I Pretended to Be a Fake Shrine Priest, But Became a Real Immortal

Why do some people always seem to post pictures of women? I can understand posting one or two, but posting them constantly—does it mean they think the original creator's creativity isn't enough to get you excited and they want to add their own spice?

It's too obscure; the main character only appears once every few chapters. At first, I found it interesting, but it's become tiring after a while. It feels like I paid to read it, but I barely get to see the main character; it's not worth it.

I've read about ten chapters. I understand why it's now free for a limited time; the plot is a bit drawn out, with too much unnecessary dialogue. A bunch of minor characters, barely even supporting roles, are getting all sorts of screen time. Did the author think this would make it humorous and lively? Actually, no, it's just awkward. The writing isn't bad, but it just feels a bit off, though I can't quite put my finger on why. But so far, it's not a bad book. I'll see how it goes.

It was both enjoyable and unpleasant to read 😰. The content was good, but the writing felt a bit awkward.

Advantages: 1. The characters in the story are generally positive, and the relationships between them are also good. 2. The author will correct reasonable suggestions. Previously, I saw that someone pointed out typos and illogical points, and the author has corrected them. Weaknesses: The fight scenes were too jarring.

After the third major chapter, it turned into a typical web novel. The lighthearted tag disappeared after the third chapter. I thought Lu Zhi would immediately solve the Ghost King problem, but instead, it just dragged on and on. The secret techniques were supposed to be easy to learn, but aside from the initial descriptions of the inner workings, the learned skills were basically just collection…

I remember reading a book with a similar concept before, where the protagonist's boasting was only made impressive by the contrast with the crowd and by using parts from the protagonist's perspective. Using too much profanity or vulgarity in front of outsiders would completely ruin the hermit-like atmosphere, destroying the foundation laid earlier.

It's well-written, but it's annoying that you always have to go to the bathroom halfway through your invincible run. Could you please describe the main character more fully? All the writing effort seems to be focused on developing the supporting characters and extras.

It's written for laughs, to watch idiots perform.

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