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Now that I have seen Tianting Pantaoyuan, I feel that the protagonist has not made much progress since he was reincarnated until now... How can I say that he has been practicing in the real world and dungeon for so many years, and he has seen it before, but he is still frightened by everything he sees, and is scared first. Everyone I am afraid of everything from monsters to bosses. After all, if I can't defeat it, I can understand it, but it's really a fairyland. But all the saints have seen it, and all kinds of saint disciples are also rare. How can I be frightened by the heavenly soldiers and the peach-picking fairies...

How should I put it, there are some problems with the settings and the logic doesn't make sense. In this kind of cultivation in the underworld, people are just consumables. Anyone who does something or practices will have a lot of people die, not to mention that practicing self-cultivation will cause backlash and resuscitation. Also, if you see a ghost, you will die if you know the ghost. Ordinary people are endless and inexhaustible. It stands to reason that everyone will be dead within 10 years. Not to mention the mythical period, where one to two million people were sacrificed at every turn, let alone those who were traced with infectious tapes.

I've been following it for a long time, so let me tell you what you think after reading it. The writing foundation is very good, and there are basically no problems. But for the weird genre, it's hard to write that kind of thing. Of course, it's normal for people with a normal mental state to not be able to write it. It's recommended to play some dark games, such as Dark Souls, Blood Curse, and Dead Space. But there is a problem with the way of writing. The key is that there is no comparison. The third and fourth floors of the main world are already so bad that it is difficult to get worse. The same is true for people. Basically everyone is evil, and I feel hopeless. It is a pity when beautiful and pure things rot. It is painful when the best good intentions lead to the most miserable ending. People who have fallen into the cesspit will not mind staying a little longer. In the end, I think it's not easy to balance combat power and atmosphere. Just like Resident Evil, Gatling can't even take a few shots from monsters and monsters, so it can't be said to be scary. To create an atmosphere of despair, the protagonist should try his best and be powerless.

This author is really awesome. He has written three books and has basically made no progress. How should I put it? Angry at his inability to fight, sad at his misfortune.

Now that I have caught up, I would like to make some small suggestions first 1 The plot is sometimes too dry, as if I am reading an outline. You can try to insert some branch lines, such as solving real problems, describing them in depth, showing saints in front of others, etc. Don't just mention it in one stroke like before 2 The plot is too rushed, one dungeon after another is being chased and beaten, it makes people breathless. The Taoist world and my family Yang Na can adjust it a bit. The main character here I don't know why he is working hard as his life is getting more and more desperate. It feels like the main character is living more and more inhuman 3 The proportion is getting closer and closer to the copy. Since it is a dual world, the balance will be broken and the readers will be biased. The later you want to write about another world, the more difficult it will be to deal with it. It is easy to collapse I gave a lot of suggestions and said it was good 1 The atmosphere is very good. Personally, it is the best atmosphere I have written except Tao Wei Xian 2 I have a lot of imagination, and sometimes I can guess the plot, but it doesn't develop according to the plot I guessed Finally, the author writes well, and readers will add up to a little, so come on, more and more will not be enough!

There is a problem with the worldview. The world is full of ghosts, and cultivation relies on ghosts, so it cannot be called ghosts. When educating, we cannot only mention the terror of ghosts. Ordinary people only know the terror of ghosts. How can there be no problems? The unknown is scary. With basic knowledge about the dangers, advantages and prevention of ghosts, who would still panic?

Why do I feel like it's another line that pushes my boundaries 🙄? I've read the first few dozen chapters and it's really interesting. I plan to keep following it. But the same old story has appeared again. The plot characters, NPCs, and "BOSS" are far ahead of the protagonist. There is no chance to "pretend" at all. They are all about taking advantage of others, opportunistically, and making some soup. . .

I don't know why, but this book is becoming more and more petty. It's a good story, but it just doesn't seem smooth enough and feels frustrating. It's time for a climax to change the pace.

Why are they all Yang Jian? I have read at least three books about Yang Jian. Is Red Semen bad? Is Yun Neutron bad? Why are there so many people in Fengshen catching Yang Jian? I'm going to vomit just looking at Yang Jian

Why can't I read this dark novel? ? Is there light in my heart? ?

So what's the use of normal people? I don't understand. There are ghosts and gods everywhere, and a large number of people are killed at every turn. I really don't understand where there are so many people behind.

For every book review at Qidian, just read the comments. They basically talk about how bad the book is and how many pitfalls it has. After reading the book reviews, it basically means that there is no book that you can follow. If you don't read the book reviews and calm down, you can still find a lot of books that you can read.

I have been reading this book for so long, and I got stuck in both the basic monthly ticket and the recommended ticket. The author's books have always been good. I have read them all starting from Immortality and Mysterious Immortal. At first, I looked down on pirated copies, and it was also because I didn't understand them well. From now on, I will order all the books from this book and read them every day. Let me comment, the book is very beautiful, a typical work of weird fairy tales. This book is much easier to understand than the previous one, Yang He's character creation is also very good, the plot is smoother than the previous one, and the author never lacks imagination. It is really worth reading after the previous craze for becoming a god. I first read this kind of weird writing in 2022. There was a batch of good weird writings in 2022 and 23, and the previous one was the Immortal Strange Fairy. Although I don't understand it well, it looks good and I love watching it. If you like this kind of weird book about immortality and worldview, I will definitely recommend this book. The worldview of that weird world is well created and not inconsistent. All in all, I give it four and a half stars out of five, although there are some factors that I personally like. But it's really good, but the author updates infrequently and slowly, and sometimes asks for leave. It would be nice to write more.

I read it all the way, and I definitely like this book, and it is definitely well written, but this Deng Chanyu, and Tu Xingsun are just like Tu Xingsun. It's fine if you want to, but it's disgusting to insist on being with the protagonist I came here because there is no heroine. When I browsed the comment area, I decided to read it when I read that there was no heroine. If the heroine suddenly pops up, then I will really break my defense and report to you chapter by chapter.

The writing is really frustrating. I use the same routine over and over again. How to level up the protagonist and then someone will suppress me in the next chapter. It's really frustrating to read.

No matter how awesome the setting is, if the plot is unpleasant, it's all nonsense.

It's okay in the front, but in the back, the protagonist still has to resort to various ways to get things done, and relies on the system to possess everything from the enemy for no reason. I really can't stand it anymore! It's over one million words, not just over one hundred chapters!

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The quality of the protagonist is very poor. He talks dirty in every chapter. He is not like a fairy or a gangster.

I have read 300 chapters, but I feel it is no longer attractive.

I remember why I clicked on this book several times, read a little bit, and then ran away. The writing of this book is actually quite atmospheric. It is a turbot fish and only the protagonist can see through the strange truth. Although the beginning is not very fresh, the writing is good and it is eye-catching. But I took the shell of various allusions to gods and Buddhas, such as Journey to the West, and it was like Nezha or something like that. It was said to be weird ghosts and gods, but it didn't look very convincing. How should I put it, as Wei Wei is very strong, but as Nezha, he is simply weak. Not to mention that his master is a real person, Taiyi Jinxian, who appears so early and feels oppressive, but at best he is Chu Renmei. The same goes for other characters. This makes it very fragmented when watching, and it feels a bit awkward to always be unable to substitute. After all, it seems that even one of the lands in the original Journey to the West cannot be conquered. I don't dare to think about other scenarios in which allusions will be applied next. For example, there is an illusion that little monsters just put on Haidilao masks and find a ruined temple to cosplay at Leiyin Temple. A feeling of embarrassment similar to "fighting spirit turning into a horse". To be honest, I usually apply Journey to the West and the like, just to borrow characters to enhance my style.

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Shigui

I found a problem with this book, which many authors have, and that is that it is written in every detail to gain experience, brush materials, and complete tasks. However, once the status is upgraded, it cannot be done. Either you continue to grind as if you have not upgraded, or you omit writing. There is no feeling of class jump. The same goes for this author. He wrote very well at a low level, but lost a little bit of meaning later on. He even finished the book when he was at full level.

This book is divided into the main world and the copy. The copy is about the time of the Conferred Gods List, and the main world is the world 3,000 years after the Conferred Gods List. . . As a result, this protagonist was very good at playing in a dungeon as difficult as the Conferred Gods List, but in the main world, he had to take every step and be content at every turn. . . , It feels like it is deliberately suppressing the protagonist's cultivation and deliberately creating difficulty. . . , The author, have you ever thought that this world is scum compared to the copy of the Conferred Gods List? Moreover, the things obtained in the copy of the Conferred Gods List can be brought into the main world. . . Poison or not, you decide for yourself.

Zi Mugui

Ghost