Doomsday Disasters: Build Shelters in Advance

This woman looks disgusting, so I won't watch it. It's so fucking rubbish. If you don't like it, just reject it. Why, are you afraid of retaliation? Would anyone with any sense get angry and retaliate because of being rejected? Still want to refuse or welcome? It's also a big comparison. Two-thirds of the chapter explains the apocalypse and doesn't mention anything serious.

The pace is getting slower and slower, and it feels like a running account, and I can't write down the ideas 🙂

I will spend 100 points specifically to give you a bad review. There are a lot of introductions and a lot of nonsense. Many of the introductions have already been written before. Just give an explanation of the results, and I still need to write them again. When I saw Chapter 27, we were still building a shelter in the early stages of the water apocalypse, and a female protagonist fell from the sky (high probability). I seriously doubted that the author created a female protagonist just for the sake of water word count. This is to say that there is still one year before the end of the world truly begins.

1. This looks a bit like a running account. Author, you'd better change it. 2. There is a bit of indifference - the supporting actor Li Yuanzhou has too many scenes. It is recommended to change the plot. 3. Reduce the description of the international background and generally use three to four hundred words at the beginning. 4. There are too many emotional scenes, I hope there will be less. 5. We should get to the point as soon as possible. According to the current progress book, one year is not enough. 6. There are problems with resource preparation - no books, no plant seeds, no breeding animals, and no diversified energy supply. 7. Armed forces are lacking, and hot and cold weapons should be arranged as soon as possible. 8. Personal physical fitness and personal force should be addressed. Hope the author can arrange it as soon as possible. The following are recommendations for several books of the same type, which the author can learn from: 1 "My Black Technology Shelter" 2 "I Can Upgrade the Shelter" 3 "Doomsday Disaster: Start by Building a Shelter" 4 "They and I Are All from the Doomsday"

I hope to write less emotional scenes. It is easy to write too embarrassing and not like the end of the world. You can write about the various kinds of human emotions in the end of the world. It is not just the evil of human nature. Don't be evil for the sake of evil. It will be richer if you write about all kinds of things.

After chasing more than half of it, I gave up. The author is really writing blindly. Those who have seen water have never seen such water. For example, in this chapter: the shelter's resources/firepower/materials/population, etc. Are many/very strong/very good, but the official version of Daxiahun is not bad either. Similar to this kind of writing, I read almost every chapter of 500,000 words. You can't do this in every chapter, right? There are also various self-questions and answers, rhetorical questions, sarcasm, statements, and examples. It's not that you can't write them. It's too much to write them in the same way in every chapter. Farewell

This book is really unreadable. There is no content at all. Every day is just water news, with women, no development or plot. I thought it would be better in the future, but after several days, there is no change at all, it is just water. The content every day is about international news. What happened today? What happened the day after tomorrow?

The last two are not very well written. You haven't finished writing them at home, so why should you write about them abroad? If you write about foreign countries, no one will read it. How about your home game in the country? A domestic author is enough for you to finish the novel. Later, if you continue to write foreign plots as you do now, then your novel will definitely fail. You haven't even laid out the domestic scenes yet.

It feels like it's written with a hammer in one thing and a stick in the other. There's no logic. It's written by a robot?

This Lin Yu can't be the heroine, right? Dog licking is annoying for both men and women, especially this kind of shameless dog who can't get rid of him and can't do anything to him.

Similar books are all about the protagonist building a small shelter, but this book is about the protagonist building a large shelter for 10,000 people. It's pretty good. Come on.

It's all booked. How can I say it? The first part is quite interesting, but the second part is all about the protagonist going out to save people. The protagonist is the boss of a large base, not the firefighting captain. The boss runs around the base every day to let the people below think what he thinks. Forget about the previous questions, when I saw this, I couldn't stand it anymore. I was afraid that they had not been attacked by monsters enough times, so I used the loudspeaker to ask them if they wanted it.

To be honest, based on the way you write it now, I think it will be terrible for you to subscribe later.

Promise me not to be a eunuch😃

I started watching it directly from Chapter 50. I felt pretty good and the plot was also good. But when I first started watching it, it was really a bit unclear who was the protagonist and his brother. Then I read so many pictures that the protagonist should not have a golden finger. As for the chapters before 50, after reading the comments in the comment area, I was a little afraid to read them.

It is recommended that the content be mainly about base construction and from the perspective of the protagonist, and there should be less description of natural and man-made disasters in various countries around the world, otherwise it will read like a running account.

During this time, the author, please sort out your thoughts. The protagonist's extraordinary ability is actually to make people feel safe in the apocalypse. There is no need to rush to expose this ability, because there is no need. The novel is already more than 1 million words long. The key now is these big scenes and plots, which is the problem of the base city of Guangdong and Guangxi. This is a major attraction. My personal suggestion is that it was not caused and was destroyed by those aberrations, because only in this way can the satellite city of the protagonist be completely restored.

Author, based on the comments of some readers in the comment area, I know that there must be something wrong with this novel in the first 20 chapters. First of all, it would be better if the heroine was cancelled, and then it is too late to officially enter the plot. There is no problem with the style of your novel. I personally feel that there is a problem with the details.

You have already written a million words. If you give up now, all your previous efforts will be in vain. Be patient and persevere. The writing style of your novel is particularly good. The protagonist not only has a trump card to save his life, but also writes about the plight of the official refuge and ordinary people. It can be said to be a bit of a group portrait, but I personally think that the protagonist does not need the current heroine.

As of now, I am not optimistic about the plot after you stopped updating. To be honest, I am really not optimistic about it.

Li Chenzhou? ? What is the use of his ability? ? ?

He was resurrected, but I didn't know it.

Author, you haven't written your main plot yet. You've been spinning around and working for the official base. To put it bluntly, you've been in an infinite loop. Your main plot is the prophecy of the protagonist's brother. For example, why hasn't the base in Shenzhen been built?

I have been waiting for you, the author, to write about the plot of the Shenzhen base that was not completed, but you have been writing about the post-apocalyptic workers.

Fake corpse, updated! I'll give you a two-month ticket to support me.

I've been trying to persuade you, author, but you didn't listen. The plot of your novel has been spinning in circles all the time, that is, you are a worker there in the apocalypse, and the protagonist is the leader of a base. He does whatever he does. I wrote many chapters, but the plot has not changed at all. You definitely can't write it like this.

Why did you fake the corpse? Did you change the person?

It's okay, come on, keep at it