said, maybe the financial support of my family comes from me, but my spiritual support comes from my parents, wife, and a cute 5-year-old girl) (After passing the college entrance examination, I found that in daily school study, "your time" is arranged into "his tasks" and "squeezing tasks" are assigned to occupy our time. Teachers, those who yell the most fiercely, at a certain moment, I seem to have an illusion, as if he really has the right to control his own time and plans, and he "must follow" and "request" to complete. All this seems to give me a certain kind of "dependent" confidence. But after the college entrance examination, these seem to dominate your voice in every class for three years. The teachers who yelled the most and told you to listen to them suddenly stopped caring about you. I thought it was reasonable, but emotionally I was shocked! What happened? According to previous experience, sooner or later we would face all this independently. First of all, we were still young and underage. For relatively "powerful" adults (for example, when we are weak in infancy and know nothing about the world, we face "huge" and "powerful" parents; when we are weak and have not yet formed a outlook on life, we face "powerful" teachers in school, and what he teaches determines your future, and monopolyism blocks your lifeblood), we animals instinctively choose to obey. But the truth is that the teacher is stuck on the [responsibility] that the students should be responsible for, and we have no chance to bear and use our own life-and-death [responsibility]! The obvious manifestation is that the teacher will be afraid of criticizing himself, and he will be afraid if the homework is not handed in. When the teacher comes, the body should honestly reflect his fear and act like he is studying seriously. Let students truly take responsibility for their own life responsibilities and family responsibilities. This is the fundamental strength of students. They have a strong sense of responsibility for their own lives and self-awareness of actions, and they will have the courage and perseverance to pursue their dreams. The underlying logic is that they take away our responsibilities and use responsibility as a weapon to threaten themselves. They clearly dominate our time, but they shirk all responsibilities! They said, "Learning is for yourself." "If you don't complete your homework, you will not be able to get into a good university in the future. Did you hear that? You must complete the assigned tasks." They kept using this, which is supposed to be our most powerful knife, on my neck. They even arranged an assignment and settled it out of thin air by flipping through the exercise book. They continued to assign tasks willfully and roughly, no matter what it meant for each student. Is the body really effective? What makes him better than me? In terms of strength, he just has a better system and has practiced only one subject for several years. That's all. Everyone has to take responsibility for his own survival and the survival of his family. He came to teach me basically because he needs to work to support his family (because the profession of teacher is basically a breadwinner). Bowl, that's why I overflowed with compassion and said, of course the teacher wishes good for every student [Of course I believe that everyone is kind as long as they can survive and are not greedy]), he does not have the right to dominate me. The essential relationship between teachers and students should be mutual promoters, but almost every one of us willingly gave up our ultimate power [ own responsibility], so students are weak compared to teachers, so teachers can use the knife of our responsibility to carry out deep blows to us (there is no physical punishment but fear of the soul. We ourselves do not have the solid soil of responsibility, and the teacher's own responsibility is always hidden and will never be handed over to the students to dominate). To succeed, you must first realize your own ultimate power and have a responsibility for your future, your parents, your future wife and children! In this way, you will be on the same platform as the teacher, and you will not be inferior to him. Isn't it possible to take online courses? It's a joke that these courses are much better than the teacher, and they are made into a system to make you quick. To learn a mind mapping tool, shouldn't you first learn the OKR working method? Can't you learn the diversified thinking model first? Can't you learn structured thinking first? Can't you learn the ability to plan first? Damn it! The most important contradiction before the college entrance examination is of course! But there is definitely more than one path! In the animal world, the lioness teaches the most basic survival ability before he reaches adulthood! And the school teacher never thinks twice! Assign tasks to fill your day. Students no longer have the solid soil of responsibility, so 90% of people trained by school education institutions are sheep. ——After the college entrance examination, I went to work for the summer. I didn't ask anyone to go with me. When I took the high-speed train to the provincial capital, I looked at the high-rise buildings and found for the first time that I could move my legs. Being so far away completely changed my previous living environment - I realized that I was making my own decisions.] After my phone was stolen, it rained heavily that night, and I huddled at the door of the subway station. Next to me were all my belongings, a bag of clothes and a bag of books. The young lady at the subway station left a light at the door of the subway station specially for me. At midnight, I looked at the pouring rain. It was so cold. I found that my life The decision was made by myself alone, not my parents, not my best friends (but they are sometimes motivation), and not the acquaintances and classmates who I usually chat well with (I finally learned that they will neither encourage you to become a better self, nor should you ask them for help when you are in trouble - but borrow some money from your best friends. But all the usual chatting, laughter and fun are spent on Superficial acquaintances are just to kill the boredom of the moment. Afterwards, you still face everything by yourself, and you appear to be having fun, but in fact, you don't pay enough attention and time to real good friends!) When I was living on the street, I found that I was in control of my body behavior. (中文) Heartfelt Sentence 2) Underneath the surface of kindness, there is an astonishing ferocity that pricks other people's self-esteem. //Imagine a picture of a small pond with only two meters of water and a pure water depth of 50 centimeters (symbolizing the person's peaceful state). The rest is full of rugged rocks and human ugliness. External events are very unstable, sometimes earthquakes, flash floods, 12-level winds, etc. The peaceful water on the surface hits the ugly rocks underneath. For example, you are talking to someone and gradually start to argue about an issue. Suddenly you throw a stone into his small pond and hit the rocks at the bottom of the water, hurting his self-esteem. The peaceful person suddenly becomes ferocious and crazy——Only the sea is deep enough. , No matter how the situation changes on the surface, it is still far from the ugliness of the people at the bottom, and now the so-called students of the second university are friendly on the surface, but they feel uncomfortable and unhappy when criticized by the teacher.

I feel like this book needs to be closed, some of the writing is too realistic. . .

I feel bad. I'm going to collapse. Hold on.

This book is finished. I hope Cao Cao can take a rest. Don't be in a hurry to start a new book. To be honest, this book is quite depressing. I hope the next book will be better.

Wouldn't it be better if the protagonist could run the fastest human race with a fat body?

This book can be said to tell the story of the vicissitudes of life, from a person's fall from the altar to his rise to the resentment of all people. All kinds of bitterness, love, hate, love and hatred in life. It explains thoroughly the evils of capital, the intrigues of society, and the emptiness in people's hearts, and sees through the vast world of mortals. The lofty ideal of life, the extremely cruel reality, and the sincere "love"

Crazy slap in the face, pretending to be a pig-eating tiger master

I hope this book can really calm down and be written well, and the quality will be obvious to everyone. To be honest, the last book (Secret Agent) was quite disappointing. The subject matter was very good and it had the shadow of the previous book (Sister-in-law). It was very enjoyable to watch especially in the early stage, but in the middle and later stages it seemed too impatient, because from the finale to the finale, many chapters broke out every day, and the plot was written to promote it. However, as a bookworm, I felt that the writing was very empty and the emotions of the characters were very stiff. I feel that (Sister-in-law) is the peak, and (Secret Agent) writes similar stories and the world will decline. I hope this different subject matter can be written better. Really, everyone can feel the quality. It's even more useless to be bombarded every day. I remember that the trolls in the (Secret Agent) comments are sharper than me. It's okay to write faster, but at least it has to be worthy of the readers who spend money. Write well! Come on!

I feel like the main character is a waste to begin with, and no one can stand it. Normal people choose a marriage partner. Both men and women want someone who is better. His wife chooses him because he is good. The protagonist also married because his wife is beautiful and has good family conditions. In the end, the author tried his best to portray the woman as wanting to climb high. In fact, the world championship is really worthless. Many of the world champions in the news are in despair and even have to sell their medals. On the contrary, the woman's father is a cadre, her mother works in a hospital, and she is a teacher. These conditions are more than enough for the protagonist. As for the protagonist, after being injured, he resigned himself to eating more than 200 kilograms. He didn't want to be a coach or anything, so he just ate and waited to die. No one can tolerate such a person, even if he is a biological brother or biological child. Not to mention that when the protagonist was prosperous, he didn't think about his parents and lent money out randomly without thinking about leaving any money for his family. Divorce is a doomed thing. I will only think about myself and not give some money to my parents or keep it for myself. Don't talk about the dignity of a man. If you get divorced and do that kind of thing, you will be like a dog. How can you have any dignity?

Pastry Master, this is the fourth book I have read by you, Nine Yang Sword Master - Yang Dingtian, the most powerful son-in-law in history - Shen Lang, the best secret agent in history - Yun Zhonghe, my attic leads to another world - Wang Huan, step by step, I have become your biggest fan, I love you 😘 Great God, please be more refined, please be more refined, please be more refined

Modern urban classification, portraying the protagonist with this kind of virtue, is just to disgust readers, right? There are very few comments. If you don't like it, it's usually in the upper left corner. After reading chapter 30, I really can't stand it anymore and I'm not happy without vomiting. You want a waste material flow to start, it's nothing, the foreshadowing is well done, it's quite satisfactory, not many people will say it, even if they say it, they will continue to read down, look at the beginning, all kinds of messy plot insertion, and NT said it is very satisfying, this kind of novice reader has probably never read a waste material flow. Looking at the image of the protagonist again, an impressive example is that his younger brother's life-saving money was finally borrowed from a classmate from Faxiao whom he had not contacted for a long time. The protagonist once had sex with the crush of his classmate from Faxiaocheng, which caused the two to have a falling out. It turned out that the protagonist was in trouble, and the classmate from Faxiao took the initiative to contact and gave the money. In this plot, 1. What is the image of the protagonist? A piece of trash with a criminal record? Second, is it reasonable? You have to arrange for this primary school classmate to really care about the protagonist. When contacting the protagonist, he should sneeze at the protagonist to at least get rid of the previous bad temper, and then silently send or send the money to him in private. Wouldn't this arrangement be less disgusting? To be fair, it's already 2020. This is the first time I've seen such a disgusting protagonist in Qidian.

I really don't know how this kind of bad book became so popular? Find someone to brush the data! It starts with a crappy routine, and ends with a laxative and a breakup. The author is really funny. It's very funny and humorous to do this, isn't it? Duan Ping and a group of LSPs clapped and applauded, haha! It's cool, but I can't even understand the protagonist's outlook on things! There are various dramas in the whole article, but I have never been involved in dramas! Do you really feel good about yourself after watching a nonsensical joke that wakes up the labor and management? Your title of great god has no level to speak of. It is nothing more than pure code. It is a waste of hard work! Don't think my words are harsh, that's the truth!

30,000 Starting coins are given to the author. Come on (please improve)_(•̀ω•́ ∠)_

The three concepts of this book are crooked. A protagonist who relies on drugs and cheats mocks people all over the country who rely on hard work. The subsequent plot is either a slap in the face or a hydrology. Just read it for free. This book is like a eunuch and is not worth your money.

When I saw him preparing to go to the United States, I felt like shit was stuck in my throat! How disgusting! As mentioned before, everything about him has basically been exposed in front of the governments of various countries. How did a piece of shit become the number one athlete in the world? Super dope? Gene potion? You're not the only one with an idea! If deployed in the army, would super soldiers still be science fiction? You don't naively think that the world is peaceful and friendlyright

The plot is too cliche. It was always disliked by others at first, and then it reversed into an infinite loop, and it was also crazy about ambiguity. The only bright spot was the divorce part.

In fact, the protagonist was struck by lightning and turned into a vegetative state in the third chapter. The rest of the plot was all dreaming in his mind. His brother was not saved, he did not recover, and he did not become famous. . I hope the ending doesn't let him wake up

Spraying a book for the first time. Others subscribe in single digits, but you can just subscribe in 20s or 30s. Forget it, it's fine as long as it looks good. But what the heck is this, and it's so cool, I'm almost suffocating to death, but what a fart 😤😤😤

This main character is really disgusting. The woman is having a smooth sailing, so it's only natural that she wants to kick such a loser in the stall, but the male protagonist is still shamelessly asking for money and wants to break up with her? He took the money and threw it away as he pleased, not thinking about his sick parents and not making any plans for the future. This kind of person just lacks social punishment. If there is a golden finger for this kind of person, God is really blind. The reason why the male protagonist is said to be useless is because of the woman's. I don't even think about the male protagonist licking like this before. Licking a dog will not lead to a good death, and there is nothing to clean up. Originally, both parties were on the rise, and there was no problem in helping each other. But now that the male protagonist has nothing to do for himself, he refuses to leave and drugged the woman. This character is extremely bad. These three views are completely ruined and the human being is extremely scumbag. No wonder the author throws himself into the street. A useless male protagonist. If I fall in love with such a son-in-law, I will just get out and take my daughter back to her parents' home. No one will tolerate this kind of trash.

Reading the first 30 chapters made me vomit, it was so fucking disgusting. That's it for the great master, I'm convinced, the protagonist is a social scum with incorrect views.

The whole country is staring at your crotch, right? The fact is that it is just a conversation piece after dinner at most. If you play with two bad crotches, you are a public enemy. Look at Mr. Xu of TOEIC Network. If you don't marry dozens of girlfriends, who cares about you? You should learn from the Five Greens of the Central Plains, right? It disgusts the readers and it seems that you have high literary literacy? Death from poison, bye 😅😅😅

The author is not very good at writing about women. The female characters created are like bitches. As a female reader, I enjoyed reading other parts of the book and could tolerate many of the poisonous points, but I really couldn't stand the emotional line. The goddesses created, to put it harshly, feel like peripheral women wearing goddess skins. Like Zuo Ling, judging from the things she did, she seemed to be very strong and rejected the so-called second-generation official, but she just felt uncomfortable. She felt that she was putting on airs on the surface, but in fact she was still a woman who worshiped money and power. In the early stage, you sent text messages to the male protagonist, but in the later stage, you relied on the songs the male protagonist sent you to become a star? I'm afraid it's not that I'm not being snobbish, it's just that I didn't give it enough. The first son-in-law in history also gave up the book for this reason. The heroine Jin Mulan, either really make her independent, or let her just be an ordinary harem. On the surface, she is Mulan's treasure, the goddess, everyone covets her, but in fact, she is still a very cheap image. Except for her appearance and family advantages at the beginning, everything depends on the male protagonist. This is very annoying. The few novels I have been following recently, such as The Watcher and Cultural Invasion of Different Worlds, have also created many ambiguous female characters, but none of them have this kind of bitch. Because in addition to flirting with and taking advantage of the male protagonist, the female characters in it also have their own lives and pursuits. At least it's not by sleeping on it. If you want to create a goddess, don't always create such cheap fake goddesses. If you want to open a harem directly, don't brag about these harems being goddesses. Otherwise, you will just think that the male protagonist is ignorant, he has been messing around for a long time, and he treats a peripheral person as a goddess, and when he meets a "socialite", he treats him as a real princess, which is too stupid. This is the last little suggestion.

Through this book, I successfully became a fan. You are the first person to use the title of great god to praise our country. The Chinese official in your novel is like a Japanese devil.

Is this the author of the first secret agent in history? ? ? I don't want to say more about this writing style. The gap is too big. Can this also waste money?

Speechless, poisoned to death. Can the author be calmer, as if there are no good people in China? China can be where it is now because the Chinese people are united. Such a vicious plot is really speechless.

Has the author ever been scolded by many netizens? I had to give in, but I was holding back resentment in my heart, so I wrote this plot.

Too much is not enough, I know the author wants to write a cool story, but the villains are too much, which makes the readers feel too ridiculous and weakens the sense of involvement.