Dream of the Red Chamber: I'm Really Not an Immortal!

The main character sells cigarettes; those who mind can return it.

The current state of Dream of the Red Chamber fanfiction is filled with a loser mentality. I thought things would improve since it's about immortals, but it's still the same. To be honest, the premise of this book is quite interesting, but the content... Well, let's not even go there. It has all the problems that other fanfiction has.

In the latest two chapters, the protagonist is treated like a piece of trash.

The protagonist is constantly being schemed against, by two women, and he acts like a complete idiot, oblivious to everything. Besides, in a feudal dynasty, I could understand if there was poisoning in the palace or royal residence, but doing this in front of immortals is as obvious as lice on a bald man's head! Does he even have a brain? The protagonist's presence is so weak.

This protagonist is so afraid others won't know how powerful he is; he even has to show off in front of everyone when he goes to a grain and oil shop! Why don't you just take over the whole city?! 😜😜😜 This book is a collection of all the worst things in the world. It is illogical, imitative, removes the good points, and learns all the bad points.

There are immortals in Dream of the Red Chamber, but some modern writers of the novel have eliminated them and simply depicted it as a world of ordinary people. But you're being a bit too humble, aren't you? At least you have some kind of cheat ability, and you're someone who transmigrated from the modern world.

A loser is a loser. Giving you a system won't change his loser nature. What kind of person could write such disgusting and pathetic writing?

Trash books, they should be thrown in the trash can!!!

I've read the latest chapter. Personally, I think the earlier chapters were quite good and interesting, which is why I've kept following it. Unfortunately, once the Jia family is involved, the author seems to have gone off the rails. I suspect the author hasn't seriously read the original *Dream of the Red Chamber*, but has likely read a lot of fan fiction, hence their biased interpretations of…

I can't stand it anymore! I despise Xue Baochai! Acting like a saint, criticizing her for being cold-blooded. They had no relationship whatsoever in this life, so why bother with her? Besides, judging from the original novel, Xue Baochai didn't actually think much of Jia Baoyu either, but she had no choice. She couldn't get into any other good families, and her brother was useless.