Douluo: I Am of Earth Descent and Overturn the World

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Universe Superman, open your eyes, I am Shafrin.

Douluo: My martial spirit is the Neutron Battle Star

Well, I feel good after reading a few chapters, but the protagonist's name is too illegible. Doesn't he have a last name?

The front is fine, but the back is too powerful and the force collapses? It's a pity that Long Aotian is slowly falling into this trap. It is true that justice requires force, but with force, justice can be thrown away. Aloof and impatient, right and wrong are determined before things happen. Emotions, likes and dislikes overwhelm everything, arrogant and condescending, force is justice, and the pattern and realm are wiped out. Sixty-seven worshipers died, and Tang San conflicted at the beginning of the school year, triggering a tide of beasts against Emperor Tian. In order to establish a villain, Jiangzhi forcibly expanded the conflict, and in order to oppose Tang San, he rebelled against Tang San. When you are weak, you say that the college has become a chivalrous person under your influence. If you are strong, you will be a mediocre person who dares not cause trouble, and you will have to kill the whole family. The sense of responsibility is gone. In order to save your friend, you provoked such a huge beast wave. I don't know how many ordinary people and even soul masters died. It doesn't show how much effort you have made for this. Oh, just inform Wuhun Palace and let Wuhun Palace do its work. With such values, why are you so angry when the ruffians relied on your ancestors to harm the people around you? You will live or die there! Might makes right, so of course your friends, the weak, have no human rights. More disgusting than breaking is such an anticlimactic writing.

Author, does your novel have no female protagonist?

Whole life? As long as it's hell enough, I'll chase after chase ()

I personally read more than 20 chapters. The subject matter is very good, but the writing style (the details are not good enough) has a feeling that the subject matter is obviously very good, but it doesn't feel very good. There are always various things or plots that may offend you! It's not too poisonous, but it's just a bit jarring! Not the type I like to watch! Novice readers can take a look

The emotional line is not very well written, it's like suddenly falling in love with the protagonist

It's obviously fine at the front, but why does it fall apart at the back? 🤫