Cultivation of Immortality Starts from Shiwanda Mountain

Can you please give me a name for the author? You've been changing it from time to time, right? Can you decide on what name you want? Don't tell me that both of these are his names. Who do you want to see when the two names are exchanged?

It's not that I really can't stand it anymore. Author, I remember I was reading a male video book, right? You have thirty chapters, why do you have to write about the concubine in every chapter?

Don't make those fancy ones, such as Ancient Times, Journey to the West, and Conferred Gods. Just follow the same method you used to write about Tianlu Xing. The layout will be enlarged. High-end Da Luo, then you will be able to make a living.

The one about Tian Lu Xing is pretty good, but I have to write about the Yuanshen fandom later. Will I be able to make a living?

What a mortal monk does to make love to a Taiyi Golden Immortal is not at the same level of physical strength, and the source of life is also different. So, how does this mortal monk break through the defense? Okay, even if this Taiyi Golden Immortal holds back all its power, its physical strength still hasn't changed, okay? May I ask the author how you arranged for the protagonist to break the defense? Or is it that the author has experienced it personally and knows how to break the defense in this situation, otherwise the explanation will not make sense. Even though it's a novel, there shouldn't be too many differences, right? You mentioned the author. Not to mention TV series or movies, the situations are different and the intensity is also different.

Let alone Genshin Impact fans, the audience is too small

Originally, this book was passable, but I didn't expect that the author really didn't take the magical secrets and prescriptions he got seriously, and gave them to others casually. If you write a book like this, no one can read it. Isn't this too fake? ? ? Very poisonous! ! ! Let me ask you, are you one ten thousandth as generous as in the book in real life? ? ? So don't be too hypocritical! ! !

According to the yamen, cattle cannot be killed. Even if you buy a piece of paper, you have to register. This market economy is not developed at all, and it is still a political system in the world of immortality? You still despise the medical system. Not to mention what your small village can reflect. How can the medical power of a village in China reflect the medical treatment of the earth?

One thing to say, some of the settings of the author of this book are really rubbish, there are a lot of obvious things, and he has to write all kinds of annoying things in a roundabout way, and the reasons make the protagonist unaware and unable to come up with the correct conclusion; People who read it feel disgusted and want to abandon the book I am afraid that the author will use his brain and create a bad job with poor information, leaving disgusting people everywhere.

If the author made a typo, won't you correct it? Even the character names in many places are wrong. I pointed them out to you, but you didn't change them! With your writing attitude, it's hard to believe that you can write this book to a long length.

I want to write about your Coin God every day, why don't I just have to write about Xianxia?

Can books that are not junk on the street be available for free?

Because there is too much nonsense between the lines and the daily share is too high, it takes me several days to subscribe to read one thing. Let's vote for the author now. But yysy, the author has done a good job in preventing theft in these books. I don't know if it's because my grades are so bad that no one is stealing, or because I'm severely punished by the starting point.

I said that I only play Genshin Impact and don't read the fanfics, so why did I recommend two Genshin Impact fanfics? It turns out that I have watched your Tianluxing, so I recommended it! Why are you writing a game fanfic if you have nothing to do? People who don't like it don't want to play it, and people who don't want to watch it don't want to read it. Isn't it good to write about Honghuangliu like this?

Recently I have found that many books have this problem: The first few chapters are pretty good, but then there is a lot of random writing, focusing on "practice", "concubine", "growth-style mental activities"... I guess it is AI writing 😰

It's so funny that God deserves to be thrown into the street

Everything I wrote at the beginning was acceptable. Until I saw that Dao Nian could be used by others, I knew I had to say goodbye to this book.

It looked good at the beginning, but became less and less interesting the longer I read it. I felt extremely bored when I reached Chapter 26. I felt that the focus of this novel was not about cultivating immortals, but about the ambiguity between men and women. Forget it, try looking at a few more pictures. If they really don't look good, look for them again.

The direct brothers had to separate as soon as they came of age. It was okay at first, but why did it feel less and less emotional later on? After giving birth to a child, I didn't introduce him to him for several years. Neither men nor women know. About the little girl, she is almost like a passerby. Why are you still teaching exercises to your brother? It suddenly feels like we are parting ways. The father was seriously injured. Just let that spirit beast try it. Then he will die. Baffling

Dissuade him from quitting in the first chapter! At the beginning, there is a long list of unnecessary world setting descriptions sandwiched between two ellipses! Chapter 1 Is it necessary for readers to know who created the world? Do you think this is very stylish? Isn't it equivalent to a spoiler? Wouldn't it be nice to follow the protagonist's perspective and understand the world step by step? At the beginning, the limits of the world are unfolded in the eyes of readers. Chun Chun wants everyone to get out! Quickly delete the content between the two ellipses! Deleted! Deleted!

Don't write about Douluo. I have no interest in this. Let's change it to another one.

It's boring to read, and the whole article is like an industrial product produced on an assembly line.

Now that we have found a thousand ways to seek the Tao, do you book friends know if there is anyone who has a happy thought?

It's good to take a look at it.

Great God, I would like to recommend this book to you, the new fairy grass book "The Legend of Mountains and Seas" written by Tian Xing Si Er. It is a book that returns to the true nature of a fairy and is worth collecting in the book world. If you don't understand anything, thank you Haihan! If there is space, please add it and recommend it!

I just discovered that you wrote Tianluxing, so this book must be good.

Original version before localization revamp

It's so early to update today, this is the rhythm of rising up

Hurry up and update more quickly, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this