I Pretended to Be a Fake Shrine Priest, But Became a Real Immortal

Why do some people always like to post pictures of women? I can understand if you post one or two pieces, keep posting. This is because you dislike the author's creativity for not being able to make you happy. Do you want to add some spices yourself? ?

It's too biased. There's only one scene with the protagonist in a few chapters. I thought it was quite interesting at first, but I got tired of it all the time. I just felt like I spent money to watch it, but in the end I couldn't even see the protagonist. It felt like it wasn't worth it.

I read about ten chapters. I understand why the entry limit is waived. The plot is a bit boring and there is too much nonsense. A group of extras who can't even be considered supporting roles play various roles. Does the author think these things would be humorous and vivid when written? Actually no, it's just embarrassing. The writing is not bad. But it just feels a little awkward, and I can't explain why it's awkward. But the book is not a bad book so far. Let's take another look and talk.

It feels both comfortable and uncomfortable to read 😰. The content is good, but the writing feels a bit awkward.

Advantages: 1. The people appearing in it are generally positive, and the relationship between the characters is not bad 2. The author will correct reasonable suggestions. I saw some people found typos and unreasonable places before, and the author also corrected them Disadvantages: The fighting part is too dramatic, shouting slogans, etc. It's a bit nonsensical like a Stephen Chow movie, but it doesn't match the overall tone and is a bit abrupt Overall evaluation: solid food (you can watch it to relax when you are bored, but it is still worth watching)

After the third chapter, it has become an ordinary online article. The third chapter of the easy label disappears. I thought that Lu Zhi should solve the ghost king and other problems immediately, but the result is procrastination, and he can read the secrets and skills at a glance. As a result, the content learned in the early stage, except for the description of the inner cylinder, has become a collection point, which is useless. There are so many descriptions of the protagonist, and the description of the protagonist's arrival is only a few sentences. There was a fire in the backyard from a God's perspective, but the protagonist was still outside collecting useless exercises and chatting with the city lord or the mountain leader. It seems that the true meaning given to the protagonist has a function that is not even described, but the protagonist is still allowed to collect it. But the only tricks that can be used are lightning strikes and laser eyes I don't know what the author is laying out to keep the plot atmosphere so low, but at the beginning of the third chapter, it said that it should be completed as soon as possible. Is it going to have a bad ending or just speed up the game and become a god? Chapters 1 and 2 still have something to say, but in Chapter 3, in addition to the vast magical power of Tantric Buddhism, I feel that it not only needs to become Buddhist and Taoist, but also unify hundreds of schools of thought. Because the author didn't write at all what other people were doing. Except the Mo family is sending them one by one.

I remember reading a book with this kind of creativity before. A lot of the protagonist's pretentiousness is made through the crowd and part of the protagonist's perspective to make him look awesome. Saying too many swear words or common sayings in front of outsiders will directly destroy the atmosphere of the hermit fairy, and destroy the previous foundation in one sentence. I think this book is quite good. Okay, this aspect of I Am God is very good. The author wanted to lean on it but unknowingly wrote too much of the main character's verbal remarks. The description of money and sex was too straightforward, like visiting a brothel. It's such a pity that the more you read the paid chapters, the worse it becomes. It's a pity. My writing skills are really not good.

The writing is very good, but every time you are invincible, you have to poop half way, which makes me feel uncomfortable. Can you describe the protagonist more completely? The writing is entirely devoted to the portrayal of supporting roles and supporting roles.

I wrote it just to be funny, to watch a fool perform.

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